freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#33868 Jul 5, 2013
lol that verse against shini was good yoyoyo, but that shit you did agaist topix members was not a " diss ", if it was, I would of spitt back at you a looooooong time ago, just saying lol, that was garbage lol, but that was a good verse u did against shini just now though

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#33869 Jul 5, 2013
yoyoyo wrote:
<quoted text>
Floor herb lames, imma beat ya and the outcomes set
You force wordplay like teachers with the alphabet
Bet I'mma make shin break, like sprained knees
Take you out and drop you in water like fake teeth
Pure cut caine, i sure bust flames
Conclusion 'lands' on you ain't 'fly' you're just 'plain/plane'
You hold nothing but when i'm cockin'the chrome
Head West like Jigga start watching the throne
Yoyoyo the real king of topix is known
Your crown ain't bulletpruff send shots at your dome
Like a football stadium
Turn you vegetable with a mush soft cranium
Nice drop man..

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#33874 Jul 6, 2013
what's good everybody, did yoyoyo shut down the forum or something, its dead as hell lol.

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#33875 Jul 6, 2013
Nothin much.. I guess so lol its bern dead for over 12 hours until now..
Seanny T

Calgary, Canada

#33876 Jul 6, 2013
Soooooo intoxicated right now....lmao

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#33877 Jul 6, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
Soooooo intoxicated right now....lmao
NOT FAIRRRR ( going to raid my mom's percocet stash )
Anonymous

Newcastle Upon Tyne, UK

#33878 Jul 6, 2013
the rapping god wrote:
<quoted text> hey if you and my mom banged how do you know here she lives oh wait now i rember you are a stocker im little but your the one with gay jokes
ok kid listen right up. I'm more mature than that kid and I just want to sincerely apologise for speaking rationally obscene about your mother. yeah I do hate your fu<king guts but I ain't want to keep on sweating on your moms.
Anonymous

Newcastle Upon Tyne, UK

#33879 Jul 6, 2013
the rapping god wrote:
@Luc-ID
look in the mirror your so gay Michael Jackson wouldent even touch you but i didnt bang your mom cuse have you seen her teeth she made you look like a beaver ill finish it off with a little screw you
look in the symmetrical mirror on the wall can it possibly get any clearer,
you continuously contradict yourself saying how you be fronting but repetatively stand still gawking at my rear,
talking all that diarrhoea, just a gruesome penis fulfilling with nothing more than gonorrhoea,
just for this everlasting record Michael Jackson ain't never fondled with kids, just portrayed a 'man in the mirror',
listen to me as I kill you like a foreigner,
sharp talker, sour thinker vigorous "see real/cereal/serial killer" with my vision locked from the cornea,
this is just the liner notes, the epilogue comes later,
you know the name and how I be killing that pussy from up north to the south of thee equater,

I tried to do at your level but I'm not wack like yourself...

~TO BE CONTINUED...~
Anonymous

Washington, UK

#33882 Jul 6, 2013
Luc-ID wrote:
<quoted text>
look in the symmetrical mirror on the wall can it possibly get any clearer,
you continuously contradict yourself saying how you be fronting but repetatively stand still gawking at my rear,
talking all that diarrhoea, just a gruesome penis fulfilling with nothing more than gonorrhoea,
just for this everlasting record Michael Jackson ain't never fondled with kids, just portrayed a 'man in the mirror',
listen to me as I kill you like a foreigner,
sharp talker, sour thinker vigorous "see real/cereal/serial killer" with my vision locked from the cornea,
this is just the liner notes, the epilogue comes later,
you know the name and how I be killing that pussy from up north to the south of thee equater,
I tried to do at your level but I'm not wack like yourself...
~TO BE CONTINUED...~
oh shit man. this rap is good but by far not great and I can safely say that I am better than this and that a sum of the lines may of potentially fallen out of the pockets.

so please don't hate try and appreciate because I really do know that I am dope as shit and when have I ever had any form of conflict with any of ya'll.

