“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#30308 Feb 4, 2013
what do ppl think of my drop?????? i feel i need to prove myself as top 3 material, that was my first of many ill be posting about topics i choose.

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#30309 Feb 4, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:
i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"
RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
Tht was good dude.. Readin tht made me feel like it was happening to me...(Srry tht ya lost ur Grandma)

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#30310 Feb 4, 2013
DJ HellNo wrote:
<quoted text>What do u look for in the raps to determine a winner..
Just do a basic breakdown.

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#30311 Feb 4, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>
There are a ton, but then again I live in Asia. Hip-Hop these days is multinational. Every country in the world has their own scene and it is beautiful.
Some of the more famous are Jin, TimothyDeLaGhetto (Traphik), DumbFounDead, Mike Shinoda, A-Class, Tantrum, FarEastMovement. Sorry I don't know many Russian rappers though. Just the guy who made the "I wanna battle Eminem song."
Cool.. Im going to have to listen to some of them

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#30312 Feb 4, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:

i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"

RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
If I had a like button I would make multiple accounts to hit it multiple times.

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#30313 Feb 4, 2013
Seanny T this verse was my fav.

"did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension, into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned"

I knew I had some people in da wrong spots in my picks... There just way to many people to place in right spots..

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#30314 Feb 4, 2013
i know, and i appreciate even being on the list lol. i appreciate every bit of recognition ill ever get. every fan. every 'good job'. every pat on the back. i work hard and strive to do better each and every time. sometimes i dont drop for awhile and ppl think my pen game gone, but its never gone, just taking a break lol. but when i get onto emotional subjects like that, or when im describing myself covered in gore as i shred a fellow MC apart, those r the 2 topics that i reign supreme. next tourney we should do an emotional one. lets get the tears flowing as ppl vote haha.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#30315 Feb 4, 2013
i wanna see what srd and shini thought of it lol

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#30316 Feb 4, 2013
An Emotional Tourney, I'm down...

Oh Im thinking about entering this year's horrorcore tourney also.. Ive add me verse's to my last horrorcore rap so I got tht to use. Im trying to start workin on a new one..
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#30317 Feb 5, 2013
This was the best storytelling on this site thus far. Sorry about your loss. Lost mine at 92 on December 26th.
Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:
i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"
RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#30318 Feb 5, 2013
To all those fans that put me in their top 3, thanks. I will continue to improve. I am always brainstorming word schemes and different flow patterns. I want to elevate to the point when other artists visits this site, I send shivers across the web from other sites. It's sometimes hard to expand my fanbase though mainly due to South Korea's privacy laws.

Also let's get some textcee callabos going. We had stuff like this a while ago, but it sort of died out.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#30319 Feb 5, 2013
shini, could u break it down like wat worked best, wat didnt, how i coulda improved it? i wanna actually use this verse for a song and id like ur imput! thanks man!
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#30320 Feb 5, 2013
I think those of you who have lost family, should make a song together as emotion is strong and mutually tying.
Shini

Korea

#30323 Feb 5, 2013
I would perhaps clean up the flow in certain parts. There are certain parts that you can either add or take away a word and it will flow better. Other than that, I wouldn't change any of the content because it is so vivid. I don't blame you if you wanted to cry. Also I would test the lyrics to another beat because you might have to change the flow pattern of your delivery. If you do it to the 'Goodbye' Slaughterhouse beat then I think it would work well, but if your brought in an original beat the flow pattern itself might be tricky to do. When I wrote that Ill Mind Piece a few months back, mastering how to flow properly to that beat was extremely difficult because there was a break then a beat change. I had to really edit my lyrics to make it mesh well and flow together.
Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:
i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"
RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
Some Random Dude

United States

#30324 Feb 5, 2013
Shini wrote:
To all those fans that put me in their top 3, thanks. I will continue to improve. I am always brainstorming word schemes and different flow patterns. I want to elevate to the point when other artists visits this site, I send shivers across the web from other sites. It's sometimes hard to expand my fanbase though mainly due to South Korea's privacy laws.
Also let's get some textcee callabos going. We had stuff like this a while ago, but it sort of died out.
Hopefully you give your thought and others do too, I think if you help me improve. We'd be best for collabs. Mainly because our styles are the closest fitting together.
Anonymous

Sedgefield, UK

#30325 Feb 5, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:
i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"
RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
Awesome drop as always. Sorry about your grandma "bro"!
Anonymous

Sedgefield, UK

#30326 Feb 5, 2013
XI-Phaze-IX wrote:
Well seanny t I believe I was on this site before you soo you actually never seen me first came on this site on the name of king Phaze. And yeah even tho killa isn't the friendliest, you have to accept his bars lol and I also appreciate it seanny
Is this me you're referring too?

Since: Dec 12

Staten Island, NY

#30327 Feb 5, 2013
Ohhh no lol I always refer to you as triple l man but I mean killah or however he spells it.

Since: Jan 13

Location hidden

#30328 Feb 5, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
<quoted text>
98% of rappers are Black
2% Are White
Where are the Mexican's, Russians, Chinese, Japanese, etc.?
You are extremely narrow minded and I can't take you seriously.
I'm not taking j serious either so I could careless

Since: Jan 13

Location hidden

#30329 Feb 5, 2013
All I said was rap comes from a black background then u turn it in a giant argument

I said the truth u don't wanna believe me so okay now stop with this bull

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