Lyrical Beast

UK

#27122 Oct 27, 2012
Lyric flows stop acting hard one smack I'll par you like I was actally runnin you over with a super car, you gimmick's bullshit, I spit thicker than a big booty bitch who literally has chicken legs, I torcher mc's and hang em on pegs and most fiends claim to be the best by rapping intense but it's not about the punchline It's about how your life makin real sense, coz I know thugs bein through a lot like gettin kindappned and nearly killed by fedz, but that's how shit is nower dayz we can't even trust people's taste coz their might be a snitch tracing out and f**cking up out family problems case!

Since: Oct 12

Location hidden

#27123 Oct 27, 2012
Vers your a dummy wrote:
"you got burned wit your fake shit"
barbequin rubber turds? bet u cant wait to taste it
i'll put your head in the oven and pee on it to baste it
yer a fuggn disgrace kid. why am i even
wastin my time like your father wasted his semen
lets just make an agreement, you quit the rhymin
and i won't bust you bloody like a teenage hymen
you just remain silent, cuz you have the right to
and we should have the right to exclude sukkas thats like you
un-knuckle the mic foo, yer ripe when you type peww
the forum needs a flusher. are you even in high school?
i wuz writin better shit than that in the 1st grade
teacher's crushin on me wanted my nuts in the worst way
what wuz there i kud say, but "K, here's the pelv."
ended up wit them straight A's from the K thru the 12
Vers? the forum would b better off with him departin'
bet five years of his life wuz kindergarten...
Donít test me, cuz there aint no telling wat I might do next
When I recite rhymes, they shoot right through vests
Through your mind which stores your rhymes
Iím about to explore, give me any beat, Iíll break it down to the core
I come equipped with lyrics that stress MCís
They all mad, cuz Iíve reached a point where the rest canít be
I got it made, like Special Ed did back in the day
I aint like all the MCís rapping for air play
Listen to the different descriptions as I flip scriptures
The rhymes I deliver will help ya get the big picture
Cuz my lyrical comprehension is in another dimension
The shit I kick will turn your mind in a different direction
When I recite rhymes, they immediately hit MCís
My rhymes spread like a disease, if they aint got
Tricks up they sleeves, when I have full advantage
My rhymes do the most damage, but no matter what
Iím laying in a cut like a bandage, when I catch wreck, Iím quick to get you wet
You can find me in the clubs like 50 cent
Two Face

Port Saint Lucie, FL

#27124 Oct 27, 2012
Hip Hop Hero wrote:
Hip-Hop Hero-
strengths.. Wordplay, puns and punchlines that connect,Strong Concepts, and decent Multi's and structure
Weakness.. Flo- my flo is often difficult to catch at first read, Over complicated at times, and Storytelling I rarely do story telling nowadays..
Shingami-
Strengths.. Vocabulary, puns, meta's and sims, Structure,and Multi's, decent storytelling..
Weakness... id say flo a little hard to catch at times. some of the longer drops have a bit of filler ..imo no hate..but I think it may be because the drops are so damn long...hahaha
Two-Face-
Puns and Wordplay, Strong punchlines,and Multi's decent metas and similes'
Weakness- Not on enough..haha.. jk I havent really seen any storytelling from him here., flo is a lil difficult to grasp imo..
WhiteRabbit13-
Strengths.. Multi's, concepts,metas and vocabulary, has strong storytelling skills, aight flo, puns are getting better lately
Weakness.. Structure, punchlines, rhymescheme his drops are packed with mainly 2 syll multis, but sometimes it's hard to figure out what his actual rythm is..fortunately it kinda fits the format of accapella style rhymes..I think..thats the only reason I put that there.. I'm really not sure how YOU would do it.
Seanny-T-
Strengths- Storytelling, Flo, Structure, Multi's ..Strong Similes and good meta's..
Weakness- Punchlines, some Concepts dont reach out of the box enough imo..Puns, and Wordplay need a lil bump imo..
SRD-
Strengths.. Vocabulary, Structure, multi's, simile's
Weakness.. Puns, and Punchlines- you tend to overcomplicate them 2 concepts in one or two bars is plenty to digest for most people, folks shouldnt need a dictionary to enjoy your writtens..imo...rhyme scheme-you tend to hit rhyme words mid sentence then continue the sentence on the next line..not professional imo..it's one of my pet peeves, Concepts need a lil more clarity..
this is all just my opinion ..so it is what it is ..I have alot to work on..imo also im actually doing this cause this kinda stuff helps out alot..
I respect that, you defenitley discribed everyone on point. and I'm trying to write a lil more know hahaha
Two Face

