freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#35083 Sep 24, 2013
That was nice rhyme jar but why is everyone ignoring me?
Anonymous

Pretoria, South Africa

#35085 Sep 24, 2013
Rhyme Jar wrote:
i'm best dressed spittin raps got all these rappers dead stressed
i'm freestylin ya'll coming with written raps when you battle me, defend well
ya'll are d!ckheads i get head for my d!ck cause i spit it like an egghead
you sleepin on me GOOD! your nappin' on your deathbed
crazy like hell kidnap your momma and leave ransom note with a death threat
by rappin i'm gettin my direct wealth grown old they're wishing why isn't he dead yet?
b!tch i'm not pac, biggie, or big L nor do i want to me like em'
i want to be myself and with my rhymes i wanna crush all MC's and leave em bleeding well!
please give me a feedback for this rap
Even thou i called you out, it's still a fresh rhyme
_BIG_Smalls_

Arlington Heights, IL

#35086 Sep 24, 2013
Boy yo ass gay
think you can rhyme
smellin' like booty
eating them tooty frooties
all up in bed with your momma
getting some head
boy she was wet
im a big threat, better step back before i take your breath
Then i hit your sister, she was so good. trying to get help
but i said bitch shut up and just go harder.
But then i just stuck it in farther
Anonymous

Altamonte Springs, FL

#35090 Sep 24, 2013
the rhymes I spit are sick,
runnin away with the crown call me mike vick,
im the king in throne yall stray dogs so go fetch the bone, make yo ol lady moan, kill the beat, that's first degree, plead the fifth, smoke ah fifth, bang bang..its a g thang, listen up take a seat mane, chevy with the wood grain and the candy paint, im paid in the escalade chillin in the shade, lockhart boy one of a kind, I just want a piece of the pie, even if that's means you gotta die, guess you gotta die, ya mom might cry but oh well, got cally for the wholesale, bad bitches in my hotel, wont snitch cuz I wont tell

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#35091 Sep 24, 2013
Hannibal Barca wrote:
That was nice rhyme jar but why is everyone ignoring me?
You're not being ignored, probably not worth someone's time to look over. But drop something again and I'll see if I can help you, I'll try my best to show yoy where you need to work on.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#35093 Sep 24, 2013
Jaden Sauter wrote:
Ha these kids think they're good
They ain't nothin close what I learned in the hood
Thinking they all bad when reality strikes
I should just let them be them and move on with my life
Wrong I'm gonna show them how it's done
Thinking your cool
I take you to school
Hope you learn something
While me and yo mom are gettin high
But don't try and rap and become mine
You can be my a b****
While I'm your rhyme
So remember want a rap battle
Then just go against me
This ain't even my best
I'm not to be messed with
Before someone gets hurt don't go against this
"go 'gainst this"
I'm so reckless.
Before you hit a 'punch', make a closed clenched fist.
To say you need help in rapping, is what you don't mention.
Forget the hood, on this forum you won't be able to be livin safe.
Some vets aren't even livin sane.
With a timid brain, homie you not even a scrimmage game.
Lemme talk with a linguistic slang.
You can say how im into S&M on how I pull up in a 'whip' and chains.
homie I pull up in that muscle, I'm brolic.
the only time you leave something broke, is by checking your wallet.
See I can defeat rookies with crafty punchlines.
You're so weak you're talking smack but didn't even smack me one time !
homie please give me feeback, but with better rappin'
The only time you in your hood is when you're wearing your sweater jacket...

