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#32568
May 24, 2013
 
can anybody say"Shook"!!/
Was being nice to this 'Gay Rook'/
Lady Gaga..I'm bout to 'poker Face' book/
not everybody heres into the queer thing/
U a queen? get Ur crown knocked off by a real king/
not because I hold the ceptor/ It's cause you gotta
bow down and accept that my lines are way better/
and when it comes to metaphor/..my punches connect
to spin ya head off ya neck, but Ur sh!t got me hella Bored/
I spit it hella raw/ with No filter.. U could reply
100 bar rhyme to mine.. its all filler/
mulisha's made to aim 4 ya brain it's gon kill her/
Pooh C U could squirt HIV..still aint Iller/

HAHAHA that Facebook was a FAKE Book.. lmao

had to fix a typo..
Seanny T

Canada

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#32569
May 24, 2013
 
Ya Melissa ur really not great. Simple rhymes. Random stuff. No diss towards you,. Just telling it like I see it.

Since: May 13

Dillon, SC

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#32570
May 24, 2013
 
Mulisha made wrote:
can anybody say"Shook"!!/
Was being nice to this 'Gay Rook'/
Lady Gaga..I'm bout to 'poker Face' book/
not everybody heres into the queer thing/
U a queen? get Ur crown knocked off by a real king/
not because I hold the ceptor/ It's cause you gotta
bow down and accept that my lines are way
better/
and when it comes to metaphor/..my punches
connect
to spin ya head off ya neck, but Ur sh!t got me
hella Bored/
I spit it hella raw/ with No filter.. U could reply
100 bar rhyme to mine.. its all filler/
mulisha's made to aim 4 ya brain it's gon kill her/
Pooh C U could squirt HIV..still aint Iller/
HAHAHA that Facebook was a FAKE Book..
lmao
had to fix a typo..
I HATE BULLIESSSSSSSSSSS........

you done picking on lil girls you fucking pedafile
you caught on candid camera, and bitch you betta smile
even my dog said you foul
you call those turds metaphors
your whole verse consist of shit I've read before
I'll bang till your head sore
we all know you jerk off to nude pics
so due to that simple fact,
your facebook disses are useless
why pick on the new kids
pick on someone of your stature
such as I,
the one that got the red beam aimed at ya
Scorpio-Melissa- LLK

Friendswood, TX

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#32571
May 24, 2013
 
Epitaph wrote:
( trying to boo the Miami heat and be on here at the same time ).........Melissa next time, don't spend 70% of the verse on off the wall random shit that don't make sense, make sure u devote atleast 80% to the person you battling
Thanks but its hard when I start and I am expressing who I am.
Scorpio-Melissa- LLK

Friendswood, TX

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#32572
May 24, 2013
 
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
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Well it's about that time again....
Battle this chick to bits and take home another win
It's so bad should be considered a sin to beat you hard and consider your men
Here we go....
Let me get this straight you called yourself shady (the female version)
Then said you'd take my girl and spit on it, that shed be jealous that rap must be the worst then
If your a girl you straight up admitted your gay, must've not gotten any men when you used that dating site now you lustin
Went to girl still no luck have to date ones that don't exist like mine so stop huntin
I've got your cure this rap let it kill you because your gone like a tornado blew you with a gust wind
She can't stop using 3 words per line and expecting them to hit hard
Let me explain words are what we use in rap to rip car(s)
In half so stop your complaining when you can't formulate a rap like some dim star (reference to famous people who lose their touch)
It's Melissa right lock in my sight, all I had to do was put it on stench tracking and the missile hit this pimp bar
You only 20 I'm still 16 not getting hoes and not giving lip see (giving lip is a form of talking back at someone)
You say your white well guess what so am I so stop there and go blimping (Hindenburg)
Or go out on the ocean on the first really large ship, have a love affair and die over it
Then go on a plane and go in the cargo bit, fall out and see if you can survive to see your mother hit
So as I end this with my freestyle drop Melissa
Just thought I'd say your diss missed brah
Yes I am gay
So you have my permission to call me a fag
I get more pussy than Snookie and I am a rookie
But now I got a girlfriend
Who's going to be there with you until the end?
And your talking about a tornado
I'm from Tacoma
I'm a volcano
Only need three words
But not to you
Because I don't love you
You need a tracking device
Ill just scope you and line up the site
Blow you to tiny pieces
Let the wolves eat you like recess pieces
Scare you so bad your on your knees talking to Jesus
And I know what slang means
Just because Im white doesn't mean I don't understand MC
And I ain't your brah
Even though you made need a bra
You're a man but you have moobs
And their bigger than my boobs
And your sixteen
Did you find yourself a beauty queen?
And yes I am a female shady
MC baby
I'm already taken because I am her baby
And not a cry baby
Hit you so hard make you shed a tear
Ill be twenty one this year
And I'm not use to this
Also not use to people sounding like piss
I didn't think this was suppose to be a r.kelly diss
Next time write a better rhyme
Because you're just wasting my time
Clocks ticking
And times now wasting
You can go so you'll stop pacing.
Scorpio-Melissa- LLK

