“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#31543 Mar 25, 2013
Woke up blade in hand
Shut up blood still stained the sand

Start running I retained the plan
Killed this guy I used to be a fan

Ripped out his artery and vein
Yes since you asked he died hard to me and in vain

I'm still wondering if I'm remained sane
Sane enough stay away from bane

Wait that's me banes my name
And the joker just got me to play his game

Turns out killing wasn't bad it's in the headline
All over the news they said you went redline

They called me feline but you killed my wife Caroline
So now it's up to me to take out your entire bloodline

Bruce Wayne is next he will be done in time
Watch his body as he falls of the coastline

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#31544 Mar 25, 2013
What you think of this twist on the dark knight?
lil carter

Asheboro, NC

#31545 Mar 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
What you think of this twist on the dark knight?
pretty good
lil carter

Asheboro, NC

#31546 Mar 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
Woke up blade in hand
Shut up blood still stained the sand
Start running I retained the plan
Killed this guy I used to be a fan
Ripped out his artery and vein
Yes since you asked he died hard to me and in vain
I'm still wondering if I'm remained sane
Sane enough stay away from bane
Wait that's me banes my name
And the joker just got me to play his game
Turns out killing wasn't bad it's in the headline
All over the news they said you went redline
They called me feline but you killed my wife Caroline
So now it's up to me to take out your entire bloodline
Bruce Wayne is next he will be done in time
Watch his body as he falls of the coastline
blood is in my eyes, u da rapper i despise , just only tell lies, see them glocks by my side, boy u be full of pride, im spittin fire that i ignite, what u want black or white, or asian boy u decide,

YMCMB extra B, that be me, just u wait and see, if u aint a g, u pay fee, i can 9 plus 60, ur girl took a shot and she missed me, then all we did was skeet skeet, no all we are is history

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#31547 Mar 25, 2013
lil carter wrote:
<quoted text>blood is in my eyes, u da rapper i despise , just only tell lies, see them glocks by my side, boy u be full of pride, im spittin fire that i ignite, what u want black or white, or asian boy u decide,

YMCMB extra B, that be me, just u wait and see, if u aint a g, u pay fee, i can 9 plus 60, ur girl took a shot and she missed me, then all we did was skeet skeet, no all we are is history
History is what you call it I call it mystery
As in its a mystery as to where your body be missin see

Your bodies on your floor, killed by the man who paid you to suck some more
Call you the whore, those glocks be no more

I'm the biggest G you've ever seen
I'm the capital G in G.I. Joe and I've taken out many people I don't need a team

You know they say when you use a bodily odor to make fire, that's it comes back and burns you
That would be me I'm the one when you spit fire I come back and you burns new

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#31548 Mar 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>History is what you call it I call it mystery
As in its a mystery as to where your body be missin see

Your bodies on your floor, killed by the man who paid you to suck some more
Call you the whore, those glocks be no more

I'm the biggest G you've ever seen
I'm the capital G in G.I. Joe and I've taken out many people I don't need a team

You know they say when you use a bodily odor to make fire, that's it comes back and burns you
That would be me I'm the one when you spit fire I come back and you burns new
Not really liking the last bar, someone help me out with that last line I could think of anything. But there

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#31549 Mar 25, 2013
Say
I'm so fire a lyrical spit to your rhythm can easily burn the beat.
With the urge to eat, this cursive beast can murder weaks to their worst defeat.
lil carter

Greensboro, NC

#31550 Mar 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>
History is what you call it I call it mystery
As in its a mystery as to where your body be missin see
Your bodies on your floor, killed by the man who paid you to suck some more
Call you the whore, those glocks be no more
I'm the biggest G you've ever seen
I'm the capital G in G.I. Joe and I've taken out many people I don't need a team
You know they say when you use a bodily odor to make fire, that's it comes back and burns you
That would be me I'm the one when you spit fire I come back and you burns new
if u are fire im poisin water cause i got a sick flo, i did ur mom, ur sister, ur girl, hoe hoe hoe, ur right im like a phenix cause i burn down and start anew, well what comes around goes around and i just burnt u, they say jack and jill went up the hill to get a glass of water, well g.i. joe stayed a hoe and choked on d*ck some mo, for u to go against me boy u must be stupid, i make love everyday u can call me f*ckin cupid, this is a rap battle b*tch there aint no sangin, im like a broken down car boy cause im always bangin

Since: Jan 13

Location hidden

#31551 Mar 25, 2013
lil carter wrote:
<quoted text>if u are fire im poisin water cause i got a sick flo, i did ur mom, ur sister, ur girl, hoe hoe hoe, ur right im like a phenix cause i burn down and start anew, well what comes around goes around and i just burnt u, they say jack and jill went up the hill to get a glass of water, well g.i. joe stayed a hoe and choked on d*ck some mo, for u to go against me boy u must be stupid, i make love everyday u can call me f*ckin cupid, this is a rap battle b*tch there aint no sangin, im like a broken down car boy cause im always bangin
Carter try not to use the I did ur mom it's so common for a rookie to say that you wanna keep away from repeating the same words 3 time or u can call urself nicki minaj
lil carter

Greensboro, NC

#31552 Mar 25, 2013
MrFlames wrote:
<quoted text>
Carter try not to use the I did ur mom it's so common for a rookie to say that you wanna keep away from repeating the same words 3 time or u can call urself nicki minaj
ok ty for the advice
M4xprt

Houston, TX

#31553 Mar 25, 2013
Not really a battle rap. Just how I'm feeling
Sittin here in the field, can I go home please?
I'm fucking hungry, but all I got is an mre.
So I'm just chillin, elbows to knees.
What do I want? Chicken noodle or chile with beans?
It don't matter, 10 minutes, then back to work.
Low crawling through the mud, plus my back is hurt.
I'm not complaining, because I chose this shit.
Been at it for so long, all I know is this.
If I could go back, I know I'd do it again
For everyone who doubted me, just to prove it to them.
I'm proud of what i do, I do it for my son and my wife.
Take a second to think, what have you done with your life?

