lil biggy

UK

#35422 Oct 23, 2013
Phaze is awesome and liquidflow I'm gonna work on my multis and similies this week and ima post again hopefully next week

Lol make a thread where uce 2 rap and the rest comment or shit
And post the link !
liquidflow

Torrance, CA

#35424 Oct 23, 2013
ill wait for ur post or someone else and ill post another little ryhme
Death

Hyderabad, India

#35425 Oct 24, 2013
for you rapping is Greek
like seven days you're week (weak)

here to settle score even but you're odd;geek
you like to rap extreme but you're really meek

and don't add a mill in front of that
i'm your adversary; opposite of wack

you're the sh!t on this forum that's why you stink
some of you fellas tryna act G but are in tee colored pink
Shini

Korea

#35426 Oct 24, 2013
Death wrote:
for you rapping is Greek
like seven days you're week (weak)
here to settle score even but you're odd;geek
you like to rap extreme but you're really meek
and don't add a mill in front of that
i'm your adversary; opposite of wack
you're the sh!t on this forum that's why you stink
some of you fellas tryna act G but are in tee colored pink
Nice Meek Mill ref. Too bad he ducked Diz. He Instagramed that he had the money and he turned chicken.
Shini

Korea

#35427 Oct 24, 2013
I don't think of multis they come verbatim
Don't need to flash cards cause words slay them

So act hard and these words break em
They soft cause those verbs stay dumb

MCs with hearts so empty the herds just play guns
Phew Phew they get served wit ray guns

So if I hate on these turds of fake bums
it cause serve men/sermon wit words n let fate run

I'm dirty witta mind of a juvenile it just stays young
But I take out the trash of these fake ones.
Some Random Dude

Hayden, ID

#35428 Oct 24, 2013
I am posting this here so my next post is not missed.
Some Random Dude

Hayden, ID

#35429 Oct 24, 2013
http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TNB8...

I wrote out Phaze's reply already.

Also, Shini, how far away from Elite am I?
Soul Twist

Altadena, CA

#35430 Oct 24, 2013
Sup Y'all can I get some on how to rap a little better? If so thanx.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#35431 Oct 24, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
I am posting this here so my next post is not missed.
As far as vet and elite status go, I don't quite know but you're in my top 5. I consider HHH, Seanny T, You, Chi-town and Mulisha up there. Punchline wise maybe HHH has us all but with lyricism you're top notch. I can tell you draw some influence from IT.

Phaze and Bosco get honorable mentions.
lil biggy

UK

#35432 Oct 24, 2013
Shini who is HHH??
SomeRandomDude

United States

#35433 Oct 24, 2013
Explain that last part.
alter ego

UK

#35434 Oct 24, 2013
This is my other half ....

I spit cold ass disses
I got gold for Christmas
I fold with a straight fluss
Just to see some p ssy blush
When I have children
There will be a royal rush
So when I say hussh bitch just hush
I don't got time for much
Time is money
That's why I mush on my own time
I burn details of my own crime
way to stop this revolution
its your only solution
kill me at birth
Or seal me from the earth
Airtight or there's a possibility my lyrics might fuck with you mind
And set alight to you sanity
Profanity at such a gentle age
And I'm like wine
I get better when aged
So try to pick me off at this stage
Why its like jamming your dick in a key whole ??
Let's let it bleed cause scars leave memories
Memoradem remember me a cold emcee
I'm the rotten half
And I only rap with half my mind
So it takes halve the time
Some Random Dude

Hayden, ID

#35435 Oct 25, 2013
Phaze, I wrote out your reply.

http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TNB8...

Rapswipe, here is yours.

http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TKLE...

Shini, I would like a more indepth overview of where you think my skills are. Greatest strengths, greatest weaknesses and areas to improve. I think it would be cool to write examples for each strength and weakness. This way we can help new guys understand the depth and level of complexity that is involved in writing and rapping.

