freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

[Shini]

MrFlames wrote:

Does shini have a phone u can tex him through idk

I can access the website via my Optimus.

[MrFlames]

MrFlames wrote:

MrFlames wrote:
This Niger wants to vs the rookie of the year
He better watch out cuz I'm the one who they fear
Gonna mess him up he gonna start glitching
Allergic to the flames that's y he be flitching
This dumbass dude sounds like a phoney
Wannabe Dracula but he still plays with ponys
Kicking ur ass that's my lvl 1 mission
Now that's easier than 2+2 addition
For ur birthday ill get u toys ,doll shit
Isn't that what u lil gay boys call it
Takes this dude 24 hrs to make a rap
And even though its still a peice of crap
Mrflames I'm the reason for a debate
I already won let me start to celebrate
As we all know Dracula burns in the light
And I'm made of flames how u gonna fight
Done
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XxAlucardxX wrote:
Your insane for wanting to battle me,
I'll blow out your candle flames/
because I will dismantle your name and change it to
"f-ing lame"/
your typing from your ipad, well I visit you and kill you while recording murder on a tripad, and send the video to your mom and dad/
you can't beat me in a physical or verbal fight,
your itty small mabye 1 inch in height,your the turd of a turmite/
Will I show some mercy? I just might,
remember I'm draculas son, so keep an eye open at night because I may bite/
allflamerz.com is comedy like a sitcom, it's probably cause I fuck3d your mom
in your astronomy stickered room, I gave my comets to her like a bomb/
saying I take 24 hours to make a rap,maybe true,
but its better than ALL the stuff you've came up with in the 40 minutes it took you/
because my lyrics just shook you, your the dumbass who accepted the battle stupid,
watch me unravel few spaded tip arrows and shoot your ass like cupid/
U used chi-town rhymes on me but we cool

Vote

[Seanny T]

ya guys, shini can access this site via his own personal optimus prime transformer. sheesh. get it already. hahahah.

[rapSwipe]

Yo seanny,whats up?anyway i didnt fully understand wat u mean?

[rapSwipe]

alright i read it again,i now get it.Anyway whos up for a battle?

[Shini]

Seanny T wrote:

ya guys, shini can access this site via his own personal optimus prime transformer. sheesh. get it already. hahahah.

LOL It's an LG phone.

[Shini]

I'mma keep this short and sweet:

Flow: Flames (Alucard's was good but flames was a hair better)
Multis: Alucard (His were more complex)
Punches: Alucard (his were more complex)
Scheme: Alucard
Nameplay: Alucard (I'll put "flames" out)
Humor: Flames (Flames got this. He actually wrote 1 decent punchline, too.)
Set-Ups: Flames
Enjoyment:Flames (It flowed well plus it was funny.)

This is a new catagory system I got off of rapdogs. Shout outs to them. This was a good round and I can see the punchline tourney has benefited Alucard. It is about even according to the cards, so it is about just who was more complex. Alucard was a little more complex. Flames might have wrote it in 40 minutes, but it doesn't mean that you couldn't have spent a little extra time to complicate your lines.

That being said, Alucard and Flames: don't recycle or feed off of scripts. You could get banned on other sites for that.

MVGT: Alucard

[Shini]

It is time to reinterate,I'm woven into rappers inner fate,
So call me "Father Time" way I "end their fate"

Lemme demostrate, unlock the mind of Demon's Gate
Deemed with hate, break em down call it "Demon Rape"

Lyrical backhanded, dice you up like backgammon
MCs get rolled up like it's "Black Mammoth"

Get yo "back damaged"
people be wantin the knife in ya like Jack managed,
then they'll be gone like the "facts vanished"

Spit proppa or become bukkake d!ck fodda
Maury won't be able to "pick fathers"
I'm just here to "switch todders"

Call this the kimchi movement
Gotta super uppercut Shinryuken

Original style don't even try to spoof Shin
Cause in life that you'll take a L= losin