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#35094 Sep 25, 2013
Jaden Sauter wrote:
Ha these kids think they're good
They ain't nothin close what I learned in the hood
Thinking they all bad when reality strikes
I should just let them be them and move on with my life
Wrong I'm gonna show them how it's done
Thinking your cool
I take you to school
Hope you learn something
While me and yo mom are gettin high
But don't try and rap and become mine
You can be my a b****
While I'm your rhyme
So remember want a rap battle
Then just go against me
This ain't even my best
I'm not to be messed with
Before someone gets hurt don't go against this
i'm out in the hail storm wearin my gangsta mack, apple jack
in my mouth with thoughts to rip your heart out like leaves of hackmatack
i don't need to be in my hood you can always feel my vibe like phantom's back
i don't need to be with aunties and mom's i get plenty girls i'm handsome tanned
i not cool cause i'm really cold, you don't really know
who you messin' with suppressin' these rookies is my hobby, i leave you really broke
my mind is some sh!t you can't decode like da vinci code
you see my rhymes are unpredictable you don't know whats next? like in windy road
i smoke you with my bare hands make fellas choke, like RAKIM in this sh!t i ain't no joke
i'm out! no need to break you more your already really broke
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#35096 Sep 25, 2013
You think you can Rap but all you can do is rhyme
Fool I've got better things to do, I don't have time
I'm a man who has to look out for his family
I can't even waste a dime, do you see?
Battling you is a just a simple walk over
I'll trample you on the Mars rover
Do you need a sample?
Like I've said earlier, I don't have time
You can't beat me even in your prime
You're like a fucking hobo
Even frodo knows where he's going
The ring takes him to mordoor (Mordor)
I'm so drunk I meant my door
This shit don't even matter to a whore
You're getting your ass kicked, do you need more!

I'm outta the class, got kicked out
Take a glass of wine & sip it thru my mouth
Might as well have a 9 course dine
Could invite that chick, she's fine
Shawty has double Ds
I might have to give her a fee for being to hot
Contributing to global warming ain't cool
But hell I'll do anything for this fool
It takes one to know one
But I'm a billionaire hun
I can toss out a Lamborghini
But all she really want is the D
Having a 3
plus 3 inch D
is good enough for me
Phaze yo your spits a waste of my time
Rapping on your levels a serious crime
I'm not even giving 10 percent on this spit
I'm just closing my eyes and taking a hit
I was at your level in nursery
Ill take you out and it'll be a mystery
You're rotting next to a fellow from ITE
But who you should really focus on is me
I'm a force to be recon with
I strike fast and hard like the blitzkrieg
People steal my life and call it assassins creed
Tomahawk chop is my death blow
But only one hit will make your blood flow
All this spit is is just rhyme not many insults
Oh no look the time, its 2:20
I better stop before I get into a frenzy
Fuck this shit, I'm done with this pussy

Is this okay or an I still not 'worth it' to you
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#35097 Sep 25, 2013
Rhyme jar stop trying to break someone's who's already broke
He's walking away crying, covered in his mamas protective cloak
Are you trying to provoke an innocent folk
My lines are so hot it'll give you a heatstroke
I'll just soak you in acid, you'll neutralize and that's it
It's so fast you can't even say bye, it'll dye your eyes, change its size leave you no time to cry
You're picking easy targets, picking on losers
Well, beggars can't be choosers
You're on the streets with no money to eat, surviving by drinking your own pee
To be honest you're the only one who does that now I feel bad, should I drop a penny?
You're a vet you're supposed to be experienced and good
But your just a fake, a copy something like Bollywood
Actually you and your rap are no different from them and theirs
Dancing around trees and sleeping in slums like slum dog millionaire
You're so hopeless like a hare stuck in a snare, it ain't fair
But life is not fair, it's about taking risks, taking dares
Here is a dare just for you, just wanna see how you fair
Cut off your hair glue it onto your vagina, call it a dick and say 'There!'
You should stop picking on SMALLS and get a real battle
Maybe grow a pair of BALLS and grab a saddle
Jump in a horse and learn how to ride
Go and divorce your wife and tell her you've died
Maybe she'll show some remorse or commit suicide
Stop sulking, trust me it's better that way
Maybe you can pass time by wanking to fifty shades of grey

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#35098 Sep 25, 2013
Hannibal Barca wrote:
Rhyme jar stop trying to break someone's who's already broke
He's walking away crying, covered in his mamas protective cloak
Are you trying to provoke an innocent folk
My lines are so hot it'll give you a heatstroke
I'll just soak you in acid, you'll neutralize and that's it
It's so fast you can't even say bye, it'll dye your eyes, change its size leave you no time to cry
You're picking easy targets, picking on losers
Well, beggars can't be choosers
You're on the streets with no money to eat, surviving by drinking your own pee
To be honest you're the only one who does that now I feel bad, should I drop a penny?
You're a vet you're supposed to be experienced and good
But your just a fake, a copy something like Bollywood
Actually you and your rap are no different from them and theirs
Dancing around trees and sleeping in slums like slum dog millionaire
You're so hopeless like a hare stuck in a snare, it ain't fair
But life is not fair, it's about taking risks, taking dares
Here is a dare just for you, just wanna see how you fair
Cut off your hair glue it onto your vagina, call it a dick and say 'There!'
You should stop picking on SMALLS and get a real battle
Maybe grow a pair of BALLS and grab a saddle
Jump in a horse and learn how to ride
Go and divorce your wife and tell her you've died
Maybe she'll show some remorse or commit suicide
Stop sulking, trust me it's better that way
Maybe you can pass time by wanking to fifty shades of grey
seriously fella you are improving a lot day by days good progress
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#35099 Sep 25, 2013
Rhyme Jar I don't know if that was sarcasm or the truth but ill take it as the truth. Thanks dude that really means a lot to me ;)

