Bbrezy

UK

#27801 Dec 1, 2012
Okay thank for the feedback
Bbrezy

UK

#27802 Dec 1, 2012
Okay, okay
U don't get me,
I don't get u either,
But u aint da boss,
Cuz I can hunt wiv my sniper,
U raps r wak,
Been there done dat,
Raps slower,
Than slow -mow,
Prepare for my big show,
Ur tryin to make it real big,
Wait let me give u one tip,
U need some help real quick,
Man u aint got no swag,
Fighting over a cheap handbag,
Peep I'll give u 1 dollar,
Wait y would I bother
Rappin against a younger,
My raps r gettin in stronger,
U can't get no better,
Your just a crap dresser,
Your really at ur peak,
U think ur better dan me,
Look upon ndd y'all see,
My name written in the stars,
While ur just eatin candy bars,
Sayin u had problems since day 1,
My friend you've had NONE!
Peace

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27803 Dec 1, 2012
Bbrezy wrote:
Okay, okay
U don't get me,
I don't get u either,
But u aint da boss,
Cuz I can hunt wiv my sniper,
U raps r wak,
Been there done dat,
Raps slower,
Than slow -mow,
Prepare for my big show,
Ur tryin to make it real big,
Wait let me give u one tip,
U need some help real quick,
Man u aint got no swag,
Fighting over a cheap handbag,
Peep I'll give u 1 dollar,
Wait y would I bother
Rappin against a younger,
My raps r gettin in stronger,
U can't get no better,
Your just a crap dresser,
Your really at ur peak,
U think ur better dan me,
Look upon ndd y'all see,
My name written in the stars,
While ur just eatin candy bars,
Sayin u had problems since day 1,
My friend you've had NONE!
Peace
Okay that wasn't as bad but you need to spell things completely, it makes it look unprofessional. Second, you should jump around with subject like that you went from "need help quick" to "ain't got no swag" see. Example-

Dude step off the stage
This guy walk up its pay
I'll give you 5 seconds to get out of my way

See three lines that can relate to each other. You need to do that the whole song

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#27804 Dec 1, 2012
http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TNV4...
^^ayo go here and vote on my battle versus Chi Town Lover or to see his verse against me..

My verse~

call me magic man from kazakhstan poof ya gone
were 70 % islam so you know were the bomb

this Kaz will leave ya unarmed with No weapon
just a pole stuck up ya azz john paul the second

the US president and I have commonly shown
tho our positions lower we still come out on 'Top of the poles'

our GDP's may be Low man ,but yall are just Hoes tramp.
hustlin to get fucked ya'll keep doin the 'Pole Dance'

theres no chance ya puzzy's will reach your accomplishments
cuz every polish party's nothin but a big sausage fest

so get it up off ya chest, no soviet spies round.sorry
Ditka didnt mention his gay lover from Chi Town

with a smile found close to his balls... cause tho his
lovers shy he's got that 'pole locked' in his jaws..

ya death was all that our Warsaw you killed in our residence
us battling's a tragedy like rthe death of ya President..

FYI I hate expos..theres more hidden punches in my script
but I feel if you dont get them you need to up ya game..

Pope John Paul II- a famous Polish
pole dance= really? pole dance like a stripper/ Polish person dancing
sausage fest=Party full of guys only... Polish are famous for Polish Sausage
Ditka=Mike Ditka ex Chicago bears coach
pole locked/Pollack/Pole << person of Polish descent
http://www.guardian.co.uk/commentisfree/2010/ ...
^^^
In 2010 Polish President dies in a Jet crash

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#27805 Dec 1, 2012
http://www.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop/TNV4 ...
^^ayo go here and vote on my battle versus Chi Town Lover or to see his verse against me..

My verse~

call me magic man from kazakhstan poof ya gone
were 70 % islam so you know were the bomb

this Kaz will leave ya unarmed with No weapon
just a pole stuck up ya azz john paul the second

the US president and I have commonly shown
tho our positions lower we still come out on 'Top of the poles'

our GDP's may be Low man ,but yall are just Hoes tramp.
hustlin to get fawked ya'll keep doin the 'Pole Dance'

theres no chance ya puzzy's will reach your accomplishments
cuz every polish party's nothin but a big sausage fest

so get it up off ya chest, no soviet spies round.sorry
Ditka didnt mention his gay lover from Chi Town

with a smile found close to his balls... cause tho his
lovers shy he's got that 'pole locked' in his jaws..

ya death was all that our Warsaw you killed in our residence
us battling's a tragedy like rthe death of ya President..