Friendswood, TX

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#32573
May 24, 2013
 
Seanny T wrote:
Ya Melissa ur really not great. Simple rhymes. Random stuff. No diss towards you,. Just telling it like I see it.
I am a rookie and I am on here to accept feedback and to practice. So thank you.
Scorpio-Melissa- LLK

Friendswood, TX

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#32574
May 24, 2013
 
Mulisha made wrote:
can anybody say"Shook"!!/
Was being nice to this 'Gay Rook'/
Lady Gaga..I'm bout to 'poker Face' book/
not everybody heres into the queer thing/
U a queen? get Ur crown knocked off by a real king/
not because I hold the ceptor/ It's cause you gotta
bow down and accept that my lines are way better/
and when it comes to metaphor/..my punches connect
to spin ya head off ya neck, but Ur sh!t got me hella Bored/
I spit it hella raw/ with No filter.. U could reply
100 bar rhyme to mine.. its all filler/
mulisha's made to aim 4 ya brain it's gon kill her/
Pooh C U could squirt HIV..still aint Iller/
HAHAHA that Facebook was a FAKE Book.. lmao
had to fix a typo..
I think your missing something, I am gay
And it doesn't affect me on what you say
You say I am all shook
A little advice... Next time use a notebook
Yes I am a rook
Doesn't mean you win in this book
This isn't about us anymore
If you need to fake my Facebook
Then why did you try and look?
You'll see a white girl with a shaved head
Supporting cancer instead
Sorry that I'm not five and naked in bed
Get that image out of your head
Keep thinking the way you do you'll end up dead
And my p***y isn't loose
I think your confused with your blow up doll and your child porn book
If you want to diss me
Come to Texas and battle against me
Because I am real and not a fake
Your girl so tan I call her shake and bake
Me I am vanilla cake
You say you spit explicit
Sorry I must've missed it
Sorry the condom busted

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

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#32575
May 24, 2013
 
Scorpio-Melissa-LLK wrote:
<quoted text>Yes I am gay
So you have my permission to call me a fag
I get more pussy than Snookie and I am a rookie
But now I got a girlfriend
Who's going to be there with you until the end?
And your talking about a tornado
I'm from Tacoma
I'm a volcano
Only need three words
But not to you
Because I don't love you
You need a tracking device
Ill just scope you and line up the site
Blow you to tiny pieces
Let the wolves eat you like recess pieces
Scare you so bad your on your knees talking to Jesus
And I know what slang means
Just because Im white doesn't mean I don't understand MC
And I ain't your brah
Even though you made need a bra
You're a man but you have moobs
And their bigger than my boobs
And your sixteen
Did you find yourself a beauty queen?
And yes I am a female shady
MC baby
I'm already taken because I am her baby
And not a cry baby
Hit you so hard make you shed a tear
Ill be twenty one this year
And I'm not use to this
Also not use to people sounding like piss
I didn't think this was suppose to be a r.kelly diss
Next time write a better rhyme
Because you're just wasting my time
Clocks ticking
And times now wasting
You can go so you'll stop pacing.
Lets talk about your style I have no one beside me this is true but ill walk alone for miles
In fact to be specific ill go 8 mile then climb higher burn down you in a blazing fire

Yes I would get on my hands and knees to pray
I'm a Christian not afraid to admit it but still a MC you can put that on a file titled Pay
Because you going to pay me more than anything even Michael bay

No I don't have boobs I'm pretty flat, just fit and a bit of muscle nothing but that

I'm a receiver for my high school judge if you please, but whose the one begging to learn from me on your knees?

