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Heres 3 bars...
newbies take notes...
Im so quick that you can't see me like im THUNDER//
Heres the first bar hittin you with that one hit WONDER//
i baby'd you, like im your (f)uckin MOTHER//
me and your girl goes UNDERCOVER//
your body is still UNDISCOVERED//
but my body is 5ft tall but im 6ft UNDER//
youtube.com/watch... ………Young Stinkers or Old Farts
Since: Jun 12
I'll break ya legs off at first glance.
but i'll snap a pic before it So you could say that you stood a chance.
I got haters on the outside but i dont hear the rants .
You cant afford a college while im gettin all the grants.
I met your gf , and she cancelled all her plans.
My tongue is a pen, I autograph on the inside of her pants.
Hey im back!
@phaze that was a diss towards your rap. Lol no hate just wanna battle.
Since: Jun 12
Even though mine was five bars and not 3 lol
my lyrics are wicked i hit u for 6 like cricket you guys think you hardcore i slam ya nuts in my front door make ya head hit the floor my fists are like bear claws i make you mums ass red raw
Ii aa 5 bar battle? Lol
If you think that you can add up to me, u might wanna RE-THINK-THIS when was tha last time y’all haters ever won any PINK-SLIPS see im a redneck muthafucka, thats why Wun is SUPPOSED-TA-SPIT fuck around, i’ll put more 'bullets' in u than a GROCERY-LIST i been consistant on this site, BuGz E’s gone in case you didnt NOTICE while yo bitch wit 'phat rappaz' fuckin round, but hey thats SHOW-'BIZ' its like ya bitch fakin an orgasm- all those BOASTS-IS-FRONT-IN i’ll have ya body 'movin thru walls', but u aint a GHOST OR NOTHIN after Bugz left, i saw that all of ST’s talks of FAME WAS DEAD y’all aint got fans, ya woman dont even scream YOUR NAME IN BED you aint pushin nothin in ya hood, in my streets im like a MAC TRUCK Da Masta used my name in every line til Bugz left, that shut his ASS UP lol i aint even throwin in punchlines, if i wanted to ide BATTLE YOU Corrosiv aint been in school, he been schooled, he went to 'Wun RATTLED U' see i can say anything i want to say, an anything i get AWAY WITH i fucked ya momma in tha ass to give her shit somethin to PLAY WITH
yall sweet but i spit forreal
Yo is this roomn still active
Since: Jun 12
I drop bullets shells like the beat,
You gunna need some techtonics if you wanna shake my feet
im on point wit my style this new york is unique
Cuz im sprayin everybody like a 5th ave boutique.
Im spazin out when i come thru
Nobodies gunna doubt me
Ill spit at you any day like a grandma
This is one og the sickest drops I've seen in a long time.
^This is one of the sickest drops I've seen in a long time. I need a new keyboard lol.
I take chords and string up ideas on my life's
I beat the system with the instruments of my wit
So when its time to face the music my feet will
groove the best.
16 bars is always all I see.
A prison gate behind which sustains a hungry
My drums snare at the competition as I kick
down their doors.
They fear my drum rolls so they bass all over the
Violins violently let the vile in as my harps grin
strums in sin on its sharp strings.
My Cello's screams screech hello and the
mellow streams stream fellows in.
My keyboard feeds raw green gore for all fiends
in large keys as beats swing like see-saw.
There's much to note as notes play racist black
and white games
and jokes as the blacks pitch the throats of the
white keys provoked.
High hats and symbols. Hear them clash.
Brown eyes and dimples, simple people's hopes
poked and exposed with no thimbles.
Our brains have been crippled.
The Blood rushes to our feet and we move in
discord without reason
be it to the right tempo and percussions or for
flight and threats of persecution.
The Depth of reason is vacant with spots as the
shallowness is done with recruitments.
We think its okay to stop thinking.
We act as though each act or show is just as
blunt and plain as snow.
No textures, low measure. No expectations and
We give power to Governments who fail to
govern us with governance
but rather covenants of schemes and other
stunts innate of greed and arrogance
solely proclaimed to deny the humble man an
We go to church and lurch around the
proceedings as we fail to prevail in religion
its teachings and the things we claim to believe
in. Why are we still breathing?
I feel I'm off course, of course. Everything else is
a false source of creation.
Inspiration has reduce to a conscious stale state
Searching for a reason; a meaning to not
overdose on unprescribed medication.
.....But I'm back on track. Killing beats.
The words punctuate themselves and the
evidence shelves itself
the wealth to which skill delves leaves art as
short as the feet of elves.
Music's melodies mellow me to meek degrees
that decree to me
to be all my talents require of me.
My mind is in a constant state of oscillation,
around our society and the problems we're
This situation often draws me to begin hating,
but i'm just being patient.
Not too long now before the apocalypse'
All i have is time and rhymes to ascend through
And I pray I do this with a Sound Mind....
Since: Jun 12
Nice one rapswipe
This is how you rhyme basic..
no principales to the materials when I paste this...
kobe in the 4th quarter do you still want to face this?
Battle rappers are lame and fckng wack
A bunch of pu$$ys that lyriterally acts
True facts when you talk about gats
but you never pulled 1 to get thrown in them cracks
prison talk, a felonly is what you're in for
Some people call me a prodigy others call me a mentor
I'm breaking it down as smooth as silk
Bones big as Dinosaures, Rhymes good from 1st line to four, Built
I been shooken with crime so you'll get tooken with rhymes
when I'm the best in my prime, I'll give you nine shots
then make you come back for 1 more like I was suppose to lend
I AA I gotchu lol 5 bars
Don't talk about 5th avenue when you know nothin bout PARK SLOPE//
Be spittin directly into your vessel that your HEART CHOKES//
You ARE A JOKE & as far as this HORROR GOES//
our FATHER KNOWS that im too sick like im cancer & I aint talking about a HOROSCOPE//
Ima King, im rocking BLACK AND YELLOW//
my people be PACKING METAL, GRAB STILETTOS & ACTN GHETTO//
This MASTERPIECE will affect your FAMILY//
it HAS TO BE the TRAGEDY willing to AXE MC's
your the first one,on my list for THAT TO BE//
im negative andd positive like an AA BATTERY//
Yo word up
i like to f*ck
with my pet duck
in a truck
it pees on me
but you cant see
the love it has, for my pee pee
you're gunn' get hit
if you lick my clit
imma' push you off a cliff
bestfriends with donnor
you think thats an honor?
i like to rap
while i fap
and in gap
i fap fap fap
i feel like dr suess
hey dont touch my caboose
you look like a moose
pass the juice!
my name is peiner
i have a small weiner
i have a cat
in this nation
f*ck you obama
you look like a black llama
i have an erection
i dont care
you're a bear
close your legs you f*cking whore.
yo thx homie.
ur raps are wack like a outdated track im bout to get u back wit my gat in yo life in a flash now its a crash for life staned tall every night protectin yo life from the evil doers like some couger stock while ur talkin
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