Port Saint Lucie, FL

#27125 Oct 27, 2012
HHH vs Shinigami vs Somerandomdude vs whiterabbit13 vs Seanny t vs two face vs ?

If you guys are down, we can make this happen.
it could be the best battle on this site, The reason I say that is because long ago we had a championship match between me, Seanny, and shini and I still think that it's the best battle on this site, at least from what I can recall. We all have very different ways of writing and I'd like to see how they can go up against each other. So think about it lol
Anonymous

Korea

#27126 Oct 27, 2012
We need one more person for the Halloween Horrorcore Tournament. We have 7 entries. Please sign up at the Halloween Horrorcore Tournament on the Hip-Hop Forum.
Anonymous

Korea

#27127 Oct 27, 2012
Two Face wrote:
HHH vs Shinigami vs Somerandomdude vs whiterabbit13 vs Seanny t vs two face vs ?
If you guys are down, we can make this happen.
it could be the best battle on this site, The reason I say that is because long ago we had a championship match between me, Seanny, and shini and I still think that it's the best battle on this site, at least from what I can recall. We all have very different ways of writing and I'd like to see how they can go up against each other. So think about it lol
Sure maybe after the tournament.

Since: Oct 12

Plymouth, UK

#27128 Oct 28, 2012
you see is the sun, reflectin off of the gun
I'm ready for the showdown, that go down at one
Sweat on my unibrow, let's settle it now
I'ma show you how real cowboys get down
I'm polishin gold, waitin for this drama to unfold
I got a blunt rolled
Feelin bold, gangsters blood runs cold
It's time to reload this old .45 colt
The wind's gusty, it's hot, muggy and dusty
Bust a couple shots, make sure I'm not rusty
It's passed noon, he should be here soon
Sip a little moonshine inside a saloon
All of a sudden I can hear the sound of hoofs
Sounds like a thousand wolves
I cock back, put the toast in the holster and froze
Tysane

Booneville, KY

#27129 Oct 28, 2012
G19LyricalMaster wrote:
you see is the sun, reflectin off of the gun
I'm ready for the showdown, that go down at one
Sweat on my unibrow, let's settle it now
I'ma show you how real cowboys get down
I'm polishin gold, waitin for this drama to unfold
I got a blunt rolled
Feelin bold, gangsters blood runs cold
It's time to reload this old .45 colt
The wind's gusty, it's hot, muggy and dusty
Bust a couple shots, make sure I'm not rusty
It's passed noon, he should be here soon
Sip a little moonshine inside a saloon
All of a sudden I can hear the sound of hoofs
Sounds like a thousand wolves
I cock back, put the toast in the holster and froze
Sounds alot like "Bad Guys Always Die" by Dr. Dre & Eminem
ASUdevil05

Knox, IN

#27130 Oct 28, 2012
Freestlye 7

Aint nothing in this world can try to affect mine
I write new lines, and try to do it better the next time
There aint no stress, when Iím rocking the vest
I got the ruggedest style that ya never even heard of
Come to my block, check the burners homies is stressed cuz the murder
I just keep it clean, I make my own scene
Cuz Iím only doing this rap thing for da heck of it
But the real passion, might sound a little old fashioned
Cuz where Iím from there aint no relaxin
Homies rolling dice, hearts colder than ice
The ones who paid the price is more than just nice
My lyrical concept type of questions got you guessing
How can I test the best, or make an impression
When I write rhymes, blueprints fill the lines
When Iím in the lab, all other thoughts clear my mind
And yo son, Iíve defeated the best over 100 times
Eh yo, why need a gun when I got my mind?
The Black Frank White