FYI I hate expos..theres more hidden punches in my script
but I feel if you dont get them you need to up ya game..

Pope John Paul II- a famous Polish
pole dance= really? pole dance like a stripper/ Polish person dancing
sausage fest=Party full of guys only... Polish are famous for Polish Sausage
Ditka=Mike Ditka ex Chicago bears coach
pole locked/Pollack/Pole << person of Polish descent
http://www.guardian.co.uk/commentisfree/2010/ ...
^^^
In 2010 Polish President dies in a Jet crash
Bbrezy

UK

#27806 Dec 1, 2012
Okay yeah I get you.
Bbrezy

UK

#27807 Dec 1, 2012
Rappin Roller Coaster how old are you? Are you like the executive of this forum or something or like my coach?
Seanny T

Edmonton, Canada

#27808 Dec 1, 2012
LOL executive ? Nah man none of us are the sites creator or leader. There are a small group of 'veterans' in here tho, then a larger group of 'almost veteran but not quite' then the rest of u are average joes trying and failing. I just won the sites Halloween horrorcore tournament, I'm in the top on here. Want my advice? Learn English better haha use more intricate words and start doing multies, name-play, etc. listen to what Rrc said too. But ur no where near our level
Bbrezy

UK

#27809 Dec 1, 2012
Yh I know that but no need to diss me:

Look at me now,
What you talkin bout'
Taking your advice,
Man I'd rather scream and shout,
Always dissing me,
Just wait and see,
I'll be knocking on your door,
Waiting for some treats,
Man step off the stage,
If u say a word you'll pay,
Why don't you take a seat,
Cause your ryhmes aren't sweet,
My time has just began,
So don't think that you've won,
Look at Rappin Roller Coaster,
He's gonna be on posters,
When he makes it big,
Just remember one thing,
There's always one guy,
That peeps can rely,
He was there for me,
Give us 10 years,
We'll be rolling out the money.

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27810 Dec 1, 2012
Seanny T wrote:
LOL executive ? Nah man none of us are the sites creator or leader. There are a small group of 'veterans' in here tho, then a larger group of 'almost veteran but not quite' then the rest of u are average joes trying and failing. I just won the sites Halloween horrorcore tournament, I'm in the top on here. Want my advice? Learn English better haha use more intricate words and start doing multies, name-play, etc. listen to what Rrc said too. But ur no where near our level
Thanks seanny B he's right use everything he said and try it.
Donny P

Minneapolis, MN

#27811 Dec 1, 2012
"but ur no where near our level"
ha! to get there i'd a need a real long shovel
you been buried so many times you wannabe whiner
just a lil deeper n you gon wind up in china
pop yer head out the gravel n be afraid of the shadow
go back into yer hole you don't wanna prolong this battle
i'm so def, cuz i don't wanna hear no more from this phony
nobody cares about a little plastic horrorcore trophy

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#27812 Dec 1, 2012
Bbrezy wrote:
Yh I know that but no need to diss me:
Look at me now,
What you talkin bout'
Taking your advice,
Man I'd rather scream and shout,
Always dissing me,
Just wait and see,
I'll be knocking on your door,
Waiting for some treats,
Man step off the stage,
If u say a word you'll pay,
Why don't you take a seat,
Cause your ryhmes aren't sweet,
My time has just began,
So don't think that you've won,
Look at Rappin Roller Coaster,
He's gonna be on posters,
When he makes it big,
Just remember one thing,
There's always one guy,
That peeps can rely,
He was there for me,
Give us 10 years,
We'll be rolling out the money.
Bbrezy, this is boxing, u aint a heavy,
ur a featherweight, now watch me take my lyrical machete,
chop ur spegetti reply, then drive over it with a chevy,
wanna be a vet? then ur gunna hafta pay the levy,
pay it thru blood, thru sweat and tears,
you aint amazing, it takes practise for years,
ill twist ya spine while im displayin a gang sign,
halloween champ, u see that title? its MINE,
i took out numerous foes, im what u could define,
a god in the game, in the future ill get my own shrine,
if u combine micheal myers and superman, you get me,
saving hip hop while at the same time on a rookie killin spree,
turn up the AC cuz im melting polar ice caps,
twisting words around so fast it'll cause this site to collapse,
find some new words dog, theres an app for that,
like old warm soda, your verses just sit flat,
floating peacefully like a monk til i shove a knife in ur throat,
im quick with the pen, it rushes over the paper,
writing so fast the ink turns to vapor,
see ya later......lol.
.
make something on this level, which is pretty basic for type-based rap battles. until then, dont assume u can talk smack.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#27813 Dec 1, 2012
Bbrezy, this is boxing, u aint a heavy,
ur a featherweight, now watch me take my lyrical machete,
chop ur spegetti reply, then drive over it with a chevy,
wanna be a vet? then ur gunna hafta pay the levy,
pay it thru blood, thru sweat and tears,
you aint amazing, it takes practise for years,
ill twist ya spine while im displayin a gang sign,
halloween champ, u see that title? its MINE,
i took out numerous foes, im what u could define,
a god in the game, in the future ill get my own shrine,
if u combine micheal myers and superman, you get me,
saving hip hop while at the same time on a rookie killin spree,
turn up the AC cuz im melting polar ice caps,
twisting words around so fast it'll cause this site to collapse,
find some new words dog, theres an app for that,
like old warm soda, your verses just sit flat,
floating peacefully like a monk til i shove a knife in ur throat,
***bleed out fast, ill use ur blood sacrifice not a goat,***
im quick with the pen, it rushes over the paper,
writing so fast the ink turns to vapor,
.
forgot a line where the *** are lol.
Bbrezy

