freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)
Black tail

Ashburn, VA

#34898 Sep 7, 2013
I was inside the womb with mic on f@ckn pulm i will be inside the womb with our skin in my f@ckn pulm

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#34899 Sep 7, 2013
Sirhc wrote:
Im new to this site
Hope y'all dont bite
Just thought i'd give it a try
Rap is the shit
Its not just about doin drugs or gettin high
Its about tellin story
So when i come in this shits about to get stormy
You Im hungry but I wont Bite..were LAUGHING AT YA CYPHERS
cuz Im the Main Course and Ur just ..CRAPPY APPETIZERS.
I'm MEAT AND POTATOES Ur ..LIGHT, CREAM ON A BAGEL.
We'll throw a party in your mouth put ICE CREAM IN YA CAKEHOLE.

haha ...No hate bro..welcome to the site

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#34900 Sep 7, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
http://www.reverbnation.com/se annyt
HHH A.k.a. TRE TRU finally finished the master track for our song called COLD AS ICE, go listen to that sh!t now errybody! haha. i wanna know what everyone thinks of it. both positive and negetive. i can handle all the critisism. keep 1 thing in mind: we recorded my stuff in only a few takes cuz i didnt have alotta time haha. anyways, check it out and feedback here! thanks!
have you guys heard this yet?.. Is it any good? feedback is returned, so LMK wut you think than drop me a link to what you want me to feed also.. holla
Seanny T

Calgary, Canada

#34901 Sep 7, 2013
Word we want feedback on our track lol
Bosco

United States

#34902 Sep 7, 2013
Who got bars like me?? Lol y'all can't fuck with this kinda shit.

I READ THE FINE PRINT FIRST! KEEP IN MIND, THIS VERSE REDIFINE SCRIPTURES! HE DESIGN'S PICTURE'S VIA RHYME'S, LISTENER'S NEED TO TRY IMAGERY! I'M VIVIDLY GIVIN THESE TIMID WEAKS MIMICKRY! LICKIN THESE SWISHA LEAVE'S, SIMMER TREE'S! PERFECT LINE'S, LIKE SYMMETRY! WORTHLESS RHYME'S VERSUS MY INTENSITY GET'S TO BE RELENTLESSLY "BLEH" TO ME! CRAFTILY LAUGH as i MASTA A PIECE! Cuz i ACTUALLY RAP, nd with TACTICAL EASE! CASUALLY STACKIN THESE CASUALTIES! SURPASSIN ME HAS AN IRRATIONAL THEME! Cuz I'm SMASHIN THESE TRACKS TILL they CRACK AT THE SEEM'S! LAUGHIN, IN FACT I CAN'T HAPPEN TO BREATHE! If these WHACK'S think they HAVE any CHANCE TO COMPETE!

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#34903 Sep 7, 2013
Bosco wrote:
Who got bars like me?? Lol y'all can't fuck with this kinda shit.
I READ THE FINE PRINT FIRST! KEEP IN MIND, THIS VERSE REDIFINE SCRIPTURES! HE DESIGN'S PICTURE'S VIA RHYME'S, LISTENER'S NEED TO TRY IMAGERY! I'M VIVIDLY GIVIN THESE TIMID WEAKS MIMICKRY! LICKIN THESE SWISHA LEAVE'S, SIMMER TREE'S! PERFECT LINE'S, LIKE SYMMETRY! WORTHLESS RHYME'S VERSUS MY INTENSITY GET'S TO BE RELENTLESSLY "BLEH" TO ME! CRAFTILY LAUGH as i MASTA A PIECE! Cuz i ACTUALLY RAP, nd with TACTICAL EASE! CASUALLY STACKIN THESE CASUALTIES! SURPASSIN ME HAS AN IRRATIONAL THEME! Cuz I'm SMASHIN THESE TRACKS TILL they CRACK AT THE SEEM'S! LAUGHIN, IN FACT I CAN'T HAPPEN TO BREATHE! If these WHACK'S think they HAVE any CHANCE TO COMPETE!
Okay thats a Rerun!!

