freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32202 Apr 27, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
No, please don't tell me Redemption is Em's new Album. No, it can't be... What happened to him slaughtering beats...
Aye?
Some Random Dude

United States

#32203 Apr 27, 2013
So Eminem's new album's called Redemption right on
It's like his skill went on vacation an' left the light on
With this release the throne's absent so the fight's on
A free-for-all has just started an' the night's young
This music's got a tight grip on its artist must be a python
Gotta say it slow an' write it down for 'em with a crayon (Cr-eye-on)
Keep 'em contained entertained so as they don't fly off
No questionin' an' conditionin' now the electromagnet wire's gone
So finally simplifying rap's now just gonna be a write off
Take a bite out of an Apple and jail break rappers like an IPod
Creatin' Cryogenic Tests in rap call me Mr. Freeze but I done
Killed the Batman by puttin' anthrax in his brush so cry on

Bats like when you brush them with a tooth brush.

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32204 Apr 27, 2013
okie dokie
Shini

Korea

#32205 Apr 27, 2013
Hostage wrote:
<quoted text>
@Phaze the Great and Shini
Phaze the Great and Shini im versing two now
I seem to have so much f*ckin beef? How?
Phaze dont worry you dont need to leave Hostages
Shini give up it took you ages to respond b1tch
You couldn't take shots if you were a f*ckin alcoholic
And Shini you mad cuz the length of your diss
Was was as long as mine but times 300 %
Phaze no lie that was such a good post at least and most
Your bars were good your rhymes were good
Only bad thing was you dissed me outta the book
Shini is scared to death like Mobb Deep scared to lo.. wait he cant his eyes be flatter than Waynes punchlines
I threw no tantrum i won our battle first
You jus came back thinking luck was a curse
But you came back with something even sh1tter AND worse
Phaze you sayin you'll "leave me knowing death"
You couldn't leave a break-up note to a f*cking girlfriend
Hannibal Cannibal eat me up damn it yo
Strangle me kill me torture me shoot me
Both you couldn't do that if you caused a funeral
Im "f*cked up like a moistened v@g"
Thats more p*ssy than you, you only eat cats
You couldn't throw a ball letalone throw a punch
If you did it'd be about the strength of a sponge
Thats the wettest you'd get a girl if the color was pink
Cause the p*ssy you rub is like the whales you kill
Too damn big to lay down and stay still
Only thing you rubbed is patting your cat
Closest thing to p*ssy but far from shooting gats
I could cross you whenever like how about now
I'll cross you 3 times (xXx) now you cross Vin Diesal
You couldn't cut a wound if you had one of your own
If you were Emo you couldn't your own wrist
Your fist couldn't meet my face even if my face met your fist
Kick me in the ovaries, hack me up, chop me up
I guarantee you'll need to call for back up
Cause you couldn't hack a lamb if a cop was next to you
The cat the pig or lamb hmmm which one should you choose
Your a technology genius a real smart Asian
You couldn't hack a lamb or even a computer game
So speaking kill me Phaze and Shini punch me in the face
This is Hostage starting court cuz i jus killed your case
I accidently deleted my original diss it was much worse
But we can all see how much you get butt hurt

Do not play me like a sh!tty game like Rune Scape
I will architect your doomsday in a few ways

Call up the courts to present a new case
A hostage's fate is being dangled by his shoe lace

I'll have your crew lace in two states
Decide it when I flip a coin- Two Face

This is nothing for me to accost a hostage
So I'm here to crusify him- put him across them crosses

Call this your martyrdom as my heart gets numb
when I run keys, the style will make sure your farse is dumb

You have punches but their lackluster like Carter 1
I don't know why you exhausted ya can't even mark this bum

And Phaze here is shattering your phase here
You better come better cause he boxin yo up like Frasier

Note this is a keystyle I am not editing anything so you can wait here
You just flop when we drop the wait/weight here

So you want to test my mind it is on point like a rapier
Please stop cause I'm tired of committing rape here

If you can't go the distance you need to work on the form of your diss stance
Cause I'm precise when I knock my opponents to another land so distant

So hang it up, so show "no love" so I'm not going to Wayne it up
You're plain as f!@#, but you be snortin yo lines like Angeldust
Shini

Korea

#32206 Apr 27, 2013
Call this your martyrdom as my heart gets numb
when I run keys, the style will make sure your farse is done***

