freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)
zaeveon

Brunswick, GA

#32042 Apr 19, 2013
sup

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#32043 Apr 19, 2013
I'm using two devices but for some reason I don't see my post. Did you guys see my last 4 bar post on here? I've done two

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#32044 Apr 19, 2013
zaeveon wrote:
sup
Are you going to rap or just be annoying?
Shini

Korea

#32046 Apr 19, 2013
truthbetold wrote:
shut up
u suck like a fart in a bubble bath tube
fuck a damn duck n dug yow own grave just to be buried before you finished you laid down
still standing dead on your feet
checkout clerk baggin haters canned goods a super market sweep
selling marked down product for just as cheap
i chirp thats been beep beeped
digital cable time warner roadrunner remaking cold thunder
no wonder
you not raining on em just a old blunder
n
idiot rymeing hungry like a high school fend nerdy geeken to get a hit
I know this really stinks cause cuz its still some shit..
Your style is sloppy ho, it a total mess like a sloppy joe
Talk about a choppy flow cause I am here to stop these hoes
Your meta's are okay but you need to give time to em-prorate
You sounding pussie like you want that soar taste
Callin me a nerd is like callin the pot black
But this beating will be broadcast like a podcast
You're everywhere, I can't even get a bar count
They all rate 0, like a crooked card count
I'm soaring above you call me starbound
But since you're "special" I'm reality crashing to put "a tard down "
Shini

Korea

#32047 Apr 19, 2013
UPDATE:

Mr. Flames and Rapswipe will advance.

I need votes on SRD vs. G-money and Chi-town vs. Alucard

I will be rolling out some VG villians in Round 2 so be ready.

I need judges on the Pushing Buttons battles. Look for them by searching "pushing buttons" under the hip-hop section.
Shini

Korea

#32048 Apr 19, 2013
chi-town lover wrote:
I'm using two devices but for some reason I don't see my post. Did you guys see my last 4 bar post on here? I've done two
No I have not. Maybe switch between your web broswers. Topix has some coding issues.
Some Random Dude

United States

#32049 Apr 19, 2013
"You're everywhere, I can't even get a bar count."

That was sick Shini, I never would have thought of that.
Shini

Korea

#32050 Apr 19, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
"You're everywhere, I can't even get a bar count."
That was sick Shini, I never would have thought of that.
Thanks, although I feel that one was mediocre at best.

Good job on your Zelda drop btw.

“You only live once”

Since: Mar 13

Location hidden

#32051 Apr 19, 2013
ive got blood flowin in my heart until she leaves and it turns to ice,
my whole world freezes over and spins about twice,

realizing the reality that shes gone and im crushed broken and pounded into small fragments,
why does it always happen to me like Im stagnant,

another night gone wrong,
another broken heart put into a song,

I would turn back time and change the hard struggles we had, not feelin good feel like doin something dumb
but that cant happen and I want it so bad,

you were my world the only thing I could call mine,
but its clear you didn't want it so you drew the line,

I just don't understand why you couldn't love me,
I did all I could to love you and treat you better than anyone could be,

I love you so I have to respect your decision,
but it hit me like a four way car collision,

don't diss on this ok I know the lyrics arnt good but I don't give a sh#t...iats based on feelings of a break up tonight
Shini

Korea

#32052 Apr 19, 2013
PuNicher-we take the game and we straight punish her. Underestimate us and we'll punish herbs cause we straight pun nichers.

All PuNichers please enter the Multi cypher
Missy G

London, UK

#32053 Apr 19, 2013
Some people in England thinking they the bomb,
little do they know I got my explosives on.
Its unfair that some chicks at school think they can rap,
when reality is they look like they are pro at...
nothing at all,
you see them, it'll make ya skin crawl,
nothing but an orange mess.
but baby y'know im different from the rest.
and them fake ass bitches gettin all the pests,
when im sitting here spittin first things that come to my head.
like blah blah black sheep,
can u be a fat sheep?
feeding all the kids next door.
i'l take an axe to your head,
turn your goddamn fur red,
now your heads rolling on the floor.
halloween horror when i get hit with a lawyer,
i simply cant ignore ya, your looking good from your head to your feet.
little did i know, he had a dirty hoe back home so for me its a defeat.
but i got back up fast, after landing on my ass,
and now im out to grab all the things i couldnt have.
well thats too bad considering whats in your mag,
we all know that your a fag.
this rap is really crap lolz :P xxxx
Goddess

