freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32132 Apr 25, 2013
Rappin Cheif wrote:
Some one Spit some bars at me.. I've been busy working, an when I had free time working on some new material..
Test me, aint freesyle if you pre wrote your sh1t
Up-N-Coming rapper on topix? with your pre write lyrics
Thats abit stupid to say that in black and white
You aint no Snoop you aint no Dogg either
All bark and no bite and lookin for Topix new rapper hotter than Ether
You said you've been at work all day
What stuck behind your desk by choice writing lyrics to say
The hot freestyles i post make microphones melt
But you on the other hand dunno what your on about
If you reply dont use the one you spent all day on fake achiever
Cause you only say "Future Topix rapper" is cause you a cheater

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#32133 Apr 25, 2013
Hostage wrote:
ha ha ha bla bla bla do your posts ever sound different no they all sound lame
Rhyme, Line, Time, Pine, Sign uhh dry
Your no rapper your a poet there is a difference
Dr Suess knows it
Well keep agreeing i could do worse but id get banned faster than i could put a mic in a hearse
A wig tree... seriously you are really trying now
Just to keep up with the lines i post.. WOW
You a glock 9 hahaha dont make me faint
Now ill use this against your own weight
My mum was a glock 9 my dad a mac 10 so i was born an AK
Your mum is a fly your dad trash maggot
So that means the only gun you blow is full percent fa**ot
Well if i make you bleed out one ear and you say your skill kills dudes
I must be too cause i killed something in your ear like i blew an ear tube
Say you have skill but the equal before nothing
You only swallow in fear and when you've finaly finished c*mming
Im a dead deer ae? Are you serious about this
Bringing animals into a situation thinking thats a diss?
Oh well its your rap ill sue you for lameness
And have RRC have his name changed to Nameless
If you diss me please make it worthwhile
Dont make it sound like you having doggystyle
Thats your animal now if im a deer
I dont want that animal NO
But insted of Nameless ill change your name to John Doe
Look ill agree nothing I've said is advanced but to call me a poet well here I go:

F*ck your feelings and your mum and dad that's why this fags here to bring it back
Nobody cares that your moms peni* went into your dads vagin* and let her slap that

Emenim said he only drops what were afraid too
Well I'm "not afraid" to spit in your face and say screw you

Another thing if your going to come at me why not be original
Instead of just taking what I said over and over as if your trying to stay low like a criminal
I didn't spit large words cause you might not know what they meant so I kept it minimal
That's why I go so soft yet still subliminal
You call me gay yet your boy friend had no clue you were seminal
I'm brighter than everything yet you still can't see me with your weak retinals
So stand at watch as I crush you and anyone before me call you a sentinel
This is it let this drop finish you like a shot to you left ventricle

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#32134 Apr 25, 2013
Hostage wrote:
<quoted text>Test me, aint freesyle if you pre wrote your sh1t
Up-N-Coming rapper on topix? with your pre write lyrics
Thats abit stupid to say that in black and white
You aint no Snoop you aint no Dogg either
All bark and no bite and lookin for Topix new rapper hotter than Ether
You said you've been at work all day
What stuck behind your desk by choice writing lyrics to say
The hot freestyles i post make microphones melt
But you on the other hand dunno what your on about
If you reply dont use the one you spent all day on fake achiever
Cause you only say "Future Topix rapper" is cause you a cheater
Almost ever writer except me and a few others prewrite. Shini, SRD, Seanny, HHH.

