“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#27712 Nov 28, 2012
Phaze wrote:
I can't show mercy cause theres no mercy to show cause ima Jackal. If im the shit I guess these other rappers are the (a)sshole. This game came with pain when his brain imitates these insane images from this stage. This hate comes with faith cause if this pain switches blade then this blade will be a switchblade that inflicts pain in this phase. It hurts his brain and this pain is so amazin that when phaze gets away it hurts his ribcage. Will this pain ever fade because phaze is in chain within days and if it came with a bigger pain then phaze will wait until this pain just fades cause its his fate to stay the same. This pain will be with phaze cause its fate is to stay even when it kills phaze and they throw the remains away. But this pain tricks phaze when this pain imitates a greater pain. And it just levetates. And It just escalates and elevates when the pain get to phaze in a better way. You're suppose to let it wait but he can never wait so he grabs seven blades and just ends his pain. He penetrates his hart when the end of blades enters phaze when this reign is just the end of phaze. He saw deaths face with his head on a metal plate and the only thing death saw was the devil's face. Now deaths afraid cause he just met Beelzebub. Its phaze's fate to reign cause he's from the same place where hell is from...
Well the begining reminds me of that song by eminem, i dont remember what song but this is pretty sick, although you used phaze and pain a lot. You used them in different contex everytime. That takes skill man, i respect that. Keep up the slaughterin.

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#27713 Nov 28, 2012
Chris Miles wrote:
its not freestyle but watch my video on youtube! search chris miles dial tone! please tell me how is this and please support me

You never knew what I was capable of
the second that you brought me down i was just raising it up
you motivated me by hating when i continued to suck
but now who's getting recognition and gaining fans by the dozens
i'm going places that aint even the map
man i'm fly by myself i don't need a private jet
yo i'm doing it for my city yea NY is what i rep
and i ain't talkin bout a director when i tell you that's a rap
ok now i be right in my zone pick it up a little bit and hit em with the flow
ain't nobody steppin to me and they know
that i am nice and there's nutting they can do
i'm just trying kick it with friends
and do music simotanesouly
and to all the haters hatin
just watch out for when i make it see
i'm back on beat attacking at least i could spit a couple bars don't challenge a beast
i go hard everyday you go annually automatically rapping insanity
i'm just trying to follow my dream
and find out where it takes me
how you gonna outrap a kid
who be flowin like the navy
check it ima go ham
tearin up anybody with no chance
ready or not i'm causing commotion
in the rap game betta know i go in
on every verse
i got dedication
i'm blowin up
like detonation
they love me
like my name was raymond
and ima be the king of every nation
i'm gone
This was an 0kay rap it sounds like you need more flow when u write it, i had to read it twice to figure out where there was supposed to be a ryhme . Just constructive criticism, no hate bro.

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#27714 Nov 28, 2012
Busboy wrote:
You guys suck like yesterday, can't even rap. I can't stand you, I'm gonna go take a nap. I'm yawning guys, why cant I hear you. Maybe it's because Yearly you guys have to get your voices checked, maybe you got decked in the throat and got knocked out on a boat. So get some cause I'm number one!!!
Just stop please

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#27715 Nov 28, 2012
Busboy wrote:
You guys suck like yesterday, can't even rap. I can't stand you, I'm gonna go take a nap. I'm yawning guys, why cant I hear you. Maybe it's because Yearly you guys have to get your voices checked, maybe you got decked in the throat and got knocked out on a boat. So get some cause I'm number one!!!
You Suck donkey balls .. That is all!!