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#31554 Mar 25, 2013
lil carter wrote:
<quoted text>if u are fire im poisin water cause i got a sick flo, i did ur mom, ur sister, ur girl, hoe hoe hoe, ur right im like a phenix cause i burn down and start anew, well what comes around goes around and i just burnt u, they say jack and jill went up the hill to get a glass of water, well g.i. joe stayed a hoe and choked on d*ck some mo, for u to go against me boy u must be stupid, i make love everyday u can call me f*ckin cupid, this is a rap battle b*tch there aint no sangin, im like a broken down car boy cause im always bangin
Grammar is key in some battles it looks better, only use improper grammar or bad spelling when you use a slant rhyme.
lil carter

Oak Ridge, NC

#31555 Mar 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>
Grammar is key in some battles it looks better, only use improper grammar or bad spelling when you use a slant rhyme.
i used bad grammer to add syllables to the bars cause it would sound weird w/o it and i used bad spelling to make it rhyme

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#31556 Mar 25, 2013
lil carter wrote:
<quoted text>if u are fire im poisin water cause i got a sick flo, i did ur mom, ur sister, ur girl, hoe hoe hoe, ur right im like a phenix cause i burn down and start anew, well what comes around goes around and i just burnt u, they say jack and jill went up the hill to get a glass of water, well g.i. joe stayed a hoe and choked on d*ck some mo, for u to go against me boy u must be stupid, i make love everyday u can call me f*ckin cupid, this is a rap battle b*tch there aint no sangin, im like a broken down car boy cause im always bangin
Your your poisoned water then you must be flammable
That's right CH2 buddy ill burn you my type of heat is unattainable
Flowing so hard your thinking your placable?
Your picking up jail soap, bending and screaming," I'm available!"
I'm like an animal I'm hardly tamable
Still my flow is still namable

Neon (Ne) because I glow brighter than the sun call it bright
I'm a roller coaster ain't no one gonna spit faster than me by the way thats faster than light
Yes I'm speaking to you lil carter you mite
If I hade my guess you probably watched and read twilight
But you couldn't reach the top shelf to put them back because of your height
I'll get it just by spitting call it your plight

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#31557 Mar 25, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
<quoted text>Your your poisoned water then you must be flammable
That's right CH2 buddy ill burn you my type of heat is unattainable
Flowing so hard your thinking your placable?
Your picking up jail soap, bending and screaming," I'm available!"
I'm like an animal I'm hardly tamable
Still my flow is still namable

Neon (Ne) because I glow brighter than the sun call it bright
I'm a roller coaster ain't no one gonna spit faster than me by the way thats faster than light
Yes I'm speaking to you lil carter you mite
If I hade my guess you probably watched and read twilight
But you couldn't reach the top shelf to put them back because of your height
I'll get it just by spitting call it your plight
"If your poisoned water"

“You only live once”

Since: Mar 13

Location hidden

#31558 Mar 25, 2013
i havent been on for awhile....anyone wanna battle

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#31559 Mar 25, 2013
And what is a while to you?
Anonymous

Sedgefield, UK

#31560 Mar 26, 2013
g- money robertson wrote:
i havent been on for awhile....anyone wanna battle
Yeah, was'sup wit chu! My man Phaze is right what is a while to you?

Huh!

'Cuz I just looked back at some of your previous posts and you had your head in the clouds saying that your shit was hotter than most of ours. Quit with the dreaming because eventually your childish ass will die of a cot death.

"Ur a lil' bitch kid"!
Anonymous

Sedgefield, UK

#31561 Mar 26, 2013
g- money robertson wrote:
i havent been on for awhile....anyone wanna battle
I might aswell go a few rounds with yo' stupid punk ass anyway.

Mike Tyson/Muhammad Ali style!

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#31562 Mar 26, 2013
I got this Leezun

When im in a mood to destroy don't dare to stop this walking paradox
Scared or not, facing this legend leaves you prepared to rot
I'm have you most religious in this time of destruction keeping your prayers to God.
I'm like explosions in hell.
Get roasted in cells and start chokin and yell and lose all hope in yourself.
None of ya pussy rappers ever came close to me.
Now you rapping in this rap game hopelessly as I watch your brain openly.
You rappers lame and ima cut ass when my daggers shank.
Fast with blades inflicting massive pain leaving you with a damaged brain and worthless like a hazard waste.
Look into the masters face but don't make eye contact cause im like medusa having flames.
Your raps are coming with no taste like you HAVE WATER.
Im going off like KD in the LAST QUARTER.
Im more traumatizing to these fellow victims then a PAST SLAUGHTER

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