“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#27886 Dec 3, 2012
rrc that wasnt a multi, that was just ryming lol. multi is when you do 2 or more per line, like: im a carnivore in the art of war,
my sharpened sword rips your heart to gore....type thing. that was just the endof both lines to make it rhyme. thats just a regular rhyme ending to make anything 'rhyme' so ppl can call it a rap. lol. if u want some better attention, use multies now and again in ur verse, or use complex words, no 'im a boss, like rick ross' type thing.

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27887 Dec 3, 2012
Seanny T wrote:
rrc that wasnt a multi, that was just ryming lol. multi is when you do 2 or more per line, like: im a carnivore in the art of war,
my sharpened sword rips your heart to gore....type thing. that was just the endof both lines to make it rhyme. thats just a regular rhyme ending to make anything 'rhyme' so ppl can call it a rap. lol. if u want some better attention, use multies now and again in ur verse, or use complex words, no 'im a boss, like rick ross' type thing.
Oh I thought a multi was at the end of two lines not in the same line thanks Seanny. And nm B
Phaze

Philadelphia, PA

#27888 Dec 3, 2012
Exactly. Seanny know he loves my multis lmao
and yo how was my rap?
I think I could've made it better

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27889 Dec 3, 2012
Phaze wrote:
Exactly. Seanny know he loves my multis lmao
and yo how was my rap?
I think I could've made it better
I liked it great flow I enjoyed reading it but nothing less is expected from the almighty phaze
dog3

Fort Gay, WV

#27890 Dec 3, 2012
fire-i spit dat
Yo girl-well everybody dun had dat
baseball-ive alaways pitched dat at yo hat
weed-i buy,sell,aand roll dat real fat
ice cream truck-i freakin chase dat!
girls-u cant even get dat!
deer-i stalk,shoot,and stinkin kill that...
Yo boys get it right or i will!

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27891 Dec 3, 2012
dog3 wrote:
fire-i spit dat
Yo girl-well everybody dun had dat
baseball-ive alaways pitched dat at yo hat
weed-i buy,sell,aand roll dat real fat
ice cream truck-i freakin chase dat!
girls-u cant even get dat!
deer-i stalk,shoot,and stinkin kill that...
Yo boys get it right or i will!
Don't rap ever
eli

Miami, FL

#27892 Dec 3, 2012
Judged:
13
9
6
Im a pimp slappa.
but ur a shitty rappa.
so y spit so many rhymes like u can just attack em?
I h8 pissin u off, cuz ur lyrics just suk.
U see me on the street yellin "O SHIT! Duck!"
Cuz i come by like a lightning bolt, a 10 wat shot.
While ur gigglin cuz ur sisters lickin ur twat.
But its better to comprehend wut im sayin.
The more i realize wut ive been potrayin, i see myself playin.
But now im just serious...
Cursin more then a black man in the hood whos dilerious.
I kno ur feelin this.. Bitch, u cannot complain.
So why talk over my voice? This shitz been framed.
Its not a one time see'er or punk'ed out wannabe'er
This is all i gotta say, now heres the jump off finger flicker.*Middle Finger is raised in ur Face.*
Phakez

Minneapolis, MN

#27893 Dec 3, 2012
"Just try again, you lifeless b)itch"

how high are you when you type this shit?
yer writing gets a minus 6
yer rhymes are piss
it's like peanut butter AND cotton mouth when you try n spit
i'm tired of it. annoyin' artists.
someone needs to teach these toys they're heartless
yall can't get shit pumpin my flow'll leave a chump as a slumped carcass regardless,
n roll it up in carpet. Soprano shit. got yer family lightin' candle wicks
and incense too. you sinkin' in the ink ya fugg wit this pen foo
steady fillin' pages in a rage and screens too
target practice is a good reason to meet you
orally cut like coral reef do
step to me too hard? De-feet you
yeah razor tongue
slicin' through bars. in a cage to none
and i ain't slowin' up wit the gunnin' i'm runnin till the race is won. 1st place or none
Seanny and Coaster masterbatin' on they're knees waitin for the Phaze to cum. aimin' to glaze they're gums
while i'm shinin' like rays of sun
meltin fake wax rappers on the pavement. one...
Brian

Griffin, GA

#27894 Dec 3, 2012
They dont want me back in the picture/
My rhymes are godly/
they should be called a Scripture/
You fake ass rappers are about to expire/
Dont try to contest me/
The consequences might be dire/
My rhymes are hotter than "The Girl on Fire"/
hate on me but I wont pull a trigger/
I'll kill em all with my lyrics/
Call me a verbal Jack the Ripper/
Had to show you how its done/
All you faggot Whinnie the Poohs, go fuck Tigger/
Try to beat me you have to be a lot quicker/
Cause im one of the greats like Notorious B.I.G/
Repping D.O.A recognize us when you hear it/
Are flows are scary good/
Your shaking cause you know you fear it/

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27896 Dec 3, 2012
eli wrote:
Judged:
13
9
6
Im a pimp slappa.
but ur a shitty rappa.
so y spit so many rhymes like u can just attack em?
I h8 pissin u off, cuz ur lyrics just suk.
U see me on the street yellin "O SHIT! Duck!"
Cuz i come by like a lightning bolt, a 10 wat shot.
While ur gigglin cuz ur sisters lickin ur twat.
But its better to comprehend wut im sayin.
The more i realize wut ive been potrayin, i see myself playin.
But now im just serious...
Cursin more then a black man in the hood whos dilerious.
I kno ur feelin this.. Bitch, u cannot complain.
So why talk over my voice? This shitz been framed.
Its not a one time see'er or punk'ed out wannabe'er
This is all i gotta say, now heres the jump off finger flicker.*Middle Finger is raised in ur Face.*
One problem with understanding what you saying
Instead of playing with your self try typing that's what in portraying
Looks like donkey kong came by and jump on your phone call it blazing
Hold up in your room like Your scared of dying
I'll come in and kill everyone without trying
Now I'm finding that my raps a fine thing
And the rapping is like you tried bling
But instead you spit s--t and it didn't even sting
Eli what kindof name is that bratbrat that's the sound of my machine gun at that