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32135 Apr 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>
Look ill agree nothing I've said is advanced but to call me a poet well here I go:
F*ck your feelings and your mum and dad that's why this fags here to bring it back
Nobody cares that your moms peni* went into your dads vagin* and let her slap that
Emenim said he only drops what were afraid too
Well I'm "not afraid" to spit in your face and say screw you
Another thing if your going to come at me why not be original
Instead of just taking what I said over and over as if your trying to stay low like a criminal
I didn't spit large words cause you might not know what they meant so I kept it minimal
That's why I go so soft yet still subliminal
You call me gay yet your boy friend had no clue you were seminal
I'm brighter than everything yet you still can't see me with your weak retinals
So stand at watch as I crush you and anyone before me call you a sentinel
This is it let this drop finish you like a shot to you left ventricle
Im not gonna waste my good lyrics if i ge sh1t comebacks, so i'll "let you" win this
So i'll keep my post short like your miniscual pen1s
Make you lose it and break your pen
Your mum had 2 c*nts and your the second of them
uMad Bro? yea you steamin
Like your dad was when he swallowed all ya semen

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32136 Apr 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>
Almost ever writer except me and a few others prewrite. Shini, SRD, Seanny, HHH.
Lol that post wasnt to you xD
I dont prewrite either so add me in there, its only a battle man its jus to compare talent

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#32138 Apr 25, 2013
Hostage wrote:
<quoted text>Im not gonna waste my good lyrics if i ge sh1t comebacks, so i'll "let you" win this
So i'll keep my post short like your miniscual pen1s
Make you lose it and break your pen
Your mum had 2 c*nts and your the second of them
uMad Bro? yea you steamin
Like your dad was when he swallowed all ya semen
Ill rip this kid in half and laugh as his organs spill down his moms hatch
Then burn what left in the incinerator and let his mom be the last batch

I'm playing around as well just tryna be competitive
Usually I drop some decent stuff but for me writers block has been repetitive
I'm not a baby just like to rap like the rest so don't take me for sensitive
I'm done battling you've proved your good but your works not quite transitive
But non the less your pretty good like everyone here if you stay your affinitive
But if you mess up and diss the wrong you'll be sent back to being primitive
Definitely don't bite or have any similar lines not even replicative
That'll get you kicked quick because you weren't creative
So with this ill say peace and good job ill come back stronger and be just that much more innovative

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#32139 Apr 25, 2013
Hostage wrote:
<quoted text>Lol that post wasnt to you xD
I dont prewrite either so add me in there, its only a battle man its jus to compare talent
I know man.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#32140 Apr 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>
Almost ever writer except me and a few others prewrite. Shini, SRD, Seanny, HHH.
I do both. In here I mainly keystyle, unless I am scheduled to battle someone X amount of days in advance.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#32141 Apr 25, 2013
Hostage wrote:
<quoted text>
Im not gonna waste my good lyrics if i ge sh1t comebacks, so i'll "let you" win this
So i'll keep my post short like your miniscual pen1s
Make you lose it and break your pen
Your mum had 2 c*nts and your the second of them
uMad Bro? yea you steamin
Like your dad was when he swallowed all ya semen
I have read yo post talking about what cha peepin?
You already confirmed to me ya "see men"
Talking about shi7 comebacks like you "take them shots"
But I euthanize I don't "take them shots"
Talkin about freestyle, like ya free vile
It's just shi7 like a "free pile"
I wrote this in less then a min
You just less than a Shin
You don't come up to me
So stop talking about how other people "ride"
When you can't even come up to speak
Sorry I must double as a Canadian way I leave "scars bro"
Where's the bag I'm ready to dump it in Fargo
Talkin bout you "go hard" yo
No you go tard mode

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#32142 Apr 25, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>I do both. In here I mainly keystyle, unless I am scheduled to battle someone X amount of days in advance.
Yea man I keystyle as well ;)

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32143 Apr 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>
Ill rip this kid in half and laugh as his organs spill down his moms hatch
Then burn what left in the incinerator and let his mom be the last batch
I'm playing around as well just tryna be competitive
Usually I drop some decent stuff but for me writers block has been repetitive
I'm not a baby just like to rap like the rest so don't take me for sensitive
I'm done battling you've proved your good but your works not quite transitive
But non the less your pretty good like everyone here if you stay your affinitive
But if you mess up and diss the wrong you'll be sent back to being primitive
Definitely don't bite or have any similar lines not even replicative
That'll get you kicked quick because you weren't creative
So with this ill say peace and good job ill come back stronger and be just that much more innovative
Great battle man, hope you over come your writers block :) check ya later when ya ready to

