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Scrappy Zone J

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#28014
Dec 7, 2012
 
i got a rap, you better take a nap, you wont be able to keep up with this rap, sit down, take a writing pad out, start taking notes, i will destroy you, this shit right here is so unfair, im so gifted and my talent is very rare, you have never seen this shit so fresh, to measure the damage on you, we will need a machine, cos its just sad all this shit im doin to u, battlin me is something like taboo, cos i will massacre you just like jason and freddie, im comin at you, i dont care if your ready

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#28015
Dec 7, 2012
 
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
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Umm here's a break down:
Flow:Imsomeone
Rhyme:Imsomeone
Multi:Revelation
Story:revelation
This are my 4 picks for a great rap
Imsomeone great flow try to keep it up you sortof stopped it abruptly in the middle which messed you up and made it hard to start back up. You obviously had the rhyme in the verse rev had a few here and there but over all you did better.
Revelation you won multi because you had one of two that's about it. You also got story because you stayed on your topic a little better than imsomeone did.
That's my break down ill let HhH decide who wins I'm not a vet so it's not my place to say who won or not.
okay RRC's vote was righteous imo..

flow-Imsomeone
multi-ImSomeone..only because Rev had single rhymes in most of his verse and IM went with double syll rhymes(still not officially a multi)
punches-none
structure- ImSomeone.. was just easier to read and catch your flo
overall- IM

MVGT IMsomeone

if this was a Topical battle Rev wouldve got Concept..but
this is NOT a Topical...

Rev its a good start..but try working on your Multi's, then we
can break down the rest but the single rhyme flo wont be as effective
in a text battle(Keystyle), as live freestyling..

Hittin on your girl like it's a kickback
^^^^
rev this was probably your wittiest line as far as disses go

ImSomeone..
your flo is pretty cool, rhymescheme too..you should work on
your concepts.. simile's, metaphors and puns(Punchlines)

I killed you once before im on a killing spree
^^^
This was probly one of your hardest line..
ImSomeone

New York, NY

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#28016
Dec 7, 2012
 
anyone down for a battle?
Revalationz

Fort Walton Beach, FL

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#28017
Dec 7, 2012
 
oh boy chill, u wanna deal
when i giv it to u real your heart wud heal
n break ya seal, cos it lik a prayer wheel
for real, ma intimacy appeal is ego ideal
it revealed,by lord privy seal
nneed som help wif your bars jus see mi
im an angel that makes things creamy
aint dreamy, cos ma flow is steamy
you gay pricks think you can rap all freely.
better not step 2 me thats a fact belive me
this shit aint easy
ya people better hear me
I am the bullet in your gun, the feeling thats still to come.
And ima remain fightin till the war is won.
this shit is still a offical
so gentlemen pull out ya pistols
I will lodge a bullet in the side of ya brain
knock you out unconcouis so you wont fell any pain
ya be sitting there twitiching
felling like a headless chicken
the tasty shit ya eaten
when its all bruised and beaten
Oh! Your all like flour
One puff an your gone like powder
More money the more power believe
Tricks up my sleeve carful I dnt sneeze blow Flour away
you guys talking shit on me need a walking stick
So how the fuck you running shit
I get high an do anything to get by
Catch a bullet get a dot like terminators eye
Hold on i got something i think its a bowl
Smoke that bud all day long
Maybe hit it from a bong
toke toke till you choke
Filler up with smoke
Pack a bowl
Or start to roll
Today we Blaze
and tomorrow's a haze.
Its time we feed
that need for weed.

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

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#28018
Dec 7, 2012
 
Hip Hop Hero wrote:
<quoted text>okay RRC's vote was righteous imo..

flow-Imsomeone
multi-ImSomeone..only because Rev had single rhymes in most of his verse and IM went with double syll rhymes(still not officially a multi)
punches-none
structure- ImSomeone.. was just easier to read and catch your flo
overall- IM

MVGT IMsomeone

if this was a Topical battle Rev wouldve got Concept..but
this is NOT a Topical...

Rev its a good start..but try working on your Multi's, then we
can break down the rest but the single rhyme flo wont be as effective
in a text battle(Keystyle), as live freestyling..

Hittin on your girl like it's a kickback
^^^^
rev this was probably your wittiest line as far as disses go

ImSomeone..
your flo is pretty cool, rhymescheme too..you should work on
your concepts.. simile's, metaphors and puns(Punchlines)

I killed you once before im on a killing spree
^^^
This was probly one of your hardest line..
Thanks

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Huntsville

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#28019
Dec 7, 2012
 
Revalationz wrote:
<quoted text>Thank you for the compliments ima try to get better then come back and spit rhymes tonight
Np

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#28020
Dec 7, 2012
 
Revalationz wrote:
<quoted text>Thank you for the compliments ima try to get better then come back and spit rhymes tonight
Np I like to help people learn y'all get better