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27897 Dec 3, 2012
Phakez wrote:
"Just try again, you lifeless b)itch"

how high are you when you type this shit?
yer writing gets a minus 6
yer rhymes are piss
it's like peanut butter AND cotton mouth when you try n spit
i'm tired of it. annoyin' artists.
someone needs to teach these toys they're heartless
yall can't get shit pumpin my flow'll leave a chump as a slumped carcass regardless,
n roll it up in carpet. Soprano shit. got yer family lightin' candle wicks
and incense too. you sinkin' in the ink ya fugg wit this pen foo
steady fillin' pages in a rage and screens too
target practice is a good reason to meet you
orally cut like coral reef do
step to me too hard? De-feet you
yeah razor tongue
slicin' through bars. in a cage to none
and i ain't slowin' up wit the gunnin' i'm runnin till the race is won. 1st place or none
Seanny and Coaster masterbatin' on they're knees waitin for the Phaze to cum. aimin' to glaze they're gums
while i'm shinin' like rays of sun
meltin fake wax rappers on the pavement. one...
Phakez is your name and gay is your game
Try to refrain and hold out I'm the first to come and murder your body is flung
That rap was dung
For a minute I thought is was sung
rapped like you have no tongue
The next thing is for you to be hung
Rung rung its me at your door boom just kidding it was a boom I won
Death to your son
Run you bum before you done

To late your fake like your name implies
Don't want to make you cry
But I'm death it's time to die
Don't give me that sigh
My raps are fly
Don't diss okay sis
Every word you said was a miss
This is a rap not a toilet take your piss

Take phaze for example he will crush you
But we might let you have another shot is you hush too
So listen that rap wasn't half bad me and AA can agree on that soon
But your sad its like you live in Baghdad
Your a fag whose to far from his fat dad
Take a second shot and see if you really are so not
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#27898 Dec 3, 2012
hard multis

masterbation
gash and rape bums
lacerations
gas them patients
pass the bacon
tattered break em
battered bakin
caterdazin
scatter fakin
bass her vajin (vayjin) <--- add accents to it
bash her face in
trash and raise sin
trash her raisins
cast her vacant

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27899 Dec 4, 2012
Shini wrote:
hard multis

masterbation
gash and rape bums
lacerations
gas them patients
pass the bacon
tattered break em
battered bakin
caterdazin
scatter fakin
bass her vajin (vayjin) <--- add accents to it
bash her face in
trash and raise sin
trash her raisins
cast her vacant
Lol
Phaze

Spring Lake, NC

#27901 Dec 4, 2012
Shini wrote:
hard multis
masterbation
gash and rape bums
lacerations
gas them patients
pass the bacon
tattered break em
battered bakin
caterdazin
scatter fakin
bass her vajin (vayjin) <--- add accents to it
bash her face in
trash and raise sin
trash her raisins
cast her vacant
"cast her vacant"
casket layin
Ejaculation
Imagination
Stabbed his brain with
Mad switchblades in
Magnum cases
Bad this phase is
Massive pain with
rappers ragin'
f)ags and g)ay kids
Hackin stages
contamination
mask is hangin
past is changin
have to say this
planet's wasted
Manifestation

I added shini lol
i got bored

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27902 Dec 4, 2012
Yea well now I can really rap now I know what a multi really is lol I feel stupid, although I was beating people without them

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27903 Dec 4, 2012
Hang I rode the bus today
First got on two said hey
Asked my name I said cool no way
I'm not gay just reassurance last time I checked I'll give you a knee for it
Cause coaster is soarin
When you walk by you cover your I'm roarin
In each parks they put four in
I'm talking about coasters no skyrim in not a nord then
But if it was I would have lord kin
You want more then
To bad I'm done pourin
Iraqi forever

Denver, CO

#27904 Dec 4, 2012
Candyman wrote:
All of yall are whack
Here let me teach you how to rap
Y'all can talk behind my back
But don't come in my face because I'm strapped wit a couple of macs
Do you really think I'm not the best
From north south east to west
My rhymes will have you gasping like you outa breath
Just wait until my shell hit ya chest
I've been lyrically blessed
Before j read your raps I shoulda guessed
that y'all ain't up to the test
To freestyle wit me
You Betta pay up because I don't freestyle for free
You rappers aint my cup of tea
Can't you tell ima G
That last line was bad like all of your sounds
But I'm done with you clowns
Just bow down
And hand me the crown
Dude I'm 13 and a girl yet i still could kill you in a rap battle if I tried
Phaze

Spring Lake, NC

#27905 Dec 4, 2012
Iraqi don't waste your time on him lol
he's not important. Worry about yourself & don't worry about the way he drops, worry about the way you drop. the only time to worry about his drop is if it offends you or if you're soo good that you can judge someone else's pen game. Ok?(:

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27906 Dec 4, 2012
Phaze wrote:
Iraqi don't waste your time on him lol
he's not important. Worry about yourself & don't worry about the way he drops, worry about the way you drop. the only time to worry about his drop is if it offends you or if you're soo good that you can judge someone else's pen game. Ok?(:
An I that good;)
Phaze

Spring Lake, NC

#27907 Dec 4, 2012
So am I lmao

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