freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

Shini wrote:

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Yeah sure. We can get it in. I'm going to rest first, but I'll drop later.

Under a new thread though bro.

Your a badass hoe,
Making lots of doe,
Trying to go low,
But cant get mo,

RappinRollerCoaster wrote:

<quoted text>I'm not tall enough yet I'm almost 6 foot
You see that rhyme was probably took
I'm rapping fast than a coaster you'll find me in a book
Now here's the hook
I'm not HHH b(itch I have respect
You think you can beat me might wanna rebet
I may not be there but I rap like a vet
That's been set your the dog who wants to get a pet

Ill show you a toaster me your right I'm a lyrical roaster
Not much of a boaster but My raps leave post war
Come on I'm a coaster your just someone who I call a poacher

No disrespect

Here

Your still hot like ice,
Spittin' with no better flow, you think your rhymes nice,
But seriously that has to be a no, how could you delight ?
I step into the arena, and start spittin' the real,
You catch one of my really 'cold' spit, and you get 'quick'ly-ill'
My body is stone, so I go hard, and your no more than steel,
See my tactics, and start to wonder, if its something you can steal,
You conceal, your own fate, by choosing, and leading, your own confinement,
Try to complain, but your the one who turned on, and sided,
Decided to front to me, and now you end up in back,
By the time you reach me, come up with your improved little rap .

Bill if you really want to earn any respect here go bar for bar with someone and have people judge. Since you probably don't want me to judge, I won't judge. Till you earn your stripes you need to stop mouthing off to other people. For real, that sh!t would get you popped in a New York minute. I know you're not doing that sh!t in real life. You show some promise after the "white people" rub two word together scheme, but seriously if you go on any professional forum with those lyrics and battled someone you would lose instantly. It would be a total body. People do not netcee to get famous,(although it can help) people netcee to improve the quality of their content.

SomeRandomDude wrote:

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Under a new thread though bro.

I already dropped first. Go ahead and drop.

RappinRollerCoaster wrote:

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You know bill I don't think I've seen you attack one of the top 10 rappers on here!?!? So how are you going to run the show if you can't beat me let alone Seanny or HHH or shini or phaze

He did take a subliminal shot at me and I've been beating him senseless since then.

Shini can u judge mine and rrc rap? Mine is on page 1211

Imsomeone Vs RRC

Yo RappingRolleraCoaster,
Ill pop you up just like a toaster,
My rhymez will roast ya,
Ill knock you off your composure,
We aint on the same level get on the other side,
You call yourself a coaster but you aint tall enough for this ride,
I catch versus just like a mit,
You aint a rapper just HHH Bitch!!

No disrezpect
I'm not tall enough yet I'm almost 6 foot
You see that rhyme was probably took
I'm rapping fast than a coaster you'll find me in a book
Now here's the hook
I'm not HHH b(itch I have respect
You think you can beat me might wanna rebet
I may not be there but I rap like a vet
That's been set your the dog who wants to get a pet

Ill show you a toaster me your right I'm a lyrical roaster
Not much of a boaster but My raps leave post war
Come on I'm a coaster your just someone who I call a poacher

No disrespect

I think RRC took this.

Flow Imsomeone
Content RRC
Multis RRC
Punches RRC
Schemes Slight edge to RRC

This was nothing crazy. I think both need to step their content up. It wasn't bad though. Imsomeone had a better flow and RRC edged him in other catas. Nice try with the personal, but it didn't really resonate well. I would have added information to make it more personal.

http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TC7B...

Shini vs. Somerandomedude round 1

Wrong link disregard
go to this one:

http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TCQS...

subliminal shots get spit out like a non-alcoholic beer
alla theez rappers bustin' n should be makin' withdrawels here
lemme make it more clear
i can learn em and loan ya. raps to diplomas i got it all here
jus get in line n remember spit aint interest free
spit somethin' that'll interest me
but hurry rates climb
as i run outta ink
the more u liable to sink
quotes to notes fast have ya stacked to the ceilin'
print press n pass em out to any rapper that's willin'
to stand to me (the man) wit his hand out n pray
that what i hand out he can re-pay...

Shini wrote:

<quoted text>He did take a subliminal shot at me and I've been beating him senseless since then.

He still hasn't beat us so how can he run the show?