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#35436 Oct 25, 2013
Soul Twist wrote:
Sup Y'all can I get some on how to rap a little better? If so thanx.
Post a drop an we can give u feed back.. Lettin you know what needs improvement an what not..

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#35437 Oct 25, 2013
I wanna try something guys.. Give me a word/words tht I have to rhyme with.. Plus give me a bar limit..

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#35438 Oct 25, 2013
Silent Striker wrote:
I wanna try something guys.. Give me a word/words tht I have to rhyme with.. Plus give me a bar limit..
For those tht dont knw wat Im talkin bout:

I mean tht I want you too give me a word/words with a bar limit.(My drop will have to be rhymed or based around what ever words u gave me within the bar limit)

When I post my drop I will post at the very bottom a word/words for u too do the same within the same bar limit..

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#35439 Oct 25, 2013
Silent Striker wrote:
<quoted text>For those tht dont knw wat Im talkin bout:

I mean tht I want you too give me a word/words with a bar limit.(My drop will have to be rhymed or based around what ever words u gave me within the bar limit)

When I post my drop I will post at the very bottom a word/words for u too do the same within the same bar limit..
Car
Star
Regal
Fetal
Defame
Slay
Jumper
Long
Gnarl
8 bars

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#35441 Oct 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>
Car
Star
Regal
Fetal
Defame
Slay
Jumper
Long
Gnarl
8 bars
RRC is so lame riding in tht high box car I'll
assassinate him like I did F.D.R
Makin him a unrecognizable Tv Star like
Jimmy Hoffa

I'll defame his Dame for killin him after I
mutilate his ho's fetal
After ripping out her unborn child an feeding it 2 eagles

During their burials there will be HELL to pay as u raise from the grave
Doin the devils biding by slaying your loved love ones

I became stumped after the 3rd bar.. So thts all I could come up with..

New words:

sunder
zealous
beach
smoke
twin
theft
magic

8 Bars

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#35442 Oct 25, 2013
Silent Striker wrote:
<quoted text>
RRC is so lame riding in tht high box car I'll
assassinate him like I did F.D.R
Makin him a unrecognizable Tv Star like
Jimmy Hoffa
I'll defame his Dame for killin him after I
mutilate his ho's fetal
After ripping out her unborn child an feeding it 2 eagles
During their burials there will be HELL to pay as u raise from the grave
Doin the devils biding by slaying your loved love ones
I became stumped after the 3rd bar.. So thts all I could come up with..
New words:
sunder
zealous
beach
smoke
twin
theft
magic
8 Bars
Bar 1:
I'm as dope as two rappers, like a legend mc gettin'[sundered.]
I don't need reign, for me to let in thunder.

Bar 2:
This master'[zealousness] is what you bastards jealous with.
They think I'm sick, because I rap with casper's melanin.

Bar 3:
I keep bodying like I'm lyrically on the [beach]
I rap till I die because I have the heir to, I keep it condom free.

Bar 4:
Ya I thought I was out for a [smoke], I'm on for constantly.
She wants it rough, cause i'm johnson & johnson free.

Bar 5:
I'm so evil, just walking outside at might makes a nocturnal sin.
I have a dark side so insidious ya would've thought I had an evil fraternal [twin.]

Bar 6:
Ya never listen to the verses, ya skim to the chorus.
I'm stealing around here, I should be in jail for the theft's [orbit]

Bar 7:
I'm open minded, like my mind set is with out the door hinge.
Sh-ts outta control like an overflowing porcelain.

Bar 8:
I'm too fire for rock n roll, I'll turn that sh-t to granite.
I can make your rappers vanish without using any [magic..]

use theses words
amalgamate-means to combine
Anachronism-meaning out of time; old fashion
Spinal column
funeral
Graveyard
Asylum

In any order
6 bars

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#35443 Oct 25, 2013
I'm on fire constantly* haha that just ruined it but yea

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