freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)
Anonymous

Durham, UK

#32992 Jun 17, 2013
Epitaph wrote:
<quoted text>
couldn't agree with u more fam, that's my favorite hiphop joint of the year thus far, Kendrick Lamar - BackSeat FreeStyle, shit is beyond dope, and the beat just annoints it
Haha thanks bro, that's one of my favourites also. Thus far I'd say I like the whole of 'GKMC' and a joint I'm really enjoying at this particular moment so far is J. Cole's new joint entitled:'Power Trip' love the beat, the flow, just the way a new Hip-Hop mainstream track should sound like and dude does it sound good.

I will say that everthing about the track 'Backseat Freestyle' is on point and I wouldn't change anything about it.

That's real talk brother!^Peace out^
Anonymous

Durham, UK

#32993 Jun 17, 2013
Luc-ID wrote:
<quoted text>
I'm that young dude named Lucid,
With a persistence that is often labelled as intrusive,
Pain is me porking a bitch with my meat,
Don't sound like much, them butcher'n pigs get a slaughtered defeat,
No diggity that I am the biggest dick in the whole universe,
You're like Chief Keef about to get thrown in a hearse,
'Cause you're that shit I don't like,
You know them runny ones that you cannot wipe,
I'm/a young Slick Rick, patched up ready to kick shit,
Rhyming so tight, it's like a young Béyonce vagina, right?
Lyrically I'm the best, beating all you bitches without a tank top or a vest,
Cannot face me 'cause I'm ugly, some of rhymes slip out like a volcano bubbling,
Eating all you pussies for desert, that Iggy Azelea girl I would've preferred,
Flying high like a pterodactyl, like a serpent about to snap you,
Like a goddamn candy cane, about to have a damn insanity rage,
Don't worry about the age, still got the erge to smoke you with the twelfth gauge,
I will so it to your face, what was your name Phaze,
The too late because L just took his place,
Phase one: drop the mic, you spit on pussy shit like a dyke,
No-one thinks you cool, you sound like a socially retarded young fool,
Need to go back to school and learn your dumb ass some rules,
Nobody feeling you're shit apart from a mo'fricking soo'r,
I'll have you feeling so hoarse that you be puking up manure,
I dropping my own bombs on the mic. call me a "lyrical Osama",
I'm gonna be running a series of straight circles around you like a "typical llama",
You saying I'm trash well you may have a point,
Ain't got no point in your beloved pencil to smoke my shit like a joint,
I'll admit I'm still learning to rap decent, frig St. Nicholas I would like to give you my own pre-sent,
Making my own bread in a crummy cresent,
Don't know what else a young kid has to say,
I bring thee "as/salt and pepper spray to the table,
I'm about to put this one to bed, so this is the end of the fable,
Lucid young Lucid,
I use the beat to just go and re-abuse it,
You cannot stop me, you can only copy like freaking court reporter,
Life's a pregnant bitch so that child your expecting, please abort her,
I really respect you Phaze homie, real talk..
Thanks for all your advice bro..
Props to you bro for such a sick verse..
Oh and by the way will you let me know what was good about my reply and what was bad if you would..
PEACE & LOVE DAWG!
Haha! I must say I was very impressed with my first one. I still hope I can still move up and make vast improvements. Just taking a deep think, contemplating on what I should write and produce next.

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#32994 Jun 17, 2013
Luc-ID wrote:
<quoted text>Good job fam.
Thanks

Since: May 13

Murrells Inlet, SC

#32995 Jun 17, 2013
Yeah, Luc-ID, you were like sweating bullets for nada, your verse was not bad at all, waaaaaaaaaaaay better than some I've seen, so quit under rating yourself man and just spitt next time
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#32996 Jun 17, 2013
Welcome welcome welcome to a vacant hell
where the room is filled with shot gun shells
in a sound proof chamber ya fears can swell
inside ya mind these sinister thoughts in a vagrant's cell
pencil in an appointment in my laboratory
your checkout time is a horror story
relax as the scalpel incisions
no anesthesia so you can witness so listen
to the screams of your chamber mates
blood being sloshed around by a blind chamber maid
lobotomy on the menu all you can do is claim your fate just kick back as I change your state
Don't worry only Ivan will resort to anal rape
your screamin too much, time to ball gag your banal face, you say this ain't yo fate, your on the list so please don't pay no hate
no you can injust fine, that wasn't your intestine
so just lay, you say I'm a scary man
I might have a burden I may carry fam
Oh pardon me, I snipped one of your arteries
Sorry G
Seanny T