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32144 Apr 25, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>
I have read yo post talking about what cha peepin?
You already confirmed to me ya "see men"
Talking about shi7 comebacks like you "take them shots"
But I euthanize I don't "take them shots"
Talkin about freestyle, like ya free vile
It's just shi7 like a "free pile"
I wrote this in less then a min
You just less than a Shin
You don't come up to me
So stop talking about how other people "ride"
When you can't even come up to speak
Sorry I must double as a Canadian way I leave "scars bro"
Where's the bag I'm ready to dump it in Fargo
Talkin bout you "go hard" yo
No you go tard mode
Diss me and your not even a member
Only a "yea-im-real-talk-and-shi t" aka pretender
You are sh1t true plain and simple
You couldn't pop a gun letalone a f*ckin pimple
You get hooked to shit like flies
Like addicts do crystal
Me talkin I go hard but no i go tard mode?
You'd only walk half way to me and say "im scared bro"
So dont reply to this im begging you please
Im not like RRC i wont drop to knees
Jus kiddin yo and you know that your pretty good but this Shini trash is f*ckin wack
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#32145 Apr 26, 2013
Hostage wrote:
<quoted text>
Diss me and your not even a member
Only a "yea-im-real-talk-and-shi t" aka pretender
You are sh1t true plain and simple
You couldn't pop a gun letalone a f*ckin pimple
You get hooked to shit like flies
Like addicts do crystal
Me talkin I go hard but no i go tard mode?
You'd only walk half way to me and say "im scared bro"
So dont reply to this im begging you please
Im not like RRC i wont drop to knees
Jus kiddin yo and you know that your pretty good but this Shini trash is f*ckin wack
Nice flip, way to recycle my lines via disinformation
Hostage about to leave up to his name in "this situation"
The writs you spit, useless, so I got that "diss information"
You getting cracked way I line punches with that "diss in formation"
Want to get that work when whatcha spit be basic
You a tard, just look in the mirror and "face it"
You can misconstrue, I got it locked it, don't cross it
Got ya tied up, don't make me "abuse a Hostage"
This rappers whack, so I'll put em in a box- Cracker Jack
You getting whipped back to back, cause that's how I crack a chap
I'll make you "hang high" just to show you what's a crack-a-lack
In when rip yo Face off, end this "pay-off" like a jailbird Madoff
This ain't no playoff cause I don't play off
And no, I won't let a trey off
But I will 3-0 you no problem, that's how I "let a tray off"
In other words, I'm on point on points
Go ahead and and "spit that trash" cause we know you conjoint some joints
I don't even need to go on, the sh!& I just took on you is so strong
Someday you'll beat me...nope wrong, I'll putcha behind bars like an old con
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#32146 Apr 26, 2013
Nice flip, way to recycle my lines via disinformation
Hostage about to live*** up to his name in "this situation"
A bazz

Chennai, India

#32147 Apr 26, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>
Nice flip, way to recycle my lines via disinformation
Hostage about to leave up to his name in "this situation"
The writs you spit, useless, so I got that "diss information"
You getting cracked way I line punches with that "diss in formation"
Want to get that work when whatcha spit be basic
You a tard, just look in the mirror and "face it"
You can misconstrue, I got it locked it, don't cross it
Got ya tied up, don't make me "abuse a Hostage"
This rappers whack, so I'll put em in a box- Cracker Jack
You getting whipped back to back, cause that's how I crack a chap
I'll make you "hang high" just to show you what's a crack-a-lack
In when rip yo Face off, end this "pay-off" like a jailbird Madoff
This ain't no playoff cause I don't play off
And no, I won't let a trey off
But I will 3-0 you no problem, that's how I "let a tray off"
In other words, I'm on point on points
Go ahead and and "spit that trash" cause we know you conjoint some joints
I don't even need to go on, the sh!& I just took on you is so strong
Someday you'll beat me...nope wrong, I'll putcha behind bars like an old con
Man! shini you spit very complex lyrics and complex rhymes and your wordplay was smooth
YOUR A BEAST IN FREESTYLING

