SomeRandomDude

Post Falls, ID

#24305 Jul 9, 2012
Whiterabbit13 wrote:
Never heard of him man haha
http://www.youtube.com/user/boburnham

Go on netflicked or something and see his Comedy Central Stand-up.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24306 Jul 9, 2012
BK Triple L wrote:
<quoted text>
Word, I just don't see how my lyrics are whack. I put a lot more effort in than @antonyto you can believe that. I don't want no beef with you homey because I respect you, You're a really good lyricist and have a massive reputation on this Website in my eyes. I just want to be able to have the same respect as you. I'm sorry man!!!
I can respect that. When I write battle rhymes it's usually to a specific person. Sometimes I call out everyone because that's called having balls. Battle rhymes are fun I just hate how some people try and make writing all technical and $#!+. Not everybody rhymes like Eminem. I rhyme for fun now not to get a deal, been there done that(on a independent level)

This is never personal. When I call someone out and call them wack that is a challenge and I'm not really looking for crying responses. Everytime Someone posts a response I'll comeback at them. I will never make a list why I have or don't have excuses.

Here's a rhyme I wrote a few weeks back. Just an example of one of the many ways I rhyme.

Its a never ending circle, lies masked by uncertainty
with frugal beginnings to a time full of luxuries
the irony, the climate makes children grasp at straws
while the parents teach misleading like it is actual law
the awe of the light guides most down the narrow path
while the buoyancy of life has most clinging to a raft
the undertow pulls many while the waves are a plenty
working hard all ya life so you'll be proud of all your pennies
The life you really want doesn't appear in HD
but the sounds of suffering are in surround dolby
Conglomerates of opulence, no need for common sense
the struggle is intense while the profits are immense
Change is the vision that the media presents
but its scarcity of freedom that the systems implements
every channel, every angle got you sure of who's to blame
in between sprayed on tans and those with 15 minutes of fame
the same can't be said to those with long attention spans
it's the seeds that we breed to teach them lessons of the scam
regardless of who owns the harvest may those fukars be damned
I'm executive of this shit and you have now been canned......

Showing ones intelligence is important,for me at least.
http://autismdad1966.files.wordpress.com/2012...

Since: Jul 12

Houston, TX

#24307 Jul 9, 2012
Whiterabbit13 wrote:
Oh an @ religion
I'm killing this disease who perfected perfection like ima f*ckin antiseptic ,
I take ya shit in an immediately redirect it where everyone expects it, in the septic
You cnt beat any vets on this forum,
Ya shits legit shit more fowl than santorum
*jus wanted t put that out there* haha
Tell me you're kidding, with that short rap you writtin
I was gonna judge that comment with an X so it would be forbiddin
But anyway, I can battle any-vet, Get stronger after
the mimi(many)-threats, Wish along an make that Penny-wet
I come with the intensity of a earth-quake
Convicted rh@pist increasing the birth-rates Not talking about btchs but you rappers
I'm a mc so dont mistake me for you're platter
Ask me how I reach the top without using a ladder?
Ask micheal jackson out of me and you who's badder?
Puttn faggots in bags cause Im a baggar
High self-esteem cause I'm a bragger
Body bag any one of these mick jaggars
A meth head with a nose-decaying, secret sht in my rap
myth codes be breaking, Im legit like sh!t?
and you're legit like a transvesdyke with a small d!ck

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24308 Jul 9, 2012
BK Triple L wrote:
<quoted text>
Triple L - Life In The Ghetto Farm Part 1:
(@antonyto Diss)
Yo, From you I've learned one thing don't mess with the Sheep,
@Shinigami was right your lyrics are nothing more than cheap.
You're now messing with the big boys son,
Pull back the trigger no chance you can run.
Also which queer are you talking about your Sheep or yourself,
Looking at this worthless farm animal he gets too much poor health.
Telling me to go and slit my wrists I don't who's glove got shoved up your hole.
Maybe It's all down to the jealousy you have against me whacking you until you fall Totem Pole.
Illest Lyricist '97 is officially back to business,
Before I end you I'll make sure they ain't a single witness.
I've got more skills than you at being the sh-t,
You've got more skills than me when it comes to eating sh-t.
So don't complain, When I'm storming like Acid Rain,
Giving you pain, That makes you want to walk infront of a Train.
My advice to you would be quickly change your Profile Picture,
You're like a Builder you be sh-tting bricks with that abnormal stricture.
By the way I think your really talking that Blah! Blah! Blah! like Ke$ha.
I'm a walk through your town and paint the dam thing red
blood that I spill will make you ill, hiding under your bed
calling Dr Phil to fix the void in your head
because up to this point your just the walking dead
Your life is in free fall, I'm Jordan to B-ball
you shit like seagulls, Gibson's weapon I'm lethal
I'm evil like a villain killing children on the Mic
stalking victims in the park in the broad day light
always write what I mean cause I'm a sociopath
meticulous are my methods when perfecting my craft