Got those punches that'll sock you up
Yet that are clean like Oxycut
Everlasting Rocky Tough
You stepping to me is not enough
Fast flying like a hocky puck
I'm sick like a hawking Pug
It's 3am lemme Slim Shady it
Stack up the bodies like I Tim Bradied it
Come off classic like I got those 80 hits
Cause you'll always believe in me no Athiest

[MrFlames]

@shini
I didn't wanna use mulitis I felt it would ruin the whole rap , I also tried to keep it orginial

[MrFlames]

We should do crew shit would be more competitive

[MrFlames]

How do change ur name

[chitown-lover]

Shini wrote:

It is time to reinterate,I'm woven into rappers inner fate,
So call me "Father Time" way I "end their fate"
Lemme demostrate, unlock the mind of Demon's Gate
Deemed with hate, break em down call it "Demon Rape"
Lyrical backhanded, dice you up like backgammon
MCs get rolled up like it's "Black Mammoth"
Get yo "back damaged"
people be wantin the knife in ya like Jack managed,
then they'll be gone like the "facts vanished"
Spit proppa or become bukkake d!ck fodda
Maury won't be able to "pick fathers"
I'm just here to "switch todders"
Call this the kimchi movement
Gotta super uppercut Shinryuken
Original style don't even try to spoof Shin
Cause in life that you'll take a L= losin
Got those punches that'll sock you up
Yet that are clean like Oxycut
Everlasting Rocky Tough
You stepping to me is not enough
Fast flying like a hocky puck
I'm sick like a hawking Pug
It's 3am lemme Slim Shady it
Stack up the bodies like I Tim Bradied it
Come off classic like I got those 80 hits
Cause you'll always believe in me no Athiest

Nice drop

[MrFlames]

Idk, y I have so many raps acting like there from the hood, when did Toronto , Canada become the "hood"

[Shini]

MrFlames wrote:

@shini
I didn't wanna use mulitis I felt it would ruin the whole rap , I also tried to keep it orginial

It's fine. I have won battles without using a lot of multis. If you can exexute your art without using them, then it's okay. But if you're not going to have them make sure you dominate in other catagories.

I don't use a lot of nameplay for that reason, unless I can think of something that would go well with the drop. Since I did that KOTD drop against SRD, I used DUMBS FOUND DEAD. Dumb is the sound inside Random like RanDumb and DUMBFOUNDEAD was an Asian battle rapper who decided to just make music instead. He had 1 KOTD battle so I just threw him in there. DUMBFOUNDEAD was better known for Grindtime.

[MrFlames]

This forum is slowing down a lot now , like 1 post every 3 hrs

I'm always on this forum cuz I am connected to Internet on my iPad and iPhone so ill always be here

[MrFlames]

I'm thinking of 2 crews

Leader : shini : seany t , srd , alucard , RRc, phaze

Leader : chi town : mulisha , killa , mr . Flames ,rap king, DJ.

[MrFlames]

Seanny T wrote:

finally someone else on here is makin a track lol. i got a couple new ones comin around the end of march too.

Hey seany I'm finished the lyrics and I'm starting the audio part I'm kinda surprised my voice is not as bad as I thought it was

[MrFlames]

Now I'm looking for the right beat to go with it , I really liked the flow in the lyrics, haha maybe we could do a collab but that has to be around may , and June

[Rappin Cheif]

I know this is a sort rap but I'll be back on a bit later.. What do ya'll think.

D-ville is where i hail the south is where I'll prevail a holy terror in your rearview mirror blinding ya like a solarflare while u flee with despair cuz Im sayin my morning prayer.

[Seanny T]

lol interesting crew idea....
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@flames: once ur done ur song make sure to put a link on here so we can listen to it. make a reverbnation page that way we can see each others profiles and stuff. that goes for anyone else on here, if u wanna make music, i suggest a reverbnation page over the 'new' myspace lol myspace sucks. use reverb. u get way more attention plus ppl might message u to do a collab on a song. iv gotten a few offers, and made a few myself. i have done 2 collabs with ppl from both the USA and the UK.