Dallas, TX

#27131 Oct 28, 2012
Brand new,
Just refurbished, Back in service,
I here to serve hits,
for thou who nervous,
These discerned twists, i spit,
flow like water, dont barter,
With me for Verbal man Slaughter,
Only thing i harbor,
Is a diseased mind, in which i deviate crimes,
as if those thoughts were mine,
Came long before my time,
so do good lies create wise?
I surmise, that these cats havent been circumsized,
Have you realized, The Frank White will bring your demise,
100 times, gives me 100 rhymes, to blast 100 guys,
I'd use a gun, so i wouldnt bake my mind,
__________

Back.... lol maybe for a while.
Whiterrabit, SRD and the other guys still post on here?
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#27132 Oct 28, 2012
This actually goes out to everybody, not just Frank White. We are having a Halloween Horrorcore Tourney and we need one more spot filled to get it poppin. Please go to the Hip-Hop forum and sign up under Halloween Horrorcore Tourney to get it happening. We would like to read in discriptive detail how you can maim and dismember your fellow man.

We also need judges too.(You don't have to sign up for this, just be a good voter and actively vote.)

-Shini
The Black Frank White wrote:
Brand new,
Just refurbished, Back in service,
I here to serve hits,
for thou who nervous,
These discerned twists, i spit,
flow like water, dont barter,
With me for Verbal man Slaughter,
Only thing i harbor,
Is a diseased mind, in which i deviate crimes,
as if those thoughts were mine,
Came long before my time,
so do good lies create wise?
I surmise, that these cats havent been circumsized,
Have you realized, The Frank White will bring your demise,
100 times, gives me 100 rhymes, to blast 100 guys,
I'd use a gun, so i wouldnt bake my mind,
__________
Back.... lol maybe for a while.
Whiterrabit, SRD and the other guys still post on here?
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#27133 Oct 28, 2012
@ Frank White

SRD still does, but Rabbit and Seanny T have been busy with side projects. Two-Face has been having problems with his computer, so he's in and out of the forum from time to time.

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#27134 Oct 28, 2012
Uh uh yea this is my rap uh yea uhhh opps
The Black Frank White

Dallas, TX

#27135 Oct 28, 2012
@shini

Ohh alright cool thanks man. Ive been out of here for a lonnnggg time haha.
Also what did you tag my verse into your notice for? I was just wondering no biggie.
BITWA DANIEL GRAYSON