My profile pic was of a dude stupid enough to post his real face. So I made a few different versions to mess with him. He's a real goof. lol

“fam on my hand for a lifespan”

Since: Nov 10

Coatesville,PA

#24309 Jul 9, 2012
@religion
in way I'm like Jamie Lee Curtis, surrounded by murders
Not only on Halloween do I make it seen,
I'm always the one behind the scene

Michael Myers is my nickname, steadily carving while I flex my wrist game
Make ya piss ya pants, only thing legit is ya piss stains

Leaving a trail of pain along my murderous excursions,
You only one of many missing persons left backstage once I close the curtain

See I'm on the verge of insanity, taking on you whack cats is only half the vanity,
I get t witness myself make somethin beautiful,
as I piss on all ya coffins at the f*ckin funeral

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24310 Jul 9, 2012
wakfonyfoo wrote:
"after reading half of you're lyrics i'd rather watch paint dry"
crappy wityer rappin captain that was a lame try.
pipe down n put the pipe down it ain't good to stay high.
say hi to mike, the mic.
while i jam it down your throat and yell, "He's dead on three!"
1 2 3! hlech! broke yer neck.
the audience loved it.
try and try again but dog you ain't gonna touch this.
abortion wit the words I'm horfin', lyrics that crush kids.
your shit's watered down that's how i easily flushed it.
you wiesely young prick, get the fugg on.
before i push the red button n you get hit a bomb.
crown up on my head to put the King wit da Kong.
fuggin squash ya and put ya momma on the tip of ma dong!
momma kabob. whoops, guess my dick was too long...
http://www.colourbox.com/preview/2156072-4442...
Swagg_kid

United States

#24311 Jul 9, 2012
Im backk!! Decided to get back on here since i dont have shid else to do

Since: Jul 12

Houston, TX

#24313 Jul 9, 2012
Whiterabbit13 wrote:
@religion
in way I'm like Jamie Lee Curtis, surrounded by murders
Not only on Halloween do I make it seen,
I'm always the one behind the scene
Michael Myers is my nickname, steadily carving while I flex my wrist game
Make ya piss ya pants, only thing legit is ya piss stains
Leaving a trail of pain along my murderous excursions,
You only one of many missing persons left backstage once I close the curtain
See I'm on the verge of insanity, taking on you whack cats is only half the vanity,
I get t witness myself make somethin beautiful,
as I piss on all ya coffins at the f*ckin funeral
If you havn't noticed, you're the past and I'm the future
I'm some type of sick creature with monster like features
Im exhaling out ether, by reading this lecture
your computer might need a fire fighter breather
I see rap like tupac, he's see it's like justin believer (bieber)
So lethal with a gun, like how red necks left my color people hung
Like how in Iran, if you lie their cutting out you're tongue
Im eating this small green annoying cricket
After I eat my burps say ribbit, what animal am I?
The one that kisses the princess and gets turned into a Guy
I leap around, Surrounded by pond water
If I don't make the leap to the next lilly pad I try harder
Don't bother to comment back because Im a serial killer,
I prefer to do multiple slaughters

“fam on my hand for a lifespan”

Since: Nov 10

Coatesville,PA

#24314 Jul 9, 2012
@religionso ima redneck?
erase ya a** like Arnold's character,
Cut ya into 13 colonies make ya bleed america
Wanted t face a lyrical assassin?
I been carving since my moms first contraction,
Killing you illegitimate belligerent b*tchs is my passion

Ima maniacal sadistic illiterate misfit,
Spitting shit so mystic it comes off limerick,
Yet you wonderin how I kilt this with only fingertips

Your ok you started off good but you went t shit after that

Since: Jul 12

Houston, TX

#24315 Jul 9, 2012
Whiterabbit13 wrote:
@religionso ima redneck?
erase ya a** like Arnold's character,
Cut ya into 13 colonies make ya bleed america
Wanted t face a lyrical assassin?
I been carving since my moms first contraction,
Killing you illegitimate belligerent b*tchs is my passion
Ima maniacal sadistic illiterate misfit,
Spitting shit so mystic it comes off limerick,
Yet you wonderin how I kilt this with only fingertips
Your ok you started off good but you went t shit after that
thanks an its not personal that last kid that asked if this was personal I think he commited suicide

“fam on my hand for a lifespan”

Since: Nov 10

Coatesville,PA

#24316 Jul 9, 2012
You jus jump around alot goin towards the end keep on one thing a battle diss is a complete diss,
If you wouldst kept on jus the past t future topic I guarantee you coulda used most them lines still.