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#34904 Sep 7, 2013
My verse is blazin, Fawk regurgitating impersonators,
I spit that Swine Flu Swine Fools turn to Bacon,
Kid you aint worth my patience, when lead pop's
I dont need a red dot to murk ya faces head shot
So learn ya place kid you aint in turn for greatness
U all rhyme scheme no fine themes ya words are baseless
that virgins fakin, Hero's SUPER Im turning Saiyan,
I spurn it flagrant never herd of this murdered pagan.
This scripts Tru... Urn-ing this noob burning ya pages.
that Turd is saying, how he thinks his versions amazing?
Ur Mistaken earn Ur Status Ya still learnin the basics..
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#34905 Sep 7, 2013
Seanny T your song it's catchy and cool. I like it but there's no punch. It's as if your saying for the sake of it. You have to really mean then it'll be awesome. But good song bro
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#34906 Sep 7, 2013
Now imma give you an example, a rap
Hold on, lemme grab my cool cap
Now I'm in my special mood
I don't mean to come of rude
But I'll cut you and grind you
But who would care, only a few
Your spits are a joke
It's so lame it'll give me a stroke
You should just stop, you should vanish
You should move to Brazil and speak Spanish
Listen, you're a failure in everyone's eyes
So just shut up and say your goodbyes
Fighting this lost battle isn't courage
Don't waste your time on that
Instead get you lazy ass up and get to the fridge
Now I won't waste my time and yours
Cuz anymore will be bitching
And that shits just boring
Now I bet there'll be so many replies
There'll always be hater with brains the size of flies
But they can't do anything to me
Cuz I'm ten times better, plus 3

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#34907 Sep 8, 2013
Sirhc wrote:
Im new to this site
Hope y'all dont bite
Just thought i'd give it a try
Rap is the shit
Its not just about doin drugs or gettin high
Its about tellin story
So when i come in this shits about to get stormy
Hello sir let me kick an introduction
Im deadly like a volcanic eruption but
worst than a corrupt European politician

When my fluxion starts it'll cause mass
confusion like a bomb panic cuz Im
Hispanic nan Im just Satanic outta my
way cause I sunk the Titanic

No hate man... Good to have ya here..

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#34908 Sep 8, 2013
DJ HellNo wrote:
<quoted text>
Hello sir let me kick an introduction
Im deadly like a volcanic eruption but
worst than a corrupt European politician
When my fluxion starts it'll cause mass
confusion like a bomb panic cuz Im
Hispanic nan Im just Satanic outta my
way cause I sunk the Titanic
No hate man... Good to have ya here..
Most of ya post are full of hypes,nice structure,but no disses,its to weak for a battle and stuff,so if ya could develop ya disses,ya style will be really gud,and u could be a horrorcore battler.peace.

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#34909 Sep 8, 2013
-rapSwipe- wrote:
<quoted text>
Most of ya post are full of hypes,nice structure,but no disses,its to weak for a battle and stuff,so if ya could develop ya disses,ya style will be really gud,and u could be a horrorcore battler.peace.
Thnx.. Btw I wasnt tryin to make it a battle rap.. But I do have some good disses in prevous posts of mine (just not these) I good with horrorcore just waiting for the tournament to start up

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#34910 Sep 8, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
http://www.reverbnation.com/se annyt

HHH A.k.a. TRE TRU finally finished the master track for our song called COLD AS ICE, go listen to that sh!t now errybody! haha. i wanna know what everyone thinks of it. both positive and negetive. i can handle all the critisism. keep 1 thing in mind: we recorded my stuff in only a few takes cuz i didnt have alotta time haha. anyways, check it out and feedback here! thanks!
Loved it. I guess I should start and try to make music. Any points or tips for a newbie?(Like what to use to put music together, where to find or make the beat, uhh lyric pointers, and software that's free if possible) if you can help that be awesome thanks.