Calgary, Canada

#32997 Jun 17, 2013
Lol shini u realize banal doesnt rhyme with anal right? Its pronounced a diff way ... Just sayin haha

Since: Jan 13

Location hidden

#32998 Jun 17, 2013
I say we still don't have enough ppl(active) for the crew tournament to begin, we should just start a different tournament to see the benefits we have

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#32999 Jun 17, 2013
i say we redo the 'topic' tourney (where me and srd's beef originated on my battle vs the black frank white lol) where whoever hosts the tourney gives the match a certain topic and whoever writes the best written on said topic gets the win. doesnt have to be a story-written, doesnt have to be a all punchline directed at the other person written, its just simply: who used the topic better? like legit its a good idea, just like the world tourney. all in favor of topical tourney scream AIAIAIAIAIAIAI
.
lol.

Since: Jan 13

Location hidden

#33000 Jun 17, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
i say we redo the 'topic' tourney (where me and srd's beef originated on my battle vs the black frank white lol) where whoever hosts the tourney gives the match a certain topic and whoever writes the best written on said topic gets the win. doesnt have to be a story-written, doesnt have to be a all punchline directed at the other person written, its just simply: who used the topic better? like legit its a good idea, just like the world tourney. all in favor of topical tourney scream AIAIAIAIAIAIAI
.
lol.
Haha seems challenging and fun depending on the topic

Since: May 13

Murrells Inlet, SC

#33001 Jun 17, 2013
yoooooooooo topical tourney, AIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAI lol

Since: May 13

Murrells Inlet, SC

#33002 Jun 17, 2013
I promise I promise I promise I promise I promise I won't be a jackass guys lol

Since: May 13

Murrells Inlet, SC

#33003 Jun 17, 2013
Like really man I won't

Since: Jan 13

Location hidden

#33004 Jun 17, 2013
Epitaph wrote:
Like really man I won't
What?
Seanny T

Calgary, Canada

#33005 Jun 17, 2013
Im so confused too lol. Aight i guess we got flames and epitaph in so far who else is in?

Since: May 13

Murrells Inlet, SC

#33007 Jun 17, 2013
I sat and ate like 4 packs of starbursts in one setting, I was hyper as hell, my bad lol
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#33008 Jun 18, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
Lol shini u realize banal doesnt rhyme with anal right? Its pronounced a diff way ... Just sayin haha
You can intentionally make words rhyme by changing the accent. There are alot of MCs that intentionally mispronounce words.

(Ban-al vs Bane-l)
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#33009 Jun 18, 2013
Epitaph wrote:
yoooooooooo topical tourney, AIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAI lol
I tried that. It failed miserablebly. Not enough active members.
Anonymous

Durham, UK

#33010 Jun 18, 2013
Niatroh wrote:
<quoted text>
Thanks
No problem bruva.
Anonymous

Durham, UK

#33011 Jun 18, 2013
Epitaph wrote:
Yeah, Luc-ID, you were like sweating bullets for nada, your verse was not bad at all, waaaaaaaaaaaay better than some I've seen, so quit under rating yourself man and just spitt next time
Appreciate the love fam. I was only doubting it because I'm only young and I'm constantly trying to move foward and strive for greatness. I know I can rhyme I just want to hear some peoples personal opinions so if they do think I am 'wack' I have something to improve on quite dramatically. Thanks for the love Epitaph, I must say we have a lot of demeaning posts up on this forum right now and I think we need to cut the crap, especially if we are meant to be taking this shit seriously. I will quit hating on myself or doubting myself and continue to strive on and potentially prosper and remain to steady achieving.

Thanks though homes!
Anonymous

Durham, UK

#33012 Jun 18, 2013
Quick question people: Does anybody know the release date for ScHoolboy Q's highly anticipated album 'Oxymoron'.

Lucid Da Dood cannot wait for this shit to drop!

Hurry up!

LOL!

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