I think I am gonna rate this rap: 6/10.
Purely because it was humerous and it was kind of decent in a sense but not as impressive as I would have wished.
Shawny

Durham, NC

#33884 Jul 6, 2013
Luc-ID wrote:
<quoted text>
oh shit man. this rap is good but by far not great and I can safely say that I am better than this and that a sum of the lines may of potentially fallen out of the pockets.
so please don't hate try and appreciate because I really do know that I am dope as shit and when have I ever had any form of conflict with any of ya'll.
I think I am gonna rate this rap: 6/10.
Purely because it was humerous and it was kind of decent in a sense but not as impressive as I would have wished.
Haven't been on this in while
I can see its dead
Cuz there's only wack rappers like u putting shit in our head
Guess it's a sign
That the whole rap game should take a rewind
Cuz nowadays all they rap about is stupid shit like hoes and guns
And child support for they girls and sons
But u your kinda different I see another side
Which in other rappers I try to find
I see brightness in your future
Like master bating to a computer
Your probably a 40 year old virgin
You like this shit that I'm serving
I'm only thirteen
But you can't imagine the things that I've seen
This ain't even a verse this just a line
You have just took journey to my shy mind

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#33885 Jul 6, 2013
Shawny wrote:
<quoted text>
Haven't been on this in while
I can see its dead
Cuz there's only wack rappers like u putting shit in our head
Guess it's a sign
That the whole rap game should take a rewind
Cuz nowadays all they rap about is stupid shit like hoes and guns
And child support for they girls and sons
But u your kinda different I see another side
Which in other rappers I try to find
I see brightness in your future
Like master bating to a computer
Your probably a 40 year old virgin
You like this shit that I'm serving
I'm only thirteen
But you can't imagine the things that I've seen
This ain't even a verse this just a line
You have just took journey to my shy mind
moments like this I wish I was illiterate ( falls on the floor crying )
Anonymous

Washington, UK

#33886 Jul 6, 2013
Shawny wrote:
<quoted text>
Haven't been on this in while
I can see its dead
Cuz there's only wack rappers like u putting shit in our head
Guess it's a sign
That the whole rap game should take a rewind
Cuz nowadays all they rap about is stupid shit like hoes and guns
And child support for they girls and sons
But u your kinda different I see another side
Which in other rappers I try to find
I see brightness in your future
Like master bating to a computer
Your probably a 40 year old virgin
You like this shit that I'm serving
I'm only thirteen
But you can't imagine the things that I've seen
This ain't even a verse this just a line
You have just took journey to my shy mind


ok, ok not that bad. hate to admit this but I am fairly drunk right now kid so first thing tomorrow I shall make a response.
Some Random Dude

United States

#33887 Jul 6, 2013
Luc-ID, I rate all of line a 0/10. Why, because I always feel I can top it.
the rapping god

Lexington, KY

#33888 Jul 6, 2013
Hit it freestyle yall
doesn't matter how tall
take someone out with your awesome raps
who cares how long just dont leave any gaps.
the rapping god

Lexington, KY

#33889 Jul 6, 2013
I have been living with money
for as long as I can remember
I birthday is in september
This is a fact
But It is very packed
with all the words
meaning i keep buying boards

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#33890 Jul 6, 2013
the rapping god wrote:
I have been living with money
for as long as I can remember
I birthday is in september
This is a fact
But It is very packed
with all the words
meaning i keep buying boards
stick a fork in a socket and tell me if it tickles.
the rapping god

Lexington, KY

#33891 Jul 6, 2013
Epitaph wrote:
<quoted text>
stick a fork in a socket and tell me if it tickles.
i rap how i act you act like a maniac
Anonymous

Washington, UK

#33892 Jul 6, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Luc-ID, I rate all of line a 0/10. Why, because I always feel I can top it.


I already said it wasn't particularly good. why do you think this drop was so fu<king bad though? thank you for your input though.
Anonymous

Washington, UK

#33893 Jul 6, 2013
don't tell me everyone now gets the brief impression that I am such a wack rapper simply because I didn't drop a very explosive load.
Anonymous

Washington, UK

#33894 Jul 6, 2013
I'm 10 times better than that trust me ya'll.

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