I never dissed you on speaking like huck Finn but here it is with your stark slang
I use correct grammar enough to split you into mark twain

I'm not pacing I'm rolling on the floor laughing
That this girl thinks she can write a better diss when she's already showing skills she's lacking

Writing a diss has become how I live I let you in on a secret
Every day I open topix to check on what people are talking about and to take a peak in
On how good ever ones doing and if they've been tweakin
On their style and their writing to start actually Beatin
People like me and every other person on here that's spent a numerable amount of weeks in
This forum since its get weak then
Gotta start it back up and hit on the meek men

So once again I end with a solemn disregard to you skill at this
It's your turn to strike bat your turn up to bat then (reference to baseball)
Tushae

Kempton Park, South Africa

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#32576
May 25, 2013
 
I'm swagging out bragging bout the fact that I'm a spazing sprout\ from under the mushroom of doubt ,under the influence, spitting out gatherings of poisonness clouds/ wear theirs clouds theirs rain/ wear their cells there's brain/ but for rappers its all bout belts and chains/fuck your status and your flow, your waves a to tame for this mc gone insane.//.
Tushae

Kempton Park, South Africa

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#32577
May 25, 2013
 
Last rap was just to see if this forum works on my new fone

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

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#32578
May 25, 2013
 
Just when dead didn't it?

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

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#32580
May 25, 2013
 
@(Who ever)

I can tell theres gonna be drama
an blood and ya'll dont wanna
push me cause if it comes to tht
then Im a have 2 resort 2 my guns
twin N9nes with loaded clips
20 hollow tips a piece 40 shots
too ur body.

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Huntsville

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#32581
May 26, 2013
 
Rappin Cheif wrote:
@(Who ever)

I can tell theres gonna be drama
an blood and ya'll dont wanna
push me cause if it comes to tht
then Im a have 2 resort 2 my guns
twin N9nes with loaded clips
20 hollow tips a piece 40 shots
too ur body.
Uh he didn't just say that did he?
That was horrible I could think of several better things to say like P Diddy
Already finished with you and haven't truly started just come back and hit me

“serious about music , love rap”

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Huntsville

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#32582
May 26, 2013
 
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>Uh he didn't just say that did he?
That was horrible I could think of several better things to say like P Diddy
Already finished with you and haven't truly started just come back and hit me
Correction*----
Uh he didn't just say what I think he did did he?
That was horrible I could think of several better things to say like P Diddy
Already finished with you and haven't truly started just come back and hit me

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

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#32583
May 26, 2013
 
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
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Uh he didn't just say that did he?
That was horrible I could think of several better things to say like P Diddy
Already finished with you and haven't truly started just come back and hit me
I write and spit lyrics Homicidal an Fight lyrics/Violent lyrics kids incite riots 2 when they hear um.

With their rivals riden around with handguns an rifels/ready 2 kill anybody that they collide with tht trys um.

I make hate music! Rape, murder, an jail
escape music/ Music tht gangs bang 2
when their nations Fueding.

I make rage music tht teens shoot up
their schools 2/when their sick of being
bullied and picked on they come unglued.

They go Insane 2 it soon as they hear
it their influenced/2 retaliate, it Alters
their moods an makes um go do shit.
Some Random Dude

Los Angeles, CA

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#32584
May 26, 2013
 
Seanny-T, the Horrorcore tourney needs to comes back and you and I are competing. I want to see us away from eachother though, because I know we will be the finalists.

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#32585
May 26, 2013
 
Rappin Cheif wrote:
<quoted text>I write and spit lyrics Homicidal an Fight lyrics/Violent lyrics kids incite riots 2 when they hear um.

With their rivals riden around with handguns an rifels/ready 2 kill anybody that they collide with tht trys um.

I make hate music! Rape, murder, an jail
escape music/ Music tht gangs bang 2
when their nations Fueding.

I make rage music tht teens shoot up
their schools 2/when their sick of being
bullied and picked on they come unglued.

They go Insane 2 it soon as they hear
it their influenced/2 retaliate, it Alters
their moods an makes um go do shit.
Ill rip your kidney out and feed it to you before you die/
Write I was here in your blood and disappear like I lived a life of pi/

Comeback to find the future and all you can do saw you alive/
So I twisted you neck till your head came off like the massacre from fast 5/

Shot of in the dark now I'm having nightmares/
Your body haunting me I run for my life trip and fall downstairs/

Wake up in front of a hooded figure/
Sends me back as a demon with a flame gun and trigger/

I've got skull for a head flames rolling off with my bike that's showing off/
Make your soul burn as you look into my eyes then you truly know me not/

Now that I've finished showing up the chief/
I think I've done a considerable toll on what you belief/
Now you know to not mess with me or ill make sure you feel life's final relief/
Seanny T

Canada

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#32586
May 26, 2013
 
Haha gotta wait til Halloween man!:p
Some Random Dude

Los Angeles, CA

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#32587
May 26, 2013
 
No, not Halloween! I wanna do this!

“serious about music , love rap”

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#32588
May 26, 2013
 
I may not be good at horrorcore but I do want to do it, redemption because my rap last time was nothing short of pathetic. Unfortunately flames has the rap crews battles in place.

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