freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

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yoyoyo

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#33863
Jul 5, 2013
 
Shini wrote:
YOYOYO
Quit tryin to force multis out of ya yin-yang
Ya never get a pass ya not on Shin's plane/Shin's plain
It's over for you cet la vi, this is the end game
That whole style will get buckled over when I send pain
Ya pen game's been lame and no Shin ain't been tame
Kill ya methodological- Shin's game's insane
I can tell ya flippin feedin off Shin's plain pen game
But ya not the weather man, ya never end Shin's reign/Shin's rain
Ya not in Shin's rank, not worthy of Shin's stank
But ya truely in file when I say "ya been rank"
If I'm battlin ya say Shin thanks
Cause ya not worth the time to process way Shin Thinks
I hold the throne till I'm dust and bones
Even when I'm old ya getting knocked down with Shin's cane
Be sniffin my lines we all know ya addicted to Shin's 'Cane
Now quit tryin to ride my d!ck only girls get Shin's Cane
Ya step to greatest best expect "action" maine
Like a rapist I'll leave this p!@sy fractured maimed
Floor herb lames, imma beat ya and the outcomes set
You force wordplay like teachers with the alphabet
Bet I'mma make shin break, like sprained knees
Take you out and drop you in water like fake teeth
Pure cut caine, i sure bust flames
Conclusion 'lands' on you ain't 'fly' you're just 'plain/plane'
You hold nothing but when i'm cockin'the chrome
Head West like Jigga start watching the throne
Yoyoyo the real king of topix is known
Your crown ain't bulletpruff send shots at your dome
Like a football stadium
Turn you vegetable with a mush soft cranium

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

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#33864
Jul 5, 2013
 
Seanny T wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch? feature=player_embedded&v= cWd0hCqcqLg#at=170
SHINI heres a perfect example for the VIDEO GAME TOURNEY! HOLY CHRIST IS THIS EPIC! shizzy sixx is a boss, and this is straight up fire. level 5 is by far the best. that god of war beat is killer, and some of those bars are DEADLY. damn. im hella impressed by it, EVERYONE here should watch this as well, even if ur not into video games lol. some dope references for sure.
Tht shit was good... He used alot of games tht I never heard of..

Since: Mar 13

Staten Island, NY

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#33865
Jul 5, 2013
 
yoyoyo wrote:
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Floor herb lames, imma beat ya and the outcomes set
You force wordplay like teachers with the alphabet
Bet I'mma make shin break, like sprained knees
Take you out and drop you in water like fake teeth
Pure cut caine, i sure bust flames
Conclusion 'lands' on you ain't 'fly' you're just 'plain/plane'
You hold nothing but when i'm cockin'the chrome
Head West like Jigga start watching the throne
Yoyoyo the real king of topix is known
Your crown ain't bulletpruff send shots at your dome
Like a football stadium
Turn you vegetable with a mush soft cranium
Damn this is just sick, the second line amazed me. Just because he dissed ya and pissed ya off you have to grant greatness when you see it and this is just sick. I'm going to leave it at that and I hope you stick around and not leave like last time. I enjoy your raps
yoyoyo

Toms River, NJ

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#33866
Jul 5, 2013
 
Phaze the Great wrote:
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Damn this is just sick, the second line amazed me. Just because he dissed ya and pissed ya off you have to grant greatness when you see it and this is just sick. I'm going to leave it at that and I hope you stick around and not leave like last time. I enjoy your raps
respect! my bad for not mentioning you. i planned on it but i dissed so many people you slipped my mind. if your down i'd want to battle sometime

Since: Mar 13

Staten Island, NY

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#33867
Jul 5, 2013
 
Some other time. It seems like you have a lot on your hands lol no point of making the burden heavier than it already is.

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

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#33868
Jul 5, 2013
 
lol that verse against shini was good yoyoyo, but that shit you did agaist topix members was not a " diss ", if it was, I would of spitt back at you a looooooong time ago, just saying lol, that was garbage lol, but that was a good verse u did against shini just now though

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

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#33869
Jul 5, 2013
 
yoyoyo wrote:
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Floor herb lames, imma beat ya and the outcomes set
You force wordplay like teachers with the alphabet
Bet I'mma make shin break, like sprained knees
Take you out and drop you in water like fake teeth
Pure cut caine, i sure bust flames
Conclusion 'lands' on you ain't 'fly' you're just 'plain/plane'
You hold nothing but when i'm cockin'the chrome
Head West like Jigga start watching the throne
Yoyoyo the real king of topix is known
Your crown ain't bulletpruff send shots at your dome
Like a football stadium
Turn you vegetable with a mush soft cranium
Nice drop man..

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

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#33874
Jul 6, 2013
 
what's good everybody, did yoyoyo shut down the forum or something, its dead as hell lol.