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32148 Apr 26, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>
Nice flip, way to recycle my lines via disinformation
Hostage about to leave up to his name in "this situation"
The writs you spit, useless, so I got that "diss information"
You getting cracked way I line punches with that "diss in formation"
Want to get that work when whatcha spit be basic
You a tard, just look in the mirror and "face it"
You can misconstrue, I got it locked it, don't cross it
Got ya tied up, don't make me "abuse a Hostage"
This rappers whack, so I'll put em in a box- Cracker Jack
You getting whipped back to back, cause that's how I crack a chap
I'll make you "hang high" just to show you what's a crack-a-lack
In when rip yo Face off, end this "pay-off" like a jailbird Madoff
This ain't no playoff cause I don't play off
And no, I won't let a trey off
But I will 3-0 you no problem, that's how I "let a tray off"
In other words, I'm on point on points
Go ahead and and "spit that trash" cause we know you conjoint some joints
I don't even need to go on, the sh!& I just took on you is so strong
Someday you'll beat me...nope wrong, I'll putcha behind bars like an old con
Recycle your lyrics?
Im just putting out the trash
crash bash boom and cash
Put me behind bars im doing a better job than you
Lemme get some rice with that and vegetables too
If im stuck behind bars you can cook up all the asian food
Did you drop some change or did i hear a chink?
Are your eyes open or closed cuz its like you cant blink
If we met in person and freestlyed you'd have to rethink
Then tell your manager to play an old freestyle so you can lip sync
Keep your daily job frying pieces of rice
And think bout what you write before you post it, spell check it and think of a rhyme thats more nice

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#32149 Apr 26, 2013
A bazz wrote:
<quoted text>
Man! shini you spit very complex lyrics and complex rhymes and your wordplay was smooth
YOUR A BEAST IN FREESTYLING
I musta won against you from last time

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#32150 Apr 26, 2013
when i came on dis site dis was how the rankin was for me...
@SRD-his choice of words and vocabs.he and shini bodybagged me,we battled other times thou.
@HHH-he was mainly audio,but he was composed.
@Shinigami-back then shini really used gunbars.
@whiterabbit16-his words were sharp,kind of like @seanny.
@Seanny T-horrorcore,i didnt see much of seanny.
@Black and white frank,his flow 2 was decent.
@Killah-known for his beef with @SRD
@Eric-he would replay quick to a diss against him.
@chi-town lover and chi-town goon,dey were hatin 2 much
@rapSwipe-i wasn't good with flow
now when i watched it well @Srd,was good, he and @shini had beef,and both their posts were good,but i saw dat @Srd was not da best,and he told me.den there was decent and decent 2. Anyway i went on a trip with ma babe after ma battle with,@Rrc,now am back so whats up?

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#32151 Apr 26, 2013
this is were i cross the line,jump your counter and bind your rymes.If we were on a stage,Shini will take, caus am lyriclly insane.
take the magazeen out and clap u with it,later on i will picture u in it.
take the 9 out and blast this hostage,yeah ama ghost this trash waste.
have been watchin dis rapper,i wanna give him props like peanut and butter,he could have been my butler,but dissin shini like dat ama be your Kid-napper.
you cant contain me caus ma range is hard to gauge,u cant picture me,caus i broke the frame.dis jxt the warning.

Since: Apr 13

Location hidden

#32153 Apr 26, 2013
yo! started spittin as i started to drool
rap baby is grown, and battling retarded fools
i'm working hard and kickin this sh!t after school
hot headed, but i'm always tryna' play it cool
my bars are horrific you can say it cruel
i'm terribly terrific, my lines make your head spin
your brain fluids start spinnin like whirlpool

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