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#30304
Feb 4, 2013
 
MrFlames wrote:
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I'm not gonna explain anything else to u cuz u don't wanna listen
98% of rappers are Black
2% Are White
Where are the Mexican's, Russians, Chinese, Japanese, etc.?
You are extremely narrow minded and I can't take you seriously.

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#30305
Feb 4, 2013
 
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:

i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"

RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?

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#30306
Feb 4, 2013
 
Some Random Dude wrote:
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98% of rappers are Black
2% Are White
Where are the Mexican's, Russians, Chinese, Japanese, etc.?
You are extremely narrow minded and I can't take you seriously.
Umm I got a question Teach.. How manu russian, chinese, japanese, ect.. Rappers have u heard of?

Cuz I haven't heard of any..

Im not being a smartass or anything..
Shini

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Umm I got a question Teach.. How manu russian, chinese, japanese, ect.. Rappers have u heard of?
Cuz I haven't heard of any..
Im not being a smartass or anything..
There are a ton, but then again I live in Asia. Hip-Hop these days is multinational. Every country in the world has their own scene and it is beautiful.

Some of the more famous are Jin, TimothyDeLaGhetto (Traphik), DumbFounDead, Mike Shinoda, A-Class, Tantrum, FarEastMovement. Sorry I don't know many Russian rappers though. Just the guy who made the "I wanna battle Eminem song."

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#30308
Feb 4, 2013
 
what do ppl think of my drop?????? i feel i need to prove myself as top 3 material, that was my first of many ill be posting about topics i choose.

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#30309
Feb 4, 2013
 
Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:
i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"
RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
Tht was good dude.. Readin tht made me feel like it was happening to me...(Srry tht ya lost ur Grandma)

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#30310
Feb 4, 2013
 
DJ HellNo wrote:
<quoted text>What do u look for in the raps to determine a winner..
Just do a basic breakdown.

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#30311
Feb 4, 2013
 
Shini wrote:
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There are a ton, but then again I live in Asia. Hip-Hop these days is multinational. Every country in the world has their own scene and it is beautiful.
Some of the more famous are Jin, TimothyDeLaGhetto (Traphik), DumbFounDead, Mike Shinoda, A-Class, Tantrum, FarEastMovement. Sorry I don't know many Russian rappers though. Just the guy who made the "I wanna battle Eminem song."
Cool.. Im going to have to listen to some of them

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Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:

i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"

RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
If I had a like button I would make multiple accounts to hit it multiple times.

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Seanny T this verse was my fav.

"did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension, into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned"

I knew I had some people in da wrong spots in my picks... There just way to many people to place in right spots..

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#30314
Feb 4, 2013
 
i know, and i appreciate even being on the list lol. i appreciate every bit of recognition ill ever get. every fan. every 'good job'. every pat on the back. i work hard and strive to do better each and every time. sometimes i dont drop for awhile and ppl think my pen game gone, but its never gone, just taking a break lol. but when i get onto emotional subjects like that, or when im describing myself covered in gore as i shred a fellow MC apart, those r the 2 topics that i reign supreme. next tourney we should do an emotional one. lets get the tears flowing as ppl vote haha.

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#30315
Feb 4, 2013
 
i wanna see what srd and shini thought of it lol

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#30316
Feb 4, 2013
 
An Emotional Tourney, I'm down...

Oh Im thinking about entering this year's horrorcore tourney also.. Ive add me verse's to my last horrorcore rap so I got tht to use. Im trying to start workin on a new one..
Shini

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#30317
Feb 5, 2013
 
This was the best storytelling on this site thus far. Sorry about your loss. Lost mine at 92 on December 26th.
Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:
i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"
RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
Shini

Seoul, Korea

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#30318
Feb 5, 2013
 
To all those fans that put me in their top 3, thanks. I will continue to improve. I am always brainstorming word schemes and different flow patterns. I want to elevate to the point when other artists visits this site, I send shivers across the web from other sites. It's sometimes hard to expand my fanbase though mainly due to South Korea's privacy laws.

Also let's get some textcee callabos going. We had stuff like this a while ago, but it sort of died out.

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#30319
Feb 5, 2013
 
shini, could u break it down like wat worked best, wat didnt, how i coulda improved it? i wanna actually use this verse for a song and id like ur imput! thanks man!
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#30320
Feb 5, 2013
 
I think those of you who have lost family, should make a song together as emotion is strong and mutually tying.
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#30323
Feb 5, 2013
 
I would perhaps clean up the flow in certain parts. There are certain parts that you can either add or take away a word and it will flow better. Other than that, I wouldn't change any of the content because it is so vivid. I don't blame you if you wanted to cry. Also I would test the lyrics to another beat because you might have to change the flow pattern of your delivery. If you do it to the 'Goodbye' Slaughterhouse beat then I think it would work well, but if your brought in an original beat the flow pattern itself might be tricky to do. When I wrote that Ill Mind Piece a few months back, mastering how to flow properly to that beat was extremely difficult because there was a break then a beat change. I had to really edit my lyrics to make it mesh well and flow together.
Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:
i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"
RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
Some Random Dude

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Feb 5, 2013
 
Shini wrote:
To all those fans that put me in their top 3, thanks. I will continue to improve. I am always brainstorming word schemes and different flow patterns. I want to elevate to the point when other artists visits this site, I send shivers across the web from other sites. It's sometimes hard to expand my fanbase though mainly due to South Korea's privacy laws.
Also let's get some textcee callabos going. We had stuff like this a while ago, but it sort of died out.
Hopefully you give your thought and others do too, I think if you help me improve. We'd be best for collabs. Mainly because our styles are the closest fitting together.
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#30325
Feb 5, 2013
 
Seanny T wrote:
to slaughterhouses 'goodbye' beat:
i remember that day, its been almost a year,
when i woke to the phone call that made me shed a tear,
voice echoed in my head as realization hit,
sat numb in my chair, i didnt want to admit,
what had happened that morning on my very special day,
breathing shallow, eyes glazed, senses starting to really sway,
i tried to talk to someone but i couldn't even convey,
the pain in my heart raw as her memory faded away,
i couldn't leave school so i had to miss the funeral,
and i always thought id live to see her reach her 100th numeral,
ill remember her smile, her pearl necklace that was plastic,
to poor to buy a real one, yet a proud devout catholic,
grief consumed my thoughts, i could barely bare the loss,
got on my knees in prayer and made the sign of the cross,
did my first confession, i pleaded for her ascension,
into heaven she went as i imagined her name beckoned,
i couldnt move, i stared at my wall for 3 hours,
picturing her laying peacefully on a bed of flowers,
thinking lifes too short, and that life aint fair,
but if her pain was cut short then i couldnt really despair,
as we pulled up to her site, i felt deaths cruel grip,
and repeated sorry in my head as i delved into a guilt trip,
when i finally saw her grave, i looked up to the sky,
said 'wait for me up there grandma...goodbye"
RIP Grandma. Not gunna lie, i got teary eyed writing this, and im not ashamed to admit it. this is what i love about hip hop...expressing yourself and your feelings. dealing with death is hard, but ill always know i have music to fall back on during the tough times. if it wasnt for certain songs that i listened too, id probly have chronic depression cause of some of the events in my life. luckily i have good friends and family and a loving GF. when i make lyrics like this, i pour my heart into it. like my song shadow, where i talk about being adopted. lifes tough. what do yall think of my drop?
Awesome drop as always. Sorry about your grandma "bro"!

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