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#27716 Nov 28, 2012
Busboy wrote:
You guys suck like yesterday, can't even rap. I can't stand you, I'm gonna go take a nap. I'm yawning guys, why cant I hear you. Maybe it's because Yearly you guys have to get your voices checked, maybe you got decked in the throat and got knocked out on a boat. So get some cause I'm number one!!!
You say you number one
Ill slit your throat from behind
And rip your eyes out for fun
Matter of fact youll run
Cuz you cant contain the beast
Who blast off with out havin a gun
You say you a bus boy
F*ck a bus boy
I must deploy
Some ammo to the boys who destroy
Get a skull smash free throw, like b-boy f*cked leeroy
The story of this child ends , rippin you like a scarecrow.
Dont act like a soldier cuz ill point blank, straight and narrow.
Bbreezy

UK

#27717 Nov 28, 2012
Every boys hatin,
I try to do my best,
Start appreciating,
They put me to the test,
They might make mee fall,
The worst days of my life,
I'll try to stand tall,
Put my head to the knife,
Start talking bout me,
She used to be sweet,
Life aint easy listen to the beat,
I do wat I can,
But maybe not all da time,
I know I don't have fans,
But I'm sure I'll be fine
Yo daddy

Denver, CO

#27719 Nov 28, 2012
Yuh think yuh can rap? Bitch my lil sis can do better than that

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#27720 Nov 28, 2012
Yo daddy wrote:
Yuh think yuh can rap? Bitch my lil sis can do better than that
I know your not saying that to me.
amber

Wake Forest, NC

#27721 Nov 28, 2012
you sould try again please diss that other guy
Anonymous

Longview, WA

#27722 Nov 28, 2012
yo yo.

ya lines may seem lyrical,
but i find them hysterical,
but in order to keep my pace, you'll need a miracle.
i spit faster than the winds of a hurricane,
i cause catastrophe, everywhere i go i leave people insane.
going crazy, people be crying,
cause when i whip out the gat,people start dying.
i aint playing, man this aint no joke,
ill kill you for a 20 sack,even some coke.
but on the real, i better just chill,
cause if not you'll be depressed,and start popping the pills,
so ill lay off the thrills,
but either way homie, im still making the bills.

peace the fuck out.
Anonymous

Longview, WA

#27723 Nov 28, 2012
hey cuz, im straight from Manhattan,
representin crips, that's what's happenin
got my color, flying out my pocket,
bullets from my glock zip by,like a certified rocket.
demon here,no need to shout,
gonna put a glock in ya mouth, and blow ya brains out.
all ya slobs out there, soon ya'll be dead,
that's why we be repin blue,never be the red.
ya'll be debating,
whether or not,what it is that im stating,
is real or not,is he just faking?
well i aint, and i'll show ya,
dont let these small words fool ya.
they call me demon,cuz i cause catastrophe,
i dare any person on here to mess with me.
how bout you pack-4-life,
got what it takes or are u just lies?
we bout to find out,and that's a fact,
we'll know for sure, if u dont holla back.
ps: pack-4-life u have 30mins.
hannuhhyoungmula

Chattanooga, TN

#27724 Nov 29, 2012
aye yall all yall shit is wack,
dont try and talk all that shit ,
untill you see me hit the track,
lemme know what you got and ill throw
more to ba bitch wanna talk shit imma hit her wid my shoeee
156456bbbbbbbbbb bbb

Nairobi, Kenya

#27725 Nov 29, 2012
i should take all yo asses to school

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#27727 Nov 29, 2012
156456bbbbbbbbbbbbb wrote:
i should take all yo asses to school
Can u rap?

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#27728 Nov 29, 2012
demon21 wrote:
hey cuz, im straight from Manhattan,
representin crips, that's what's happenin
got my color, flying out my pocket,
bullets from my glock zip by,like a certified rocket.
demon here,no need to shout,
gonna put a glock in ya mouth, and blow ya brains out.
all ya slobs out there, soon ya'll be dead,
that's why we be repin blue,never be the red.
ya'll be debating,
whether or not,what it is that im stating,
is real or not,is he just faking?
well i aint, and i'll show ya,
dont let these small words fool ya.
they call me demon,cuz i cause catastrophe,
i dare any person on here to mess with me.
how bout you pack-4-life,
got what it takes or are u just lies?
we bout to find out,and that's a fact,
we'll know for sure, if u dont holla back.
ps: pack-4-life u have 30mins.
First off pac4life isnt on here anymore and second, stfu u aint a crip and if u are Im Kk all day so step to me kid.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#27729 Nov 29, 2012
lyrics for a new song with a friend from the UK who is trying out to be on britains got talent, we got an EP comin this christmas titled 'beneath the memories' 4 track EP gunna be hype!

