freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

Since: Aug 13

detroit MI

#34659 Aug 26, 2013
no time for replys, sick as a motha fuc$in fox whos sly, tell everyone whos ever seen a gay man cry, to dry their motha fuc$in tears or go ahead and die,
cuz theres no cryin in the rap game, do you even know your rap name, every rapper is different and same, but only when the rapper is high and tame,
look at me now rhymes comin out tellin you a story, whos boy has an imaginary friend who is boring, listen up now one i tell you this crap, im the only white guy whos name is bone man
Some Random Dude

United States

#34660 Aug 26, 2013
/facepalm

313, you can't be lyrical, it's not gonna work. You have to be a storyteller.

Since: Aug 13

detroit MI

#34661 Aug 26, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
/facepalm

313, you can't be lyrical, it's not gonna work. You have to be a storyteller.
so id be a good storyteller like how rapping or just talking
Some Random Dude

United States

#34662 Aug 26, 2013
Have a nice smooth and relaxing flow.
Some Random Dude

United States

#34663 Aug 26, 2013
Shini, it's gonna be a mixed view... But I got it finished. Kind of iffy about it though. :/
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#34664 Aug 26, 2013
Rhyme Jar wrote:
<quoted text>
i'm not d!ck riding but shini that was some dope bars
Thanks. I didn't know how it was going to turn out cause I was sleep deprived.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#34665 Aug 26, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Shini, it's gonna be a mixed view... But I got it finished. Kind of iffy about it though.:/
Well just drop whatever you have.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#34666 Aug 27, 2013
313 Detroit wrote:
<quoted text>
Wtf you talkin about, talkin bout your dïck, your a gay aśs fat man your real real sick
Iv got two tickets to the next icp show, after ther the show, my dic@ is what your gonna blow, ok look ill tell you what, ill let you beat me after you lick my butt. Iv got a question for you and answer right. I had sex with your mom ain't she a dike. Nig$a ima ride my bike over your te$ticals. Then I'll slap you like a bitch make Shur you have bresticals. I'm no slim shady but he was my icon, why don't we have peace let bigons be bigons
F@ck all these gay ass lyrics, b!tch ya fakin wit limericks you playin
I'll make yo head kiss the pavement to just dish a statement
You sound like "just a man" some square writin bout puttin d!ck in ass
I'm for gay rights but not gay writes, give "this" craft and quit skippin class
The Professor hittin em from LONG DROPS HERE, be craftin punches like I've GONE TOP TIER, this understudy PALMS WROUGHT FEARS, cuz my BOMBS BROUGHT FEAR
You inventin words, they sound like disentary, I might wanna keep my distance fairy,
And keep that distance varied knowing you eloquently seek d!ck like one in the DICKtionary
Writs diss n' buried, furious blows sendin ya body grav gettin suffocated by a flurry of body jabs, the fury hits so hard docs bringin the body cast, but ya body's craft pronounced ya dead on sight leavin ya face so much trauma cuz ya shoddy craft felt the infliction of a shotty blast, now that's the definition of a BODYBAG!

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#34667 Aug 27, 2013
-rapSwipe- wrote:
Over flow,
comatose,
camera pose,
capture foes,
cuttin toes,
slappin hoes,
catchin cold.
laundry fold.
all this are 3 sylable multies,like how i have shown you make 4 bars,dont be too focused on the words,just make them ryme.
Crime be,
crime scene.
watch how i use them,
"Ma crew legalIssues will be the were the crime be,
cause we are like yellow tapes,we always present at a crime scene".
Now its your turn,4 bars with the top multies.
Hmm I know your trying to help the guy but some of those Multies are off. Just sayin

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#34668 Aug 27, 2013
Hip Hop Hero wrote:
<quoted text>
Hmm I know your trying to help the guy but some of those Multies are off. Just sayin
yeah,i didnt really put ma mind to it thou,it was late and i was tired.But thanks @tre.

Since: Jan 13

Location hidden

#34669 Aug 27, 2013
-rapSwipe- wrote:
<quoted text>
oh seriously?I thought i was the only african here.LOL
I thought the same thing to, I live right at the border of Ghana to Nigeria in Lagos
Iziana

Moultrie, GA

#34670 Aug 27, 2013
If you cant read this I guess you blind but let me talk it in genral that's your kind I spit lyrics not freestyles cause that's not my type how you like me now. Bitchhh

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#34672 Aug 27, 2013
MrFlames wrote:
<quoted text>
I thought the same thing to, I live right at the border of Ghana to Nigeria in Lagos
oh really!Me am in accra the capital of ghana.

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#34673 Aug 27, 2013
yeah! 313? what you thought you would be like eminem
nope! cause i'm gonna choke you with my semen in-
your mouth, your like drake? yup your fake like him,
you "started from the bottom" but you'll not be at the top
your the fella we should blame for the murder of hip hop
my fuking "motto" is to get your dreams "over"
i'll turn this sh!t over you like jay z on takeover
today you'll get buried "underground" but yo'll not be called king,
and "I'm goin' in" like a sharp knife through your spine
and when your gone don't hesitate to leave your girl to me "we'll be fine"
i'll "take care" of her,
i make people go crazy like a buy 1 get 1 free offer
and i'm still killin' it its not even "best i ever had" made
your totally and brutally ruined it's like your half dead
every day i'm gettin' cleverer
i'll end this rap with a midfing to you i can do this "Forever"!