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#28021
Dec 7, 2012
 
Revalationz wrote:
oh boy chill, u wanna deal
when i giv it to u real your heart wud heal
n break ya seal, cos it lik a prayer wheel
for real, ma intimacy appeal is ego ideal
it revealed,by lord privy seal
nneed som help wif your bars jus see mi
im an angel that makes things creamy
aint dreamy, cos ma flow is steamy
you gay pricks think you can rap all freely.
better not step 2 me thats a fact belive me
this shit aint easy
ya people better hear me
I am the bullet in your gun, the feeling thats still to come.
And ima remain fightin till the war is won.
this shit is still a offical
so gentlemen pull out ya pistols
I will lodge a bullet in the side of ya brain
knock you out unconcouis so you wont fell any pain
ya be sitting there twitiching
felling like a headless chicken
the tasty shit ya eaten
when its all bruised and beaten
Oh! Your all like flour
One puff an your gone like powder
More money the more power believe
Tricks up my sleeve carful I dnt sneeze blow Flour away
you guys talking shit on me need a walking stick
So how the fuck you running shit
I get high an do anything to get by
Catch a bullet get a dot like terminators eye
Hold on i got something i think its a bowl
Smoke that bud all day long
Maybe hit it from a bong
toke toke till you choke
Filler up with smoke
Pack a bowl
Or start to roll
Today we Blaze
and tomorrow's a haze.
Its time we feed
that need for weed.
Much much better by far. Next thing to work on you look unprofessional and kiddish with you spelling, spell things out more it doesn't look good at all. That's all I have except work more on multis and stuff that was much better though.

“serious about music , love rap”

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Huntsville

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#28022
Dec 7, 2012
 
ImSomeone wrote:
anyone down for a battle?
I think that was meant for you IM so rap it up this time is going to be much harder for you step it up.
Tmoney

United States

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#28023
Dec 7, 2012
 
I don't know why y'all are gangin on poor ol Connecticut.
The only thing that i know is that y'all fuckin better get,
off this kids ass and stop bein so ignorant.
go ahead keep it up, ill start gettin belligerent.
You all need to grow up, and start actin your ages.
Instead of gettin in real fights, over a text based pages.
I wanna quit while im ahead, but bitch, im just gettin started.
Im with mike on this one, you are fuckin retarded.
I hope one day you'll decide to be done,
cuz you should already know that i got this shit won.
I think its funny your serious, i only do this for fun.
So don't get too furious, cause this has only begun.
This battles a new series, and this is page one.
ImSomeone

New York, NY

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#28024
Dec 7, 2012
 
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
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I think that was meant for you IM so rap it up this time is going to be much harder for you step it up.
Ok
lets go

My vocals vandal,
lick the wax off my candle as a sample,
stock up on tampons,
my verses haunt you like a phantom,
I spit so much fire your ashes incinerated,
when im done with you you gun be obliverated,
My sins are created by the way that i say it,
My raps are hot and yours are cold,
Mine are so nice they make your mind explode,
When my mind unfolds,
the truth is told,
Its that you like guys,
And You like to blow,
Im the best,
I got style,
Ill leave you lost with out words like papa doc on 8 mile

(Feed Back Please)

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Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

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#28026
Dec 7, 2012
 
HHH and SHINI please look to the thread for your final for the world tourney and make sure u drop soon!!! we need to finish the tourney! the thread has all the info u need.

“serious about music , love rap”

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Huntsville

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#28027
Dec 7, 2012
 
HHH judge away.
ImSomeone

New York, NY

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#28028
Dec 7, 2012
 
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
HHH judge away.
Rappin wats ure opunion about the battle

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Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

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#28029
Dec 7, 2012
 
ImSomeone wrote:
<quoted text>Rappin wats ure opunion about the battle
Breakdown:

Flow:Imsomeone
Multi:revelations
Rhyme:imsomeone only because his rhymes were easier to pick out
Structure:revelations
Punches:imsomeone

Mvgt imsomeone

This is my honest breakdown an utter close match rev it seemed like you weren't even battling instead you were like telling a story but still much better.

Im you need to work on more complex rhyme schemes and multis, rev need more insults more punch.

Great battle now it's HHH on the spot
Jigsaw

Hialeah, FL

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#28030
Dec 7, 2012
 
Anyone wanna battle
ImSum1Else

Saint Albans, NY

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#28031
Dec 7, 2012
 
ImSomeone wrote:
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Ok
lets go
My vocals vandal,
lick the wax off my candle as a sample,
stock up on tampons,
my verses haunt you like a phantom,
I spit so much fire your ashes incinerated,
when im done with you you gun be obliverated,
My sins are created by the way that i say it,
My raps are hot and yours are cold,
Mine are so nice they make your mind explode,
When my mind unfolds,
the truth is told,
Its that you like guys,
And You like to blow,
Im the best,
I got style,
Ill leave you lost with out words like papa doc on 8 mile
(Feed Back Please)
Once upon a time there was a kid that I knew in school,
I'm not gonna say his name, but he was pretty cool,
we rap battled each other, then teamed up for others to dual,
we beat em' every time because our ryhmes were pretty cruel,
I'm not taking your name, I just made it pretty similar,
I'm not a stranger,you know me, so don't feel insecure,
re-reading my ryhmes is like drinking bottle's of vinegar
just like a tongue twister, it leaves your mind shooting up like a sprinkler,
from your perimeter, it seems you beat the previous visitor.

*Respect*

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

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#28032
Dec 7, 2012
 
Jigsaw wrote:
Anyone wanna battle
Go ahead.
the Extreme

Blackshear, GA

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#28033
Dec 7, 2012
 
look dude to cheap to afford noodle
ur bars are hard cause they come off of google
freestyling on these rhymes like a real artist doodles
bro i gotta admit got some real hard shit but up to this, ehh sucks dick
bro blowwin through money like im bill gates
why dont i throuw millions down for real stake
and u gone need help for god sake
cause when i let the beast out there no tellin if hel be mean
so dont come here if u dont wanna get fucked up by the EXTREME
Shini

Korea

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#28034
Dec 7, 2012
 
I've dropped my set for the world tourney.
Just keep sleeping on me.

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