Since: Jul 12

Houston, TX

#24317 Jul 9, 2012
Whiterabbit13 wrote:
@religionso ima redneck?
erase ya a** like Arnold's character,
Cut ya into 13 colonies make ya bleed america
Wanted t face a lyrical assassin?
I been carving since my moms first contraction,
Killing you illegitimate belligerent b*tchs is my passion
Ima maniacal sadistic illiterate misfit,
Spitting shit so mystic it comes off limerick,
Yet you wonderin how I kilt this with only fingertips
Your ok you started off good but you went t shit after that
Lets get stuff streight first, understood?
Just because you use big words dosn't neccesarley make you good
It's to obvious for everybody's eyes
You have over 10 rapping styles, what a suprise?
I got a present, It's gonna send you to heaven
And no I'm not talking about that smith n wesson
but a powerful joe fraizer right-hook
This nerd looks at comic fight-books
The next day he goes to school with so much exicment
but stormy days rain because his lunch money gets took
It's not very easy to beat you
I'm getting my doctor degree in a week or two
Just so I can stab you with poisonous needles
Naw I'm not really evil, I only have 1 fan, The devil wrote and said, " It would be a honor just to meet you "

how was that 1

“fam on my hand for a lifespan”

Since: Nov 10

Coatesville,PA

#24318 Jul 9, 2012
It was good jus what happened with excitement you left it changing an went back t rhyming with book

Next day he goes to school with so much Excitement
But stormy days rain cuz his lunch money gets took, doesnt even fight it

Somethin like that actually think is this gonna hit. You can take any word that rhymes an make it work depending on the wording you use, if you get what I'm saying

“fam on my hand for a lifespan”

Since: Nov 10

Coatesville,PA

#24319 Jul 9, 2012
Your wording just needs a lil help that's it like the Smith n Wesson line an the Frazier hook

Since: Jul 12

Houston, TX

#24320 Jul 9, 2012
With these pistols I'm packing, I make rapping
seem so simple as for asking for a Napkin
I'm leaving the papper smacking
and the pencil is the 1 thats doing all this stabin
It's like a steady habit, gettin advice from rabbit
Steady improving, fluidity grooving,
Bullying til I see bruises
and If theirs a confusion
(a bomb) then I'm moving and then defusing
Protecting the citizens of Houston
As I coast to the finish line
When I see Lemon Line
my tongue automaticly says Scrimage time
Firefighter can't extinguish my rhymes
A delinquent in crime, A 45 magnum can be divided and
distinguish from a 9 = 5 so "Mag'ine",
what those guns would do to you're spine.

took me like 8 mins to do this and I havn't posted a written rap on here yet, just been freestyling to youtube instrumental

Since: Jul 12

Boise, ID

#24322 Jul 10, 2012
I'm bigger than , taller than you , I got a pet mouse bigger than yo house

“fam on my hand for a lifespan”

Since: Nov 10

Coatesville,PA

#24323 Jul 10, 2012
TruelReligion wrote:
With these pistols I'm packing, I make rapping
seem so simple as for asking for a Napkin
I'm leaving the papper smacking
and the pencil is the 1 thats doing all this stabin
It's like a steady habit, gettin advice from rabbit
Steady improving, fluidity grooving,
Bullying til I see bruises
and If theirs a confusion
(a bomb) then I'm moving and then defusing
Protecting the citizens of Houston
As I coast to the finish line
When I see Lemon Line
my tongue automaticly says Scrimage time
Firefighter can't extinguish my rhymes
A delinquent in crime, A 45 magnum can be divided and
distinguish from a 9 = 5 so "Mag'ine",
what those guns would do to you're spine.
took me like 8 mins to do this and I havn't posted a written rap on here yet, just been freestyling to youtube instrumental
other than the typos it was alright jus keep workin at it
SomeRandomDude

United States

#24324 Jul 10, 2012
antonyto wrote:
<quoted text>
I'm a walk through your town and paint the dam thing red
blood that I spill will make you ill, hiding under your bed
calling Dr Phil to fix the void in your head
because up to this point your just the walking dead
Your life is in free fall, I'm Jordan to B-ball
you shit like seagulls, Gibson's weapon I'm lethal
I'm evil like a villain killing children on the Mic
stalking victims in the park in the broad day light
always write what I mean cause I'm a sociopath
meticulous are my methods when perfecting my craft
My profile pic was of a dude stupid enough to post his real face. So I made a few different versions to mess with him. He's a real goof. lol
It's stupid to post a picture of yourself on the internet? What type of anti social present generation have we come to?
BK Triple L

Bishop Auckland, UK

#24325 Jul 10, 2012
Seanny T wrote:
We all still have lots to learn haha even the greats are constantly learning. Overall I'd say ur good, and u have gotten better since comin on here so that's a plus to.@triple l
Much appreciated homey, I thoroughly understand what you and @Whiterabbit13 are saying and I really respect it. I think I have a lot of improving and learning left, but as you previously said everybody is constantly learning and improving on different areas in their style, flow and lyrics.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24327 Jul 10, 2012
SomeRandomDude wrote:
<quoted text>
It's stupid to post a picture of yourself on the internet? What type of anti social present generation have we come to?
I explained it. you no comprehend?

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