freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

[Tmoney]

I don't know why y'all are gangin on poor ol Connecticut.
The only thing that i know is that y'all fuckin better get,
off this kids ass and stop bein so ignorant.
go ahead keep it up, ill start gettin belligerent.
You all need to grow up, and start actin your ages.
Instead of gettin in real fights, over a text based pages.
I wanna quit while im ahead, but bitch, im just gettin started.
Im with mike on this one, you are fuckin retarded.
I hope one day you'll decide to be done,
cuz you should already know that i got this shit won.
I think its funny your serious, i only do this for fun.
So don't get too furious, cause this has only begun.
This battles a new series, and this is page one.

[ImSomeone]

RappinRollerCoaster wrote:

<quoted text>
I think that was meant for you IM so rap it up this time is going to be much harder for you step it up.

Ok
lets go

My vocals vandal,
lick the wax off my candle as a sample,
stock up on tampons,
my verses haunt you like a phantom,
I spit so much fire your ashes incinerated,
when im done with you you gun be obliverated,
My sins are created by the way that i say it,
My raps are hot and yours are cold,
Mine are so nice they make your mind explode,
When my mind unfolds,
the truth is told,
Its that you like guys,
And You like to blow,
Im the best,
I got style,
Ill leave you lost with out words like papa doc on 8 mile

(Feed Back Please)

[Seanny T]

HHH and SHINI please look to the thread for your final for the world tourney and make sure u drop soon!!! we need to finish the tourney! the thread has all the info u need.

[RappinRollerCoas ter]

HHH judge away.

[ImSomeone]

RappinRollerCoaster wrote:

HHH judge away.

Rappin wats ure opunion about the battle

[RappinRollerCoas ter]

ImSomeone wrote:

<quoted text>Rappin wats ure opunion about the battle

Breakdown:

Flow:Imsomeone
Multi:revelations
Rhyme:imsomeone only because his rhymes were easier to pick out
Structure:revelations
Punches:imsomeone

Mvgt imsomeone

This is my honest breakdown an utter close match rev it seemed like you weren't even battling instead you were like telling a story but still much better.

Im you need to work on more complex rhyme schemes and multis, rev need more insults more punch.

Great battle now it's HHH on the spot

[Jigsaw]

Anyone wanna battle

[ImSum1Else]

ImSomeone wrote:

<quoted text>
Ok
lets go
My vocals vandal,
lick the wax off my candle as a sample,
stock up on tampons,
my verses haunt you like a phantom,
I spit so much fire your ashes incinerated,
when im done with you you gun be obliverated,
My sins are created by the way that i say it,
My raps are hot and yours are cold,
Mine are so nice they make your mind explode,
When my mind unfolds,
the truth is told,
Its that you like guys,
And You like to blow,
Im the best,
I got style,
Ill leave you lost with out words like papa doc on 8 mile
(Feed Back Please)

Once upon a time there was a kid that I knew in school,
I'm not gonna say his name, but he was pretty cool,
we rap battled each other, then teamed up for others to dual,
we beat em' every time because our ryhmes were pretty cruel,
I'm not taking your name, I just made it pretty similar,
I'm not a stranger,you know me, so don't feel insecure,
re-reading my ryhmes is like drinking bottle's of vinegar
just like a tongue twister, it leaves your mind shooting up like a sprinkler,
from your perimeter, it seems you beat the previous visitor.

*Respect*

[RappinRollerCoas ter]

Jigsaw wrote:

Anyone wanna battle

Go ahead.

[the Extreme]

look dude to cheap to afford noodle
ur bars are hard cause they come off of google
freestyling on these rhymes like a real artist doodles
bro i gotta admit got some real hard shit but up to this, ehh sucks dick
bro blowwin through money like im bill gates
why dont i throuw millions down for real stake
and u gone need help for god sake
cause when i let the beast out there no tellin if hel be mean
so dont come here if u dont wanna get fucked up by the EXTREME

[Shini]

I've dropped my set for the world tourney.
Just keep sleeping on me.

[RappinRollerCoas ter]

Hey I want to rap battle someone don't care who I'm just bored.