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

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#33875
Jul 6, 2013
 
Nothin much.. I guess so lol its bern dead for over 12 hours until now..
Seanny T

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#33876
Jul 6, 2013
 
Soooooo intoxicated right now....lmao

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

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#33877
Jul 6, 2013
 
Seanny T wrote:
Soooooo intoxicated right now....lmao
NOT FAIRRRR ( going to raid my mom's percocet stash )
Anonymous

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#33878
Jul 6, 2013
 
the rapping god wrote:
<quoted text> hey if you and my mom banged how do you know here she lives oh wait now i rember you are a stocker im little but your the one with gay jokes
ok kid listen right up. I'm more mature than that kid and I just want to sincerely apologise for speaking rationally obscene about your mother. yeah I do hate your fu<king guts but I ain't want to keep on sweating on your moms.
Anonymous

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#33879
Jul 6, 2013
 
the rapping god wrote:
@Luc-ID
look in the mirror your so gay Michael Jackson wouldent even touch you but i didnt bang your mom cuse have you seen her teeth she made you look like a beaver ill finish it off with a little screw you
look in the symmetrical mirror on the wall can it possibly get any clearer,
you continuously contradict yourself saying how you be fronting but repetatively stand still gawking at my rear,
talking all that diarrhoea, just a gruesome penis fulfilling with nothing more than gonorrhoea,
just for this everlasting record Michael Jackson ain't never fondled with kids, just portrayed a 'man in the mirror',
listen to me as I kill you like a foreigner,
sharp talker, sour thinker vigorous "see real/cereal/serial killer" with my vision locked from the cornea,
this is just the liner notes, the epilogue comes later,
you know the name and how I be killing that pussy from up north to the south of thee equater,

I tried to do at your level but I'm not wack like yourself...

~TO BE CONTINUED...~
Anonymous

Newcastle Upon Tyne, UK

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#33882
Jul 6, 2013
 
Luc-ID wrote:
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look in the symmetrical mirror on the wall can it possibly get any clearer,
you continuously contradict yourself saying how you be fronting but repetatively stand still gawking at my rear,
talking all that diarrhoea, just a gruesome penis fulfilling with nothing more than gonorrhoea,
just for this everlasting record Michael Jackson ain't never fondled with kids, just portrayed a 'man in the mirror',
listen to me as I kill you like a foreigner,
sharp talker, sour thinker vigorous "see real/cereal/serial killer" with my vision locked from the cornea,
this is just the liner notes, the epilogue comes later,
you know the name and how I be killing that pussy from up north to the south of thee equater,
I tried to do at your level but I'm not wack like yourself...
~TO BE CONTINUED...~
oh shit man. this rap is good but by far not great and I can safely say that I am better than this and that a sum of the lines may of potentially fallen out of the pockets.

so please don't hate try and appreciate because I really do know that I am dope as shit and when have I ever had any form of conflict with any of ya'll.

I think I am gonna rate this rap: 6/10.
Purely because it was humerous and it was kind of decent in a sense but not as impressive as I would have wished.
Shawny

Durham, NC

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#33884
Jul 6, 2013
 
Luc-ID wrote:
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oh shit man. this rap is good but by far not great and I can safely say that I am better than this and that a sum of the lines may of potentially fallen out of the pockets.
so please don't hate try and appreciate because I really do know that I am dope as shit and when have I ever had any form of conflict with any of ya'll.
I think I am gonna rate this rap: 6/10.
Purely because it was humerous and it was kind of decent in a sense but not as impressive as I would have wished.
Haven't been on this in while
I can see its dead
Cuz there's only wack rappers like u putting shit in our head
Guess it's a sign
That the whole rap game should take a rewind
Cuz nowadays all they rap about is stupid shit like hoes and guns
And child support for they girls and sons
But u your kinda different I see another side
Which in other rappers I try to find
I see brightness in your future
Like master bating to a computer
Your probably a 40 year old virgin
You like this shit that I'm serving
I'm only thirteen
But you can't imagine the things that I've seen
This ain't even a verse this just a line
You have just took journey to my shy mind

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

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#33885
Jul 6, 2013
 
Shawny wrote:
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Haven't been on this in while
I can see its dead
Cuz there's only wack rappers like u putting shit in our head
Guess it's a sign
That the whole rap game should take a rewind
Cuz nowadays all they rap about is stupid shit like hoes and guns
And child support for they girls and sons
But u your kinda different I see another side
Which in other rappers I try to find
I see brightness in your future
Like master bating to a computer
Your probably a 40 year old virgin
You like this shit that I'm serving
I'm only thirteen
But you can't imagine the things that I've seen
This ain't even a verse this just a line
You have just took journey to my shy mind
moments like this I wish I was illiterate ( falls on the floor crying )
Anonymous

Newcastle Upon Tyne, UK

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#33886
Jul 6, 2013
 
Shawny wrote:
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Haven't been on this in while
I can see its dead
Cuz there's only wack rappers like u putting shit in our head
Guess it's a sign
That the whole rap game should take a rewind
Cuz nowadays all they rap about is stupid shit like hoes and guns
And child support for they girls and sons
But u your kinda different I see another side
Which in other rappers I try to find
I see brightness in your future
Like master bating to a computer
Your probably a 40 year old virgin
You like this shit that I'm serving
I'm only thirteen
But you can't imagine the things that I've seen
This ain't even a verse this just a line
You have just took journey to my shy mind


ok, ok not that bad. hate to admit this but I am fairly drunk right now kid so first thing tomorrow I shall make a response.
Some Random Dude

United States

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#33887
Jul 6, 2013
 
Luc-ID, I rate all of line a 0/10. Why, because I always feel I can top it.
the rapping god

Lexington, KY

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#33888
Jul 6, 2013
 
Hit it freestyle yall
doesn't matter how tall
take someone out with your awesome raps
who cares how long just dont leave any gaps.
the rapping god

Lexington, KY

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#33889
Jul 6, 2013
 
I have been living with money
for as long as I can remember
I birthday is in september
This is a fact
But It is very packed
with all the words
meaning i keep buying boards

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