My name ushers a flicker to the flame,
All i receive is hatred but im still in the game,
Not many people really believe in what im saying,
But if i don't give my all im gunna go insane,
so where you at when all your petty friends claim,
your terrible and when you confront em they just start to blame,
each other for the claim, and say that when you finally reach fame,
that they knew you from when you first made your stage name,
man, its bullsh!t…i wont quit…
backed up into a corner i wont forfeit,
torch lit, my old photo album of my parents
and past friends, dont wanna look in the past tense,
its killin me, your killin me,
the one thing in my life thats not constant is my sobriety,
i don't wanna admit it, but its hard to be me,
you only live once, so live free… y'all!

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#27730 Nov 29, 2012
so where you at when all your petty friends claim,
your terrible and when you confront em they just start to blame,
each other for the claim, and say that when you finally reach fame,
that they knew you from when you first made your stage name,
.
this part is so true. alotta ppl i know talk smack behind my back but then to my face say ;oh yeah man its tight, u pree good' blah blah blah. two-faced 'friends'. if i ever get big, i guarantee they'll come outta the wood-work and be like oh man i knew u would be big!...lokin to me for some money or cling to my fame. i know who my real fans are, who really enjoyes and believes in me....i can see right thru ur lies. and all those ppl will get nothing, i wont even recognize em. wont do anything. if ur not here for my struggle, ur not gunna be here for my success.-will smith quote, and my god is it true and do i ever belive in it.
.
and past friends, dont wanna look in the past tense,
.
its said every 7 years you loose half ur friends and gain new half of friends. also true. iv lost so many 'friends' from childhood cuz they dont want anything to do with me now. well, FU<K EM. i dont need you. if i get big ill never rub it in to even my most hated enemies face. ill let the money, fame, and attention i get, and my fan base do that for me hahaha.

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27731 Nov 29, 2012
demon21 wrote:
hey cuz, im straight from Manhattan,
representin crips, that's what's happenin
got my color, flying out my pocket,
bullets from my glock zip by,like a certified rocket.
demon here,no need to shout,
gonna put a glock in ya mouth, and blow ya brains out.
all ya slobs out there, soon ya'll be dead,
that's why we be repin blue,never be the red.
ya'll be debating,
whether or not,what it is that im stating,
is real or not,is he just faking?
well i aint, and i'll show ya,
dont let these small words fool ya.
they call me demon,cuz i cause catastrophe,
i dare any person on here to mess with me.
how bout you pack-4-life,
got what it takes or are u just lies?
we bout to find out,and that's a fact,
we'll know for sure, if u dont holla back.
ps: pack-4-life u have 30mins.
How stupid are you though?
Antonio

Panama City, FL

#27732 Nov 29, 2012
Dangerous
Im dangerous and they dont call me dat 4 nuthin
walk round with Nike and Jordans and still stunting
Im colder than a dairy queen blizzard
A rebel since 5 went running with scissors
im sharp a samurai swords
im sharp like cheddar elastic like leather
I rhyme crazy and sometimes i rhyme lazy
but I love this rap game cuz rappin is my baby
visually, lyrically Im known as a mystery
Y’all couldnt even see me on HDTV
you dont call me dangerous what do you do
Chinese or mexican but stil looking like a fool?

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27733 Nov 29, 2012
Antonio wrote:
Dangerous
Im dangerous and they dont call me dat 4 nuthin
walk round with Nike and Jordans and still stunting
Im colder than a dairy queen blizzard
A rebel since 5 went running with scissors
im sharp a samurai swords
im sharp like cheddar elastic like leather
I rhyme crazy and sometimes i rhyme lazy
but I love this rap game cuz rappin is my baby
visually, lyrically Im known as a mystery
YÂ’all couldnt even see me on HDTV
you dont call me dangerous what do you do
Chinese or mexican but stil looking like a fool?
Wow incredible you bite off the same website as the last da that tried that.

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