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Shini

Seoul, Korea

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#35416
Oct 23, 2013
 
SomeRandomDude wrote:
Maybe you can E-Mail it, the longer mine stays up the less impact it has.
Seeing how my computer has no internet, I really can't.

I would just copy and save yours and just redrop it later. I will drop once I have a way to. It is finished and its thematic. It is mainly metaphorical and comparative.

I also have to type up a 100 bar drop and my birthday horrorcore drop. Besides I don't think many people checked it yet. I will probably will just create threads devoted to them.
Drewdog

Marion, IA

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#35417
Oct 23, 2013
 
Hey hey you all ain't gotta be gay I'm gunna show all you bitches and witchs up cuz u all live in ditches whit your stankan ass bitches and y'all ain't got no sizzle on any of your frizzles or rizzles and this song ain't no hack an that my friends is a fact holy shit did you see that girls rack they were as big as fuckin dinosoar and I looked an I heard them roar

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

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#35418
Oct 23, 2013
 
Flows so sick it'll stop your "rhythm"
Next up this fools not dead time to "kill em"

Multi for these rookie mcees tryna "cultivate"
Mutilate these fools will believe anything that's a lie tell them that they'll "dominate"

Phaze it's okay time to stop your "lesson"
They don get it: y'all taking his material and "guessing"

Multis up time to rate phaze is learning at a "rapid pace"
Shinis there just don drop enough for these "faggots taste"

SRD wants to learn just can't calm his "attitude"
Chi is on and off no one even know what his "raps can do"

SS has it within reach just no idea "where it is"
Hannibal wants to learn he doesn't "care to miss"
liquidflow

Torrance, CA

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#35419
Oct 23, 2013
 
PHAZE THAT WAS DECENT BUT LET ME AMAZE,
UR BULLETS DONT EVEN GRAZE,
U RATS TRYING TO GET OUT OF THIS MAZE,
BEFORE U CAN I SET A BLAZE
DAZE, LEFT IN HAZE, LEFT IN UR PHAZE,
STUCK STRANDED LEFT IN UR WAYS,

not finished

Since: Mar 13

Bronx, NY

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#35420
Oct 23, 2013
 
liquidflow wrote:
PHAZE THAT WAS DECENT BUT LET ME AMAZE,
UR BULLETS DONT EVEN GRAZE,
U RATS TRYING TO GET OUT OF THIS MAZE,
BEFORE U CAN I SET A BLAZE
DAZE, LEFT IN HAZE, LEFT IN UR PHAZE,
STUCK STRANDED LEFT IN UR WAYS,
not finished
Decent..? Haha ok lets go
I'm impressing these multis.
Leave you with an open mind when my enemies' skull bleeds.
I'm heavenly holy, I keep spitting to improve my destiny, only.
So heres my biblical story to reach my pinnacle gory.
phaze the great! I body more people than a livin' room orgy...
Let me give you a quick skit..

My multis are ad finitum.
all my rhymes are dope, I'm an addict in asylums.
Need to give me a "shot", I'll calm my head.
I'm gripping the daggers thinking of ripping these rappers but I hold the knife so tight until my palms will sweat.
I won't yet kill you, I'll slice your arms and legs.
duct tape your mouth so you won't alarm the press.
Haha torture you until you pass out from the pain, don't I harm the best :)
He awakes with pain.
luquidflow's like "please phaze the great, take the pain away, just take the away."
Not finished yet, I'll grip his head, bash it against the wall until I can rip his neck.
Give in yet? Nope... ii lets bury the body.
I'm merry and jolly.
I'll carry the corpse and throw him in this forums cemetery.
Its the middle of february and man its cold.
when the tournament is done, you'll be haunted by "Random's" ghost...