UK

#27814 Dec 1, 2012
Ayy Seanny T and Rapping Roller Coaster who are the top 5 rappers

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27815 Dec 1, 2012
Bbrezy wrote:
Ayy Seanny T and Rapping Roller Coaster who are the top 5 rappers
Phaze, SRD, right now it looks like Chi, HHH, and Seanny, and shini but chi is behind all those soo

Phaze, SRD, HHH, Seanny, Shini, and Chi-town

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27816 Dec 1, 2012
Bbrezy wrote:
Rappin Roller Coaster how old are you? Are you like the executive of this forum or something or like my coach?
Yea and I'm an almost veteran but not quite.

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27817 Dec 1, 2012
Donny P wrote:
"but ur no where near our level"
ha! to get there i'd a need a real long shovel
you been buried so many times you wannabe whiner
just a lil deeper n you gon wind up in china
pop yer head out the gravel n be afraid of the shadow
go back into yer hole you don't wanna prolong this battle
i'm so def, cuz i don't wanna hear no more from this phony
nobody cares about a little plastic horrorcore trophy
Donny P get out this is to high of a level
I'll take that shovel and stick high so you'd neva
Because I'm betta
While you sit in your bed all wetta
So sit back and take a sip
Because your going to turn into and ice chocolate dip
A small snack that won't suffice
Then I realize your more annoying than lice
So take my advice
And revise
Your whole rap and minimize
This page because my raps kill your guys

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#27818 Dec 1, 2012
Donny P wrote:
"but ur no where near our level"
ha! to get there i'd a need a real long shovel
you been buried so many times you wannabe whiner
just a lil deeper n you gon wind up in china
pop yer head out the gravel n be afraid of the shadow
go back into yer hole you don't wanna prolong this battle
i'm so def, cuz i don't wanna hear no more from this phony
nobody cares about a little plastic horrorcore trophy
ooooooo now u gon get it hahaha. ill have my reply tomorrow im gettin drunk tonight.

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#27819 Dec 1, 2012
Contraversy lol
Shini

Korea

#27820 Dec 1, 2012
Bodied

I don't care if your a bitch or Samus
If you come up here acting like an ignoramous
I'll make your Mother Brain us
I am the toughest game you ever played
Like Ninja Gaiden on a Tuesday
Stage 5-2, the one filled
with demons sent to kill
While ya struggling though the mountain field
But then the crows sweep you up and hangs from the gallows still
Then it starts over, this time a little colder
Hayabusa hanging a window sill
with a tattered hoodie and a broken shoulder
A polymath who thrists to kill in a hundred ways
His VICE will get ya TOURTRED, RACKED
DRAWN and QUARTERED for a HUNDRED DAYS
a cannibal going through his hunger faze
slowly digesting that lung for days
who hangs his victims upside down so
they have their blood run array
Bbrezy wrote:
Yh I know that but no need to diss me:
Look at me now,
What you talkin bout'
Taking your advice,
Man I'd rather scream and shout,
Always dissing me,
Just wait and see,
I'll be knocking on your door,
Waiting for some treats,
Man step off the stage,
If u say a word you'll pay,
Why don't you take a seat,
Cause your ryhmes aren't sweet,
My time has just began,
So don't think that you've won,
Look at Rappin Roller Coaster,
He's gonna be on posters,
When he makes it big,
Just remember one thing,
There's always one guy,
That peeps can rely,
He was there for me,
Give us 10 years,
We'll be rolling out the money.

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