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#34911 Sep 8, 2013
I'm falling from the top of a mountain can't stop my self
Tumbling down this cliff of self respect and shame back to down to feeling the same

This is the end and I'm lost with no words just life staring me down telling me this is what you've found

Just good friends but no accomplishments I'm lost without a paddle and it's time to make amends

Can't move mountains nor can I make the climb
Miley Cyrus was wrong I'm at the bottom slopes to steep never know what id find

I've been up and down doing this year round but improving meekly
Now I've lost it and my skills in a ocean sinking steeply

This verse isn't even good can't figure out what to write
Despite my previous drop I've had I'm closed up and lost my light

Pick axe up one brick at a time seems like everyone wants to take a swing at my mind
Try to break me down make my emotions grumpy shot after shot till I'd seemingly die

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#34912 Sep 8, 2013
Niatroh wrote:
I'm falling from the top of a mountain can't stop my self
Tumbling down this cliff of self respect and shame back to down to feeling the same
This is the end and I'm lost with no words just life staring me down telling me this is what you've found
Just good friends but no accomplishments I'm lost without a paddle and it's time to make amends
Can't move mountains nor can I make the climb
Miley Cyrus was wrong I'm at the bottom slopes to steep never know what id find
I've been up and down doing this year round but improving meekly
Now I've lost it and my skills in a ocean sinking steeply
This verse isn't even good can't figure out what to write
Despite my previous drop I've had I'm closed up and lost my light
Pick axe up one brick at a time seems like everyone wants to take a swing at my mind
Try to break me down make my emotions grumpy shot after shot till I'd seemingly die
"try to break me down make my emotions grumpy shot after shot till I'd seemingly die."
Everyday is another reason he cries.

They say look for the light after death, but its too much for me, its leaving me blind.
My dreams are crushed, they say I won't make it, they keep sleeping on me while every night my sleeping's denied.

Disturb this outter beast will awake the inner demons inside.
Oh heavenly father, closing my hands for prayer is the only thing that keeps me alive.

I'll keep my enemies bothered, I know who I am without seeing my eyes.
I'm not wack, its not bedtime yet, no sleeping on me so keep it in mind.

I'm going all 'balls out' like the semen in guys.
I'm not lion(lyin), I mean it when I say you'll find ' wild nature' deep in my pride!

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#34913 Sep 8, 2013
Phaze the Great wrote:
<quoted text>"try to break me down make my emotions grumpy shot after shot till I'd seemingly die."
Everyday is another reason he cries.

They say look for the light after death, but its too much for me, its leaving me blind.
My dreams are crushed, they say I won't make it, they keep sleeping on me while every night my sleeping's denied.

Disturb this outter beast will awake the inner demons inside.
Oh heavenly father, closing my hands for prayer is the only thing that keeps me alive.

I'll keep my enemies bothered, I know who I am without seeing my eyes.
I'm not wack, its not bedtime yet, no sleeping on me so keep it in mind.

I'm going all 'balls out' like the semen in guys.
I'm not lion(lyin), I mean it when I say you'll find ' wild nature' deep in my pride!
"I'm going all 'balls out' like the semen in guys.
I'm not lion(lyin), I mean it when I say you'll find ' wild nature' deep in my pride!"
Friends and foes both thinking they sly

When they try to go behind my back
In fact this is track I'm already done your on your 6th lap

Batter and maimed this rappers been shattered and stained
Pictures from the battles he's slain and the ones where he was a little more tamed

Wolverine up in this place anger me and your gonna die
Lyrically gonna slay people tonight

Your a kite your floating in the air Benjamin Franklin is your holder next you will fry
Your outta luck this rappers found his stuff notebook and pen in hand step up and give it a try

I am reddick and you gonna die your that monster I can see you in the dark
Or worse call me tony stark or that one man whose first name is Clark

Lets split the detail and give you the facts again I'm am superman try to break me down and you'll end up without your gents (balls)

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#34914 Sep 9, 2013
any one up for battle? go first
annoyin artist

Naugatuck, CT

#34915 Sep 9, 2013
ill battle in an hour or so rhyme jar.

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#34916 Sep 9, 2013
@annoyin artist i'll reply you tomorrow i 'm going to sleep i had a really tough day..

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#34918 Sep 9, 2013
Ill battle ya sirhc.. Lets see wat ya got

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