Shini wrote:

Imsomeone Vs RRC

Yo RappingRolleraCoaster,
Ill pop you up just like a toaster,
My rhymez will roast ya,
Ill knock you off your composure,
We aint on the same level get on the other side,
You call yourself a coaster but you aint tall enough for this ride,
I catch versus just like a mit,
You aint a rapper just HHH Bitch!!

No disrezpect
I'm not tall enough yet I'm almost 6 foot
You see that rhyme was probably took
I'm rapping fast than a coaster you'll find me in a book
Now here's the hook
I'm not HHH b(itch I have respect
You think you can beat me might wanna rebet
I may not be there but I rap like a vet
That's been set your the dog who wants to get a pet

Ill show you a toaster me your right I'm a lyrical roaster
Not much of a boaster but My raps leave post war
Come on I'm a coaster your just someone who I call a poacher

No disrespect

I think RRC took this.

Flow Imsomeone
Content RRC
Multis RRC
Punches RRC
Schemes Slight edge to RRC

This was nothing crazy. I think both need to step their content up. It wasn't bad though. Imsomeone had a better flow and RRC edged him in other catas. Nice try with the personal, but it didn't really resonate well. I would have added information to make it more personal.

Thanks.

Here some one juge mine it more of a diss but who cares Your still hot like ice,
Spittin' with no better flow, you think your rhymes nice,
But seriously that has to be a no, how could you delight ?
I step into the arena, and start spittin' the real,
You catch one of my really 'cold' spit, and you get 'quick'ly-ill'
My body is stone, so I go hard, and your no more than steel,
See my tactics, and start to wonder, if its something you can steal,
You conceal, your own fate, by choosing, and leading, your own confinement,
Try to complain, but your the one who turned on, and sided,
Decided to front to me, and now you end up in back,
By the time you reach me, come up with your improved little rap .

To shini Your still hot like ice,
Spittin' with no better flow, you think your rhymes nice,
But seriously that has to be a no, how could you delight ?
I step into the arena, and start spittin' the real,
You catch one of my really 'cold' spit, and you get 'quick'ly-ill'
My body is stone, so I go hard, and your no more than steel,
See my tactics, and start to wonder, if its something you can steal,
You conceal, your own fate, by choosing, and leading, your own confinement,
Try to complain, but your the one who turned on, and sided,
Decided to front to me, and now you end up in back,
By the time you reach me, come up with your improved little rap .

Yo
I could dis this guy but i think his rap says enough
He sucks, is this guy really thinking hes tough
*****, that isn't a rhyme, its the start of a book
I read it through once, wasn't worth the second look
You sit and brag about how you're having sex with his mom
But the only action you ever get is your **** in the CD-ROM
This whole threads a show, and you performed awfully
Next time you come around, remember the ENTER key

drive way*

Michaellgib wrote:

To shini Your still hot like ice,
Spittin' with no better flow, you think your rhymes nice,
But seriously that has to be a no, how could you delight ?
I step into the arena, and start spittin' the real,
You catch one of my really 'cold' spit, and you get 'quick'ly-ill'
My body is stone, so I go hard, and your no more than steel,
See my tactics, and start to wonder, if its something you can steal,
You conceal, your own fate, by choosing, and leading, your own confinement,
Try to complain, but your the one who turned on, and sided,
Decided to front to me, and now you end up in back,
By the time you reach me, come up with your improved little rap .

Yeah I'm HOT AS ICE when I'm A FRY-A-MAN
But you get no love so DIE A MAN (diamond)

Steal your tactics, you can't hack it
Like ACME ya pratice is whack kid

Ya body is going headless in a casket
You recycled those raps b!tch and you're a fagg@t

Put the mic down don't challenge me in a game of fisticuffs
If I bet money that my life sh!ts on yours...that'd be 50 bucks

Actually Steel is harder than stone
Ya rhymes don't sound smarter when stoned

If I didn't address you it's cause you have no purpose
Other being good Tissue, your rhymes are worthless

Michaellgib wrote:

Yo
I could dis this guy but i think his rap says enough
He sucks, is this guy really thinking hes tough
*****, that isn't a rhyme, its the start of a book
I read it through once, wasn't worth the second look
You sit and brag about how you're having sex with his mom
But the only action you ever get is your **** in the CD-ROM
This whole threads a show, and you performed awfully
Next time you come around, remember the ENTER key

yo just because you spit three raps don't mean you're good. Its all about quantity not quality.