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#35100 Sep 25, 2013
Hannibal Barca wrote:
Rhyme Jar I don't know if that was sarcasm or the truth but ill take it as the truth. Thanks dude that really means a lot to me ;)
Now you've developed a whole lot, and your fillers are becoming less. I told you if you improve then i would battle you, so your up?

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#35101 Sep 25, 2013
Hannibal Barca wrote:
Rhyme Jar I don't know if that was sarcasm or the truth but ill take it as the truth. Thanks dude that really means a lot to me ;)
fella i'm not the person who passes sarcastic jokes, and really it wasn't a sarcasm i love the last line of that rap
"Maybe you can pass time by wanking to fifty shades of grey"
good going you'll improve a lot, and don't think i'm d!ckriding okay?

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#35102 Sep 25, 2013
Hannibal Barca wrote:
Rhyme jar stop trying to break someone's who's already broke
He's walking away crying, covered in his mamas protective cloak
Are you trying to provoke an innocent folk
My lines are so hot it'll give you a heatstroke
I'll just soak you in acid, you'll neutralize and that's it
It's so fast you can't even say bye, it'll dye your eyes, change its size leave you no time to cry
You're picking easy targets, picking on losers
Well, beggars can't be choosers
You're on the streets with no money to eat, surviving by drinking your own pee
To be honest you're the only one who does that now I feel bad, should I drop a penny?
You're a vet you're supposed to be experienced and good
But your just a fake, a copy something like Bollywood
Actually you and your rap are no different from them and theirs
Dancing around trees and sleeping in slums like slum dog millionaire
You're so hopeless like a hare stuck in a snare, it ain't fair
But life is not fair, it's about taking risks, taking dares
Here is a dare just for you, just wanna see how you fair
Cut off your hair glue it onto your vagina, call it a dick and say 'There!'
You should stop picking on SMALLS and get a real battle
Maybe grow a pair of BALLS and grab a saddle
Jump in a horse and learn how to ride
Go and divorce your wife and tell her you've died
Maybe she'll show some remorse or commit suicide
Stop sulking, trust me it's better that way
Maybe you can pass time by wanking to fifty shades of grey
hey fella was that a diss to me?

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#35103 Sep 25, 2013
Hannibal Barca wrote:
Rhyme jar stop trying to break someone's who's already broke
He's walking away crying, covered in his mamas protective cloak
Are you trying to provoke an innocent folk
My lines are so hot it'll give you a heatstroke
I'll just soak you in acid, you'll neutralize and that's it
It's so fast you can't even say bye, it'll dye your eyes, change its size leave you no time to cry
You're picking easy targets, picking on losers
Well, beggars can't be choosers
You're on the streets with no money to eat, surviving by drinking your own pee
To be honest you're the only one who does that now I feel bad, should I drop a penny?
You're a vet you're supposed to be experienced and good
But your just a fake, a copy something like Bollywood
Actually you and your rap are no different from them and theirs
Dancing around trees and sleeping in slums like slum dog millionaire
You're so hopeless like a hare stuck in a snare, it ain't fair
But life is not fair, it's about taking risks, taking dares
Here is a dare just for you, just wanna see how you fair
Cut off your hair glue it onto your vagina, call it a dick and say 'There!'
You should stop picking on SMALLS and get a real battle
Maybe grow a pair of BALLS and grab a saddle
Jump in a horse and learn how to ride
Go and divorce your wife and tell her you've died
Maybe she'll show some remorse or commit suicide
Stop sulking, trust me it's better that way
Maybe you can pass time by wanking to fifty shades of grey
your about to neutralize with my acid rhymes cause your flow's basic
you look in the mirror and see me behind yourself, there's a ghost waiting
i'm your mamma's p!imp sending her to houses half naked, these folks paying
every night your mamma walks in the str!ip club with @ss shakin' waitin' for a folk to take it
i'm rap therapist get what i'm sayin' the-rapist of it
stuck my d!ck in this game before you were even ejaculated,
you ain't gonna make it, cause curry @ss and curly hair keep fakin' no racist!
but it's true ain't it? the raps that i'm creating will leave you in grief like an ankle twist
fake like Bollywood? looks who's sayin', a TAMIL what about Tollywood?
i you are good for nothing get it good for no thing
a black @ss tamilian with no bling
wack @ss tamilian got 'punch' from my cold wrist
a crack @ss tamilian weak like a low string
a dope @ss american stung you with a bold sting!
this slumdog millionaire got high intellect
this slumdog smoke you today like a cigarette