THat's the problem with a true keystyle, they are often choked with typos lol
Shini

Korea

#32207 Apr 27, 2013
Aw it disappered. lol
Shini

Korea

#32208 Apr 27, 2013
Hostage wrote:
<quoted text>
Btw jus before you accuse me of righting that i didnt, i stopped WAY before the racist sh1t came into play.
"Both you couldn't do that if you caused a funeral" that was my last line, the rest was not typed by my fingers.
So im just letting you know i would NEVER go out of hand as much as what was typed out to be.
My uncle is very racsist and i hate him with all my strength but i swear i didn't know what he was going to type.
Im just clarafying all of this before the finger is pointed towards anyone.
If i could i'd remove the post or i would of never let it be post in he first place but as i said i wasn't typing it so jus understand i didn't mean for that to get typed/posted.
He has made me feel really guilty about this and i wish it wasn't posted, i only wish my part was posted which started from the beggining and ended at :Both you couldn't do that if you caused a funeral: Because what was written after is so lame and does't even go well, you can think it was me and i had writers block and all that i do understand that but im just letting you know what has happened with that post Shini. And i am sorry for that post i didn't intend for it to be posted but i wasn't in the room.
Good battle Shini, well... what me and you did anyway :( sorry if he offended you bro.
Actually I don't take these to heart. If I didn't think your were good. I wouldn't respond.
Shini

Korea

#32209 Apr 27, 2013
Oh there it is. Topix gets weird like that. It is good to actually here from someone close to my timezone though.

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32210 Apr 27, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>
Actually I don't take these to heart. If I didn't think your were good. I wouldn't respond.
Really? Phew.. Lucky.
Your really good, i mean that too. I mean i try my best but you are good. like really good.
Shini

Korea

#32211 Apr 27, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Yes, just watch.
Shini, you say you feel bad with no kills calling yourself a Death Reaper
Yet without guidance system your North Korean nuke can't get a death either
Check my closet cause I have a few skeletons in it
If you got a bone to pick with me I'll kill you with lymrics
Shini

Korea

#32212 Apr 27, 2013
Pushing Buttons Round 1 Chi-Town vs. Alucards NEEDS VOTES to close and move on to round two.

Please vote as soon as possible.

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32213 Apr 27, 2013
Shini this my last post that will remain to you "friend"
You had a spot like chicken poks you wont get it again
Me to beat you is like putting M&M's in alphabetical order
Careful Shini Ghostwriter could come back ta haunt ya
My lyrics are so good my rhymes are retarded
If you seem to drop an album make sure its in the garbage
You and Phaze the Great are 2 blown fa*gots when i kill your posts you'll be asked to be in the same coffin
To me your shit i made you get as far as you are
Ive seen better rappers around a candy bar
Shini have a break and stay with that
Take a break? You couldn't seperate a kit kat

xD Mad Flows
My rhymes are like hair, cause they off the top of my head
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#32214 Apr 28, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>
Check my closet cause I have a few skeletons in it
If you got a bone to pick with me I'll kill you with lymrics
If we just did these back and forth in a thread by itself, it'd be pretty popular. xD Seriously, I think your style and mine go pretty well together.

Also, I wanna know who people think are the best on here right now.:P

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32215 Apr 28, 2013
Its only Hostage (me) Shini and you (Some Random Dude) on this page. Us 3 would be a good collab together :D
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#32216 Apr 28, 2013
Hostage, you're alright, I wouldn't be ready to collaborate with you though.

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32218 Apr 28, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Hostage, you're alright, I wouldn't be ready to collaborate with you though.
Bit hurtful but understandable i guess. jus.. haven't been on here long enough i guess. thort i hada shot so i thort id jus ask
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#32219 Apr 28, 2013
Uhm, your sentence structure just died...

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32220 Apr 28, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Uhm, your sentence structure just died...
I understand what you mean, like is it cause i havent been on here long enough. "Your not ready to collab with me" like i understand why your saying that but i jus thought that i'd ask if we could
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#32221 Apr 28, 2013
It takes a bit to earn my respect. Just ask some of those that are on here, lmao.

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32222 Apr 28, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
It takes a bit to earn my respect. Just ask some of those that are on here, lmao.
Alright. What i gotta do. I'm prepared for anything.

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