Oshawa, Canada

#32054 Apr 20, 2013
Missy G wrote:
Some people in England thinking they the bomb,
little do they know I got my explosives on.
Its unfair that some chicks at school think they can rap,
when reality is they look like they are pro at...
nothing at all,
you see them, it'll make ya skin crawl,
nothing but an orange mess.
but baby y'know im different from the rest.
and them fake ass bitches gettin all the pests,
when im sitting here spittin first things that come to my head.
like blah blah black sheep,
can u be a fat sheep?
feeding all the kids next door.
i'l take an axe to your head,
turn your goddamn fur red,
now your heads rolling on the floor.
halloween horror when i get hit with a lawyer,
i simply cant ignore ya, your looking good from your head to your feet.
little did i know, he had a dirty hoe back home so for me its a defeat.
but i got back up fast, after landing on my ass,
and now im out to grab all the things i couldnt have.
well thats too bad considering whats in your mag,
we all know that your a fag.
this rap is really crap lolz :P xxxx
this the goddess now, so you better be honest now, you obey your leader so quit rapping get on it now, to me your a bunch off bugs I'm the exterminator, and all my n***** know im gonna exterminate her , you like my dishes in the sink pit
I put soap in your mouth clean you off cuz you a dirty b**ch, but for you ill give you lots of water cuz wet thirsty b**ch, remember you obey your leader so stop talking shit and never spit
139_Lenox

Chittenango, NY

#32055 Apr 20, 2013
I was set upon to kill the week and slow, reaper throw the sleeper hold, keep your soul and leave u in the deepest hole, let your body decompose, I'll punch your 16 rounds and let the speakers blow lord jesus knows that u couldn't get out dirt tryin to bleach your clothes, u beatin me? Nah this fa$$ot will just die tryin, but I don't have to blast a bullet I'll just have Sandra Bullock blind side him, I got lyricism, strong bars, dude your just dyin son, and this jack a$$ crashes in his whip more then Ryan dun, bitch you got the face of a statchotory rapist, and the shape of a California raisin, fourth horsemen dealin corpses, bio chemical origins swarmin from law in force mints, sores formin inside of your lungs, your dead before mornin, then your mom has born orphans with diss formed organs, from politicians insane with incisions, car bombs with stained ignitions, your ugly fuckin& face caused train collisions, building fires wear planes were drivin, lakes and rivers startin to flood till it breaks the bridges, water startin to turn red when it drains from ditches, cancer and aids starting to form as the plagues envision, if u don't know where I'm headin I'll explain the difference, I'm the apocalypse my rain is vicious, storms and disasters is just the beginning what I came to finish, by the way this homeless bastar@ is about to get his dopy a$$ kicked, swollen cheeks, gashes, your dome piece fractured, we're finally in Oakland bitc&, and I'm surprised that u could find clothes that fit, it looked like wolverine popped out and closed his fists, and started Punchin u till he fucki& broke his wrists, this quee& fuc$ got a beer gut, watch how my rhymes end your flows, that's a nice shirt, what the fuc$ is that a size ten year old, good thing u didn't bring your giant spectacles, cause u and that nerd from the sandlot would look identical, and this Latino fuc@ licks Mien testicle$, this mother fucke& acts like he's so live, but he should take his ass back to the 305, to go deep throat guys, I'm tired of your trailer trash verses, but I'm pretty sure your mom and your sister are the same exact person, don't let my bars destroy u, instead of clear a sell...what u usin olive oil? And your face got more craters then marshin soil, don't let me dig in your dame, and your bitc$ told me that your dic& is thick as your veins, I'll give u physical pain, I'll upper cut right u then put your ribs in your brain, your fetish so u like to stab your co$k, so does your whole [email protected] block, and smoking a blunt is the only time your raps is hot, bitc$ u never let no canners clap, but the only time u let flame go is a gram of crack, u moved to west Oakland, I titt& fuc$ed your slu@ that's what I call breas$ strokin, that last verse was the worst one yet, and your braces look like it had a birth defect, either that or it looks like a cursive S, we should of kept this freak locked in the shed, and he looks like h$ll raiser with the pins not in his head, u fruit& fu$k, lyrically I chew u up, bitc$ u sound like me when I used to suc$, when you were born your mom said lets call him [email protected] so sweet, and your rhymes sound like an iglue cause there ain't no heat, see this is when your party's crashin, he tried to grow a hitler mustache but ended up lookin like Charlie chapmen, but I'll tell u how this nazi's actin, his girl got fake a$$ hair and tit$ cause this barbies plastic, your cryin cause u got cu& in your left lung, just cause your from the W don't mean your gonna get one, and your the softest in the west son, so how are u gonna make it back to Liverpool when u ate all the bread crumbs, my punches gonna break his grill, he's like that retarde$ spartan that couldn't raise his shield, if u type in Shini on google search, you'll happen to find the most garbage dude on earth for a thirst for lube sense birth
139_Lenox

Chittenango, NY

#32056 Apr 20, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>
Who is this.. This wasn't horrible but who was your first comment at?
ughh if i red what u said right well that was me I've been on here for a while
139_Lenox

