Soul Twist

Altadena, CA

#35461 Oct 28, 2013
Silent Striker wrote:
<quoted text>
Is it just me or is anyone else getting case of deja vu here..
So what do think "Silent Striker" Good or Bad

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#35463 Oct 28, 2013
Soul Twist wrote:
<quoted text>
So what do think "Silent Striker" Good or Bad
"Let me show you a lil lesson on street
I'm the kind of rapper that never misses a beat Step up to me and you'll be feeling the heat
I'll have more sting then you in one of my feet
So you best sit down and take a seat"

Overall a decent basic drop... You should try using more complex rhymes. Be as original as you can.

I think I remember seeing something similar somewhere before

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#35464 Oct 28, 2013
Soul Twist wrote:
<quoted text>
So what do think "Silent Striker" Good or Bad
Try this out man..

Rhyme using these words:

Ready
Target
Smack
Brief

Try to make a 4 bar drop using the words listed above.. Remember get creative.. Have a good rhyme scheme. Try using different techniques to make your drop better like:

Wordplay
Punchlines
Metaphors
Transitions

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#35465 Oct 28, 2013
Silent Striker wrote:
<quoted text>Try this out man..

Rhyme using these words:

Ready
Target
Smack
Brief

Try to make a 4 bar drop using the words listed above.. Remember get creative.. Have a good rhyme scheme. Try using different techniques to make your drop better like:

Wordplay
Punchlines
Metaphors
Transitions
Get up and show off I've back to go on are you ready
Hold the trigger out steady consider me Freddie when I'm done ripping your belly

How can you run, out of spots to hide it's a fright especially when your my target
Cut your throat and stake your head leave a message on the blood stained carpet

Take this butchers knife and slice you open always wanted to see the inside of your back
What you lack is a spine take the knife and use your body to smack

Don't make me rush it'll be messy but if we get along I'll be quite brief
The bag that has your spleen was sold now owned by chief keef

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#35466 Oct 28, 2013
@ RRC

tht wasn't ment for ya man that's for soul twist
SomeRandomDude

United States

#35467 Oct 28, 2013
Don't worry about who it's for, just let the new guy jump into it. You guys love that game. :)

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#35468 Oct 28, 2013
True but I just tryin to help a new guy out
liquidflow

Mesa, AZ

#35469 Oct 28, 2013
man honestly u were never ready, i ax through opponets with a verbal machettii
entertain with these flows like ceddy, off tune dance to a diffrent medley

ur flows litterally get turned into the symbol of target, when my flows target,
safety better be on the nick barnett, or block that shit out like garnett

for speaking that weak smack, and showing off that weak rap,
man my flows dope, i speak crack, missiles only seek facts,

just a liitle brief , flow that exaust and leaves no relief,
butcher cows so fuck beef, little kids only cry, and suck teeth

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#35470 Oct 29, 2013
Silent Striker wrote:
@ RRC

tht wasn't ment for ya man that's for soul twist
Ik I just wanted to try ya know
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#35471 Oct 29, 2013
No hate or racism intended. Reply to rhyme jars post

Your body is all over the floor I'm trying to amalgamate you
But when I fix you up I realize you're so ugly imma have to assassinate you

You've been king on this thread for too long you've become an anachronism
But you've been butchered by the fast song that I sing so I can now tell the ladies that I killed em

I fucked him over ladies I rubbed his face all over my bottom
Now he's as limp as his dick, on the road without a spinal column

$20 in my pocket, I can buy a lighter and give him a deserving funeral
But I'm too cheap I can't spend 20 bucks on him I'm just not able

There he is, he's in a coffin all by himself in the lonely graveyard
I'll pretend it's GTA V, nick his body and dump him on losers boulevard

You told me to tell a story so here it is. You don't belong in Harlem you Muslim, you're a fake jacked up on helium. You're not following the curriculum and you know I work like a pendulum don't make me hit you in your jugulum. You don't belong here go back to Jerusalem. Don't make me fucking send you back the the asylum
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#35472 Oct 29, 2013
Sorry I meant Phaze the great

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#35473 Oct 29, 2013
lets battle again hannibal barca

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#35474 Oct 29, 2013
is anybody of age 13 years on this forum? what's your age hannibal
asylumkeeper5

UK

#35475 Oct 29, 2013
Okay okay. I sit back for a couple of days
and watch all your whack battles that end in different ways
Attack and defence though all your bullshit
But lets put fire to the wic
Im here new day lets pray for god to save your asses
Better run before bitches get smacked up with tennis rackets
People call me different cuz i do belive in demonds
Then they all end up screamin when all you bitches be sucking up on my semen
Take a machete to your skull
Even if you dont belive in wepons
And even if the blade is dull
Kitchen utensills used to my discression
Ive not got the time for all this im here for the fun
And occasionally to make motherf****rs like you run
Away from me
And eventually
Keep away from me
People used to call me zero
But not even my hero could keep me from this asylum
Im the keeper
And i have arisen
liquidflow

Mesa, AZ

#35477 Oct 29, 2013
man ur flows u speak honestly, u dreamin
this is crack, for u crack head u pheening
jacking off is the only time u semen,
this that sauna room flow, got u steaming
we could lol, at that blade thats dull,
game takes souls, take controls, take u whole,
take back what u stole, flames fry u cole ,
what has risen, is a man that hunts like kevin wisen, raps are the true definition,
of a real true poetrician, listen , or u wind up missing, ass u will be kissing, goodbye for those weak writtens, im old realiable like jason witten,
nasty what im spitting , when this louville slugger flow starts hitting,
Wolf

Harlan, IA

#35478 Oct 29, 2013
Im the big sh!t your poo little
Talkin to your b1tch im Dr Doolittle
The big bad Wolf?
To me you're just a minor fox
Red Riding is getting some of this wolfy Odder cock
liquidflow

United States

#35479 Oct 29, 2013
trash wolf
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#35480 Oct 29, 2013
You ain't prepared or even ready these maimers r steady
Well trained I'm spittin this 36 chambers deadly

I'mma nerd wit words versed to hurt wit the smart bits
Walkin on my comp like carpet my smart darts take aim at these targets

You talkin smack my craft will distribute yo body like crack
Ya whole scheme'll get broken apart like we playin Minecraft

So please drop a line that can combat this verbal Screech
These words'll beat in seconds this verbal Beast keepin it verbal brief
Silent Striker wrote:
<quoted text>
Try this out man..
Rhyme using these words:
Ready
Target
Smack
Brief
Try to make a 4 bar drop using the words listed above.. Remember get creative.. Have a good rhyme scheme. Try using different techniques to make your drop better like:
Wordplay
Punchlines
Metaphors
Transitions
liquidflow

United States

#35481 Oct 29, 2013
stepping to this court without knowing how to dribble, mr little,
think outside the box kid im a riddle, ur dibbles , and weak scribbles,are potraying ur weak chisels,
ur sculptures are left rippled, i christopher reeve cripple,the weak bristle, brittle, trying to keep it civil,ill bring missiles, so ur eyes better be vigil,
this is ur dismissle, ripping for me is a ritual, so wolf its sad u were the invidual, thats left in the world of the spiritual, ghost
liquidflow

United States

#35482 Oct 29, 2013
like that shini

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