Haha im too bored I just free wrote
liquidflow

Torrance, CA

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#35421
Oct 23, 2013
 
ill post when i get home coo thats coo phaze
lil biggy

UK

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#35422
Oct 23, 2013
 
Phaze is awesome and liquidflow I'm gonna work on my multis and similies this week and ima post again hopefully next week

Lol make a thread where uce 2 rap and the rest comment or shit
And post the link !
liquidflow

Torrance, CA

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#35424
Oct 23, 2013
 
ill wait for ur post or someone else and ill post another little ryhme
Death

Hyderabad, India

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#35425
Oct 24, 2013
 
for you rapping is Greek
like seven days you're week (weak)

here to settle score even but you're odd;geek
you like to rap extreme but you're really meek

and don't add a mill in front of that
i'm your adversary; opposite of wack

you're the sh!t on this forum that's why you stink
some of you fellas tryna act G but are in tee colored pink
Shini

Seoul, Korea

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#35426
Oct 24, 2013
 
Death wrote:
for you rapping is Greek
like seven days you're week (weak)
here to settle score even but you're odd;geek
you like to rap extreme but you're really meek
and don't add a mill in front of that
i'm your adversary; opposite of wack
you're the sh!t on this forum that's why you stink
some of you fellas tryna act G but are in tee colored pink
Nice Meek Mill ref. Too bad he ducked Diz. He Instagramed that he had the money and he turned chicken.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

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#35427
Oct 24, 2013
 
I don't think of multis they come verbatim
Don't need to flash cards cause words slay them

So act hard and these words break em
They soft cause those verbs stay dumb

MCs with hearts so empty the herds just play guns
Phew Phew they get served wit ray guns

So if I hate on these turds of fake bums
it cause serve men/sermon wit words n let fate run

I'm dirty witta mind of a juvenile it just stays young
But I take out the trash of these fake ones.
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

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#35428
Oct 24, 2013
 
I am posting this here so my next post is not missed.
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

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#35429
Oct 24, 2013
 
http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TNB8...

I wrote out Phaze's reply already.

Also, Shini, how far away from Elite am I?
Soul Twist

Altadena, CA

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#35430
Oct 24, 2013
 
Sup Y'all can I get some on how to rap a little better? If so thanx.
Shini

Korea

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#35431
Oct 24, 2013
 
Some Random Dude wrote:
I am posting this here so my next post is not missed.
As far as vet and elite status go, I don't quite know but you're in my top 5. I consider HHH, Seanny T, You, Chi-town and Mulisha up there. Punchline wise maybe HHH has us all but with lyricism you're top notch. I can tell you draw some influence from IT.

Phaze and Bosco get honorable mentions.
lil biggy

UK

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#35432
Oct 24, 2013
 
Shini who is HHH??
SomeRandomDude

United States

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#35433
Oct 24, 2013
 
Explain that last part.
alter ego

UK

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#35434
Oct 24, 2013
 
This is my other half ....

I spit cold ass disses
I got gold for Christmas
I fold with a straight fluss
Just to see some p ssy blush
When I have children
There will be a royal rush
So when I say hussh bitch just hush
I don't got time for much
Time is money
That's why I mush on my own time
I burn details of my own crime
way to stop this revolution
its your only solution
kill me at birth
Or seal me from the earth
Airtight or there's a possibility my lyrics might fuck with you mind
And set alight to you sanity
Profanity at such a gentle age
And I'm like wine
I get better when aged
So try to pick me off at this stage
Why its like jamming your dick in a key whole ??
Let's let it bleed cause scars leave memories
Memoradem remember me a cold emcee
I'm the rotten half
And I only rap with half my mind
So it takes halve the time
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

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#35435
Oct 25, 2013
 
Phaze, I wrote out your reply.

http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TNB8...

Rapswipe, here is yours.

http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TKLE...

Shini, I would like a more indepth overview of where you think my skills are. Greatest strengths, greatest weaknesses and areas to improve. I think it would be cool to write examples for each strength and weakness. This way we can help new guys understand the depth and level of complexity that is involved in writing and rapping.

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

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#35436
Oct 25, 2013
 
Soul Twist wrote:
Sup Y'all can I get some on how to rap a little better? If so thanx.
Post a drop an we can give u feed back.. Lettin you know what needs improvement an what not..

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