Alburtis, PA

#27136 Oct 28, 2012
YO THAT FREESTYLE WAS WHACK I COULD NOT WAIT FOR IT TO END
I DO NOT GOT A GIRL BUT YOU GOT A GIRL FRIEND
YO WHAT YOU GONNA DO TRYING TO BATTLE WITH ME
ILL RIP YOU IN FRONT OF YOUR CREW
LIKE IT DID NOT HAPPEN TO ME
THE DIFFERENCE IS I AM REAL AND YOUR A PHONY
MY STLYE IS FAT LIKE SARAGOSSA,TONY
YOU WHAT YOU GONNA DO YOU CANT HURT ME
A THREAT FROM BOTH SIDE OF THE PLATE LIKE EDDIE MURRIE
BUT DONT WORRIE ILL GET STRAIGHT UP IN YOUR FACE
ITS BITWA BOUT TO BLOW THE ROOF OFF THE PLACE
ITS NO MERCY SO DONT WORRIE IM DIRTY
ILL BLEED YOU TILL YOU BERGENDY BUT DONT WORRIE
ITS PHYSICALLY MERDIGES ITS CONSERVIN ME
YOU CANT SEE THIS WITH TELESCOPICS LENSES
IM CRAZY LIKE THEM 20 INCH RIMS ON THEM BENZES
YOU SAY I CANT RAP YOU CALLIN ME CRAP
WHATS UP WITH THAT YO I TEACH YOU STRAIGHT HOW TO ACT
THIS IS BITWAS COMMITY
YOUR FROM BALTIMORE BUT I STRAIGHT RUN THE CITY
DOWN AND GREEDY
ITS TIME TO GET DIRTY WAVE YOUR HAND UP
I DONT CARE IF YOU ARE 4 OR 30
WAZUP THATS RIGHT YAH THATS RIGHT BABY
CAUSE M ILL LIKE A SICK METAPHOR
GOT THESE PEOPLE CAHNTIN BITWA LIKE THEY WANT SOME MORE HAND IN FRONT OF MY FACE YOU CANT SEE MEE
YOU PROBABLY HEARD ME RIPPIN MCS ON 19.3
THATS RIGHT WAVE THEM HANDS HIGH
THAT WAS A NICE DISS BUT A WACK A TRY
YOU CANT FLY WITH ME B I T W A
ITS A FREESTYLE RAP BABY WE DONT PLAY
I COME OFF THE DOME LIKE EVERYDAY
PUT YOU IN BOTH SIDES BITWA TURN 3WAY WHATUP
BY:BEST IN THE WORLD AWESOME DANIEL DAVID GRAYSON
BITWA DANIEL GRAYSON

Alburtis, PA

#27137 Oct 28, 2012
YO IM WALKING AGAIN
IM BACK ON MY FEET
AND IM HOLDIN DOWN THE STREETS
LIKE A NEW PAIR OF CLEATS
SACRAFICING SLEEP SO IN A FEW WEEKS
I CAN LOOK YOU IN THE EYES
AND UNLEASH THE BEAST
ABOUT TO PROVE TO YOU
THE UNUSUAL THINGS THAT I CAN DO TO YOU
LIKE GET MY FIST AND DRIVE IT RIGHT THROUGH YOU
ILL TAKE YOU DOWN AT ANY AND ALL COSTS
IM MGAHARD YOU MICROSOFT IM A HEAVY HITTER
WHEN I STOP I DONT BACK
IM THE KING AROUND HERE
YOU JUST ANOTHER JACKOF
YOU SEEN ME BEFOR BUT NEVER INTENSE
IMMA FILL YOU FULL OF HOLES
LIKE A CHAIN LINK FENCE
BY:BEST IN THE WORLD AWESOME DANIEL DAVID GRAYSON
Phaze

Philadelphia, PA

#27138 Oct 28, 2012
Guts spill as I lick the blade. Blood everywhere even in my face. You can tell by my features. You can tell ima nurderous creature. Kill off my leisure. Leaving my enemies shaking as if they havin seizures. Ima monster, my look gives you amnesia. rush my foe in and I corner in. blood and gore occurs as if I want more of it. Stuff you out and hang you as an ornament. I cant wait for this horrorcore tournament..
Phaze

Philadelphia, PA

#27139 Oct 28, 2012
murderous*
Corner him**
BITWA DANIEL GRAYSON

Alburtis, PA

#27140 Oct 28, 2012
YO SAVE YOUR BREATH KID IM HERE FOR A REASON
MY TARGET IS YOU AND ITS HUNTIN SEASON
ILL TEACH A LESSON THAT MR.MIYAGI DID
BUT HE NOT DANIEL LARUSSO
AND THIS AINT NO KARATE KID
YAH MY PANTS ARE SAGGIN
BECAUSE I BEEN WORKIN MY BUT OFF
ILL PUT A WAX ON TO A KID WHO WACKS OFF
IM MORE OF A THREAT THAN UNCLEAR FALLOUT
CAUSE TONIGHT IS THE NIGHT THE NEXT BIG THING
GETS CALLED
BY;BEST IN THE WORLD AWESOME DANIEL DAVID GRAYSON
Matthewt

Washington, DC

#27141 Oct 28, 2012
@mc shinigami

Can I be in the tournament

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