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#34674 Aug 27, 2013
@ 313 Detroit
this is for you

yeah! 313? what you thought you would be like eminem
nope! cause i'm gonna choke you with my semen in-
your mouth, your like drake? yup your fake like him,
you "started from the bottom" but you'll not be at the top
your the fella we should blame for the murder of hip hop
my fuking "motto" is to get your dreams "over"
i'll turn this sh!t over you like jay z on takeover
today you'll get buried "underground" but yo'll not be called king,
and "I'm goin' in" like a sharp knife through your spine
and when your gone don't hesitate to leave your girl to me "we'll be fine"
i'll "take care" of her,
i make people go crazy like a buy 1 get 1 free offer
and i'm still killin' it its not even "best i ever had" made
your totally and brutally ruined it's like your half dead
every day i'm gettin' cleverer
i'll end this rap with a midfing to you i can do this "Forever"!

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#34675 Aug 27, 2013
@313

When I bring bars to my enemies thats when you know I'm about to capture foes.
You from the 313 but you ain't use to being down with badder flows.
I'm cold hearted, so when I put my heart into my raps thats when you will be found with catching colds.
I spit close to a machine gun so when i'm on the mic my bars will mount to clap this hoe.
my flows come off the ocean so when I start rhyming i'll start to drown this rapper's flow.

that was 4 syllables but first get use to 2 and try a little 3 and then when you get comfortable try using 3 only. Then you can go with 4 when you get the hang of 3 and feel like you don't need to work on it. But try not to curse a lot unless it necessary for a punchline, simile, metaphor, wordplay, or for your multi. So take our help and time with practicing will make you better.
Mad jack

Sheffield, UK

#34677 Aug 27, 2013
mad_Mike wrote:
Krazy im just tryn to make this forum interestn
You think you this, you think your that but personally I think you look like a rat.

When you wake up you think your hot, my opinion I think you look like the grudge with your hair full of nots.

But il leave it here, your moma left change, so here's a box of tissues to wipe your tears.

Since: Aug 13

detroit MI

#34678 Aug 27, 2013
Mad jack wrote:
<quoted text>You think you this, you think your that but personally I think you look like a rat.

When you wake up you think your hot, my opinion I think you look like the grudge with your hair full of nots.

But il leave it here, your moma left change, so here's a box of tissues to wipe your tears.
haha thats what i thought, i really think its funny that you think your hot, to technique to match your flow, i guess rhyming is all you know.

putting in words is just the first part, cuz your flow smells worse then my grandads fart, your flows need to come strait from heart, youll get nowhere here have this shopping cart, cuz after this youll be left with nothing but the clothing on your back, you aint got nothing to keep you on track,, honestly i think your trying to hard, cuz it took you that long just to rhyme a few bars. heres a tip, keep to yourself with that weak as sh!t cuz nobody wants to listen to a man with a cl!t.

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#34680 Aug 27, 2013
313 Detroit wrote:
<quoted text>
haha thats what i thought, i really think its funny that you think your hot, to technique to match your flow, i guess rhyming is all you know.
putting in words is just the first part, cuz your flow smells worse then my grandads fart, your flows need to come strait from heart, youll get nowhere here have this shopping cart, cuz after this youll be left with nothing but the clothing on your back, you aint got nothing to keep you on track,, honestly i think your trying to hard, cuz it took you that long just to rhyme a few bars. heres a tip, keep to yourself with that weak as sh!t cuz nobody wants to listen to a man with a cl!t.
yeah! 313? what you thought you would be like eminem
nope! cause i'm gonna choke you with my semen in-
your mouth, your like drake? yup your fake like him,
you "started from the bottom" but you'll not be at the top
your the fella we should blame for the murder of hip hop
my fuking "motto" is to get your dreams "over"
i'll turn this sh!t over you like jay z on takeover
today you'll get buried "underground" but yo'll not be called king,
and "I'm goin' in" like a sharp knife through your spine
and when your gone don't hesitate to leave your girl to me "we'll be fine"
i'll "take care" of her,
i make people go crazy like a buy 1 get 1 free offer
and i'm still killin' it its not even "best i ever had" made
your totally and brutally ruined it's like your half dead
every day i'm gettin' cleverer
i'll end this rap with a midfing to you i can do this "Forever"!

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#34682 Aug 27, 2013
Rhyme Jar wrote:
<quoted text>
yeah! 313? what you thought you would be like eminem
nope! cause i'm gonna choke you with my semen in-
your mouth, your like drake? yup your fake like him,
you "started from the bottom" but you'll not be at the top
your the fella we should blame for the murder of hip hop
my fuking "motto" is to get your dreams "over"
i'll turn this sh!t over you like jay z on takeover
today you'll get buried "underground" but yo'll not be called king,
and "I'm goin' in" like a sharp knife through your spine
and when your gone don't hesitate to leave your girl to me "we'll be fine"
i'll "take care" of her,
i make people go crazy like a buy 1 get 1 free offer
and i'm still killin' it its not even "best i ever had" made
your totally and brutally ruined it's like your half dead
every day i'm gettin' cleverer
i'll end this rap with a midfing to you i can do this "Forever"!
Hahaha this is cool how you used drake songs as references to your rap, but I hope you know that semen is pronounced as (sea-min) so it technically didn't rhyme with eminem.

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