was this good? don't take this rap seriously okay?

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#35104 Sep 26, 2013
This forum turned into a TRACK MEET.... the way CATS RUN THEY MOUTH
Two guns in hand... I CLAP HEAT
Like an UNSPAYED CAT....the way I SPRAY YOUR HOUSE
with your BASIC RHYMES
y'all WAISTING TIME
like sneezing away the BLOW....y'all just WAISTING LINES
True artist with the FLOW.... I be SKETCHING RHYMES
you'd a thought I was cheap..... how I be STRETCHING DIMES
With your MICKEY MOUSE RAPS
cuz y'all be talking to the cops.... bunch of MICKEY MOUSE RATS
That's why I keeps them STICKY MOUSE TRAPS
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#35105 Sep 26, 2013
Thanks rhyme jar. No it was not a diss but it was at the same time. Wait...? Anyway that was nice. I am writing one now
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#35106 Sep 26, 2013
Rhyme your first word in your rap is an error
It's you're not your, it's basic grammar
My rap is basic but I say it with swagger
When people hear it they all stand up and clamor
For your information clamor is a loud uproar
Your vocabulary is shit, it's under the fucking floor
You're digging your own grave, dig faster, dig more
Cuz Hannibal Barcas gonna bury the 'master' whore
You were once the master, the pimp
Now you're out of wits, dried up like a shrimp
Your pictures in museums titled the long lost chimp
You WERE so famous your face was on a blimp
An imp on a blimp, satans own offspring
Brother to ranswipe that ding-a-ling
Ranswipe you're not posting any materials
They have better rhymes than you on boxes of cereals
You're always looking for a battle,
more drama than serials
Ok I'll take you on
I have a thirst for the cursed (ghost)
Now guys it's time for the worst
It's my boy ranswipe, he's going first

Rhyme how did u know I speak Tamil? That's cool. Anyways I challenged both of you
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#35107 Sep 26, 2013
That ding a ling part is embarrassing but it came to my head first so I just typed it out. Haha.

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#35111 Sep 28, 2013
Hannibal Barca wrote:
Rhyme your first word in your rap is an error
It's you're not your, it's basic grammar
My rap is basic but I say it with swagger
When people hear it they all stand up and clamor
For your information clamor is a loud uproar
Your vocabulary is shit, it's under the fucking floor
You're digging your own grave, dig faster, dig more
Cuz Hannibal Barcas gonna bury the 'master' whore
You were once the master, the pimp
Now you're out of wits, dried up like a shrimp
Your pictures in museums titled the long lost chimp
You WERE so famous your face was on a blimp
An imp on a blimp, satans own offspring
Brother to ranswipe that ding-a-ling
Ranswipe you're not posting any materials
They have better rhymes than you on boxes of cereals
You're always looking for a battle,
more drama than serials
Ok I'll take you on
I have a thirst for the cursed (ghost)
Now guys it's time for the worst
It's my boy ranswipe, he's going first
Rhyme how did u know I speak Tamil? That's cool. Anyways I challenged both of you
okay don't teach me grammar, imma hammer you in head make ya stammer leave ya dead
homie you don't know me how much i can go crazy, i come with ill content, you taunted?
ME! btch i'll make you go bald with the razor i used to shave my balls with, no need to earn i was born rich
first i'mma tear you, your TORN stitch you again so i can rip you apart again, there's no problem then?
is there any? i'll kill you and forty men
like you, my heart is lead, you feel me silly?
i came on this forum dead, go on you can't kill me
HONESTLY!

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