Chittenango, NY

#32057 Apr 20, 2013
Shini wrote:
PuNicher-we take the game and we straight punish her. Underestimate us and we'll punish herbs cause we straight pun nichers.
All PuNichers please enter the Multi cypher
Iraq wasn't shi$ but nom was sicker, you jack @ff so much that your palm gets blisters, you act like your nice but your flow is wack, and u take it up the a$$ so much that u got holes in your back, he ain't laughin cause he knows it's a fact, and your like a quee@ Huntin bear u shouldn't of opened your trap, if your girl come around me I'll fuc@ her then ban& your momma, have her deep throatin cheeks open like an anaconda, I beat mad mike, sins, what now I gotta crush mclovin, the only time something comes off your head is when u fuc@ your cousin, dude I don't see how u can get wacker then this, the phony tried to pick up a mic and fractured his wrist, who the fuc$ said this fa@@ot is sick, he hijacks planes and then accidentally crashes the shi@, this shmock is a joke, and he loves coc& in his throat, he raps like he's feminine I say why u rap that way? He puts his hands on his hips saying because I'm    Mad     Ga$
MrFlames

Oshawa, Canada

#32058 Apr 20, 2013
Yea I'm back just been really busy lately with the real world and lots of stuff and appointments , but I'm back but I ain't gonna let it so the crew battle will be starting after this video game one
MrFlames

Oshawa, Canada

#32059 Apr 20, 2013
So u guys better start recruiting more ppl
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Middle River, MD

#32060 Apr 20, 2013
F*ck what you think
I'mma just keep to what i know
That means get dough, spit flow
Ain't down for no b*tch no mo
I didn't wanna have to do this
Cause I don't normally do this shit
But you force these rhymes that i writ
Back like God to Molses on the stone tablet
I can admit i was a fool
Bein dumb in school, breakin the rules
Cause i don't wanna listen
But i think it's time that you listen
All along it's my trust you been missin
No i ain't forget, i never will
The sh*t you done literally made me wanna kill
But you know i'm smarter than that
Sit back write these rhymes in my sweats and LRG hat
Tilted back in my chair rollin a joint
Bout to smoke it soon my finger i point
At you
Don't ask why cause you already know
Every time you ask if i'm mad i say no
But why you askin me?
You were supposed to be my girl
And you go behind my back hidin from me
You think i won't find out girl you crazy
I'm already gettin lazy
To finish this verse
But you never seen a verse like this
Not my lips it's my ass you can kiss
I don't know how my mom convinced me to stay with you
Man, it's just makin me look like a fool
And this sh*t i say is true
Word is bond
I don't even wanna talk to you
With rhymes ill like the flu
Why the f*ck would i need you?
B*tch you broke my heart
It was love at the start
But i got smart
Smart enough to tell you we're through
It's done it's over with
And i really don't wanna hear your excuses
My heart was like a bomb you lit the fuses
And boom
My heart exploded all over my room
I loved you baby
Why'd you have to go and betray me?

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#32061 Apr 20, 2013
139_Lenox wrote:
<quoted text>ughh if i red what u said right well that was me I've been on here for a while
I'm sorry I didn't understand that lol?
Shini

Korea

#32062 Apr 20, 2013
@Lenox

Dropping quantity doesn't equal quality Coming back for you like a serrated razor bladed boomerang I'm what comes back to haunt you

I'm not into nercoph!l!a, but F#@$ this corpse where's the torch, molotov his body until there isn't any sight of his rotten pours

Pours of maggots and leeches from this tool beseech your pieces, I'll make this "personal" Jesus
if he tries to "reach out and touch fate" I'll take a machete to cleave em to pieces

Oh lovely, I got it, he must be Jadakiss, killed him in overdrive
But he needs to "die" (DMX) "WHAT?" die, motherf!@#ing die"

In other words, "go to sleep b!@#$" just take defeat b!@#$
These words just eat this, and quit trying to raise Jesus

F!@# yo long a$$ drop you wannabe sawblade,
You takin shots but we can rest assure you're "with All State"

I'm onna different mental so go ahead and test mine
Talkin about he droppin the best lines, I call it "dead time"

till I remove that head spine and his blood sprays like its wet time from me cutting open his intestines is when "he'll drop his best line"

Then he'll come back again and I'll take another crack at Len
When he reaches static he'll write a "novel rap again"

Then he'll "fall to pieces" like that country song
Then "come back hard" like "a [email protected] be gone"

And then he'll try to "get off" like a "frustrated fluffer"
But he still stank like a frill skank with "blustered rubbers"

Please Len, rappin is ya weekend, quit thinkin with ya weak end
You be trying to drop joints while I be breakin of "ya weak ends"

Please Len, you can never beat Shin, especially since you haven't mastered the art of speakin,

Please Len, ya weak friend, actin like a demon, but you be "swimmin in the deep end"

Please Len, quit chokin when you "see men" you don't want Shin to "put 16 in"

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