[Tysane]

RappinRollerCoaster wrote:

Hey I want to rap battle someone don't care who I'm just bored.

No doubt man, I got you

[RappinRollerCoas ter]

Tysane wrote:

<quoted text>No doubt man, I got you

Alright let's go welcome back btw haven't seen you in a bit.

[Tysane]

RappinRollerCoaster wrote:

<quoted text>
Alright let's go welcome back btw haven't seen you in a bit.

Thanks man, and yeah i been working on my demo, i probably wont be back on here for a lil while but this is the first break i"ve gotten in weeks

[RappinRollerCoas ter]

Tysane wrote:

<quoted text>Thanks man, and yeah i been working on my demo, i probably wont be back on here for a lil while but this is the first break i"ve gotten in weeks

Yea I haven't ever done a demo so I wouldn't know lol and I bet your probably tired as well.

[Felepas]

So basically Im someone else,
I don't care about the car's,bitches or wealth,
when someone calls me out, I scar the living and bounce,
cover the bodies with an ounce of liquid then mount,
take an account, I'm new,I'm twisted and foul,
just like a cow, I ain't timid to tip it, it counts,
cause just for now, I'm trying to fill the respect for the wows, I don't get loud, I speak soft;y and murder the crowd.

I'd like to hear opinions judging how well/shitty this was. Thanks.

[Hip Hop Hero]

wow okay ..
first off Rev dropped a very long verse.. quantity is not one of my favorite things because they are usually filled with a bunch of filler..

technically revelations had some lines that were decent..some aight similes and some failed..there was a point that he stepped up to 2 syll rhymes for a while..Props a much needed change. The weed talk killed you totally irrelevant in a battle..imo

Imsome1.. I really liked the multi's in your peace some aight concepts but not too much battle type material mostly self hype..I normally would just look at the same amount of bars between you and Rev, but he dropped first, so it was your task to match it or come up with enough Hard Hitting lines to knock out his entire verse.. unfortunately that DIDNT happen THIS time (Consistency is key)

flow= Imsome1 it was a lil easier to catch your cadence
rhymescheme= Imsomeone way more complex thanks to your multi's
punches= tie
sims/meta's= Rev took this suprisingly imo
multi's= Imsome1
enjoyment= both.. Revs could've been shorter , Some1's couldve been longer..

MVGT: Imsome1

next time you guys should establish a bar/line limit.. it makes it more even and helps prevent you from writing all them filler lines..

[RappinRollerCoas ter]

Hip Hop Hero wrote:

wow okay ..
first off Rev dropped a very long verse.. quantity is not one of my favorite things because they are usually filled with a bunch of filler..

technically revelations had some lines that were decent..some aight similes and some failed..there was a point that he stepped up to 2 syll rhymes for a while..Props a much needed change. The weed talk killed you totally irrelevant in a battle..imo

Imsome1.. I really liked the multi's in your peace some aight concepts but not too much battle type material mostly self hype..I normally would just look at the same amount of bars between you and Rev, but he dropped first, so it was your task to match it or come up with enough Hard Hitting lines to knock out his entire verse.. unfortunately that DIDNT happen THIS time (Consistency is key)

flow= Imsome1 it was a lil easier to catch your cadence
rhymescheme= Imsomeone way more complex thanks to your multi's
punches= tie
sims/meta's= Rev took this suprisingly imo
multi's= Imsome1
enjoyment= both.. Revs could've been shorter , Some1's couldve been longer..

MVGT: Imsome1

next time you guys should establish a bar/line limit.. it makes it more even and helps prevent you from writing all them filler lines..

Agreed

[RappinRollerCoas ter]

ImSum1Else wrote:

So basically Im someone else,
I don't care about the car's,bitches or wealth,
when someone calls me out, I scar the living and bounce,
cover the bodies with an ounce of liquid then mount,
take an account, I'm new,I'm twisted and foul,
just like a cow, I ain't timid to tip it, it counts,
cause just for now, I'm trying to fill the respect for the wows, I don't get loud, I speak soft;y and murder the crowd.

I'd like to hear opinions judging how well/shitty this was. Thanks.

It seems like you were just rhyming words not actually saying anything