freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)
kaoneroyalray

Europe

#24241 Jul 8, 2012
thiz hot lyrics are damn hot loov it
Killah

Halifax, Canada

#24242 Jul 8, 2012
@somerandomdude
ayo I'm back ready to seize the game
your rhymes hurtin' so let me ease the pain
feed ya brain with lines to defeat the lames
light up my trees in flames
then start spittin' makin' ya'll leave in shame
you can't compete with illest with no sure
If your so sure- why is everything you spit not kosher
I can't take you serious,
thinkin' your good makes you delirious
your a history rapper don't get in the way of my presence
your a whack peasent compared to my essence
SomeRandomDude

Post Falls, ID

#24243 Jul 8, 2012
Killah wrote:
@somerandomdude
ayo I'm back ready to seize the game
your rhymes hurtin' so let me ease the pain
feed ya brain with lines to defeat the lames
light up my trees in flames
then start spittin' makin' ya'll leave in shame
you can't compete with illest with no sure
If your so sure- why is everything you spit not kosher
I can't take you serious,
thinkin' your good makes you delirious
your a history rapper don't get in the way of my presence
your a whack peasent compared to my essence
Well check it out, he left and came back. Tell you what, when I'm down for something I'll battle you iight?

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24244 Jul 8, 2012
Shinigami wrote:
Antonyto quit sucking sh!2 through glory holes
You have no glory no, but hey cool story bro
Talking about biters having sass
Must be biting religons ass
I'll break it down simple like an 8 bit game
Me follow religon, I rather be an athiest maine
If you like religon why do I even try
Cause everything "true" said about religon was a lie
But since we're on the topic of religon
Thall shall not steal was supposed to be something we living
That is why disses are like Christmas, something we giving
I am that death from above, I kick bars like bread crumbs to doves
You crackhead dumb f!@#, hope you get hit in the head by a dumptruck
Calling me out? Ya must be dumbstruck. In this bout there is no dumb luck.
Ask for your personal jesus, reach out and touch faith fu!Kface
You have to be Jewing me if you can "not see" that Truereligon is fake
Antonio don't come here with your crap again, coming in here whack again is going to make me have to take a dump in front of the Vatican, you in my league? not even happenin
I'm obviously no angel, since you like foreign films let me switch angles
Using the same old ploy will have you wasted like I'm "Old Boy"
I will turn this into a comedy and make Antotnyo "Amelie"
Your material is like if you polished some vomit
I sleep on your stuff like "Wallace and Gromit"
Your up religons's ass like "The Gods Must Be Crazy"
Or cannot see the "true" like the gods must be hazy.
Piss me off and that's when I play the hardest
I'll blaze you up like it's "Satan's Harvest"
Call me "The Grey Fox", way I hack a Snake
Or "Zatouichi" way I brandish a blade
These netcees, half their asses faking
That's why I blow their sets up like "Attack the Gas Station"
You must suffer from autism or like awed dissin
I just snuffed ya up like that trick in "the Audition."
This is a terrible response and very sloppy at that. You pretty much wasted a whole day writing this. What's with all the religion/movie references? If I were a priest I could understand but filling your diss with so much filler is pretty bad? lol
It pretty much makes no sense! I guess not everybody can be clear and articulate.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24245 Jul 8, 2012
SomeRandomDude wrote:
<quoted text>
1. DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN
2. People can learn from this, in there you switched to longer lines and how you did so was a great example. People should take a second and learn something from this.
People should learn from this how not to write a rhyme. It's all over the place and is boring to read. There are no real disses in it. The quantity kills the quality because there is none to start with.

I'm not the best in the world but a nursery rhyme is better structured than anything you guys write. Seriously.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Canada

#24246 Jul 8, 2012
Antonyto if ur so good than y ain't u famous yet? Bitch your on the same level at the very best since none of us r famous but after I drop my mixtape I got plans and I might be able to get a small deal goin so we'll see how that goes. Plus if u didn't get shinis drop u don't know much haha research his lines. They were dope. Couple were weak but couple hit hard and the rest was really good. Anyways if I wasn't so busy with recording and mixing and shit I'd take you out on here but I don't have time to waste lines on u now haha
wakfonyfoo

Minneapolis, MN

#24247 Jul 8, 2012
"a nursery rhyme is better structured than anything you guys write. Seriously."

i'll filet a sukka lyrically.
grill em till he's well done but he aint even searin' me.
hearin' me? it appears to me.
that you can't write, you just like to whine and cry all queerily.
soon as you through with puberty, come back to the forum.
your lines aint killin it, just killin us outta boredom.
crap so feeble, comin out antonyto.
raps so cheesy, how come the rats don't eat you?
beat you justa teach you, that you should call me sifu.
pen machete to your sneakers, man it's easy to De-feet you...
Anonymous

Germany

#24248 Jul 8, 2012
Seanny T wrote:
Antonyto if ur so good than y ain't u famous yet? Bitch your on the same level at the very best since none of us r famous but after I drop my mixtape I got plans and I might be able to get a small deal goin so we'll see how that goes. Plus if u didn't get shinis drop u don't know much haha research his lines. They were dope. Couple were weak but couple hit hard and the rest was really good. Anyways if I wasn't so busy with recording and mixing and shit I'd take you out on here but I don't have time to waste lines on u now haha
do u think fame is that easy?u can drop good lines but will take
time,it took me a crew, a studio, a love my country site ,easy lines and a big price i had to pay,you will have a similar problem bro.So u can take care of this b!tch now.but don't forget what i said.
Anonymous

Germany

#24249 Jul 8, 2012
making bright nice coaktails,molatov
havin colours on my badge,general
givin wishes like am from a lamp,genie
creatin a new species of rap,gerne
somethin above my life,belly
somethin below your tummy,dicky
escortin a friend to disney,mickey
speakin lines while u frown,monkey

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#24251 Jul 8, 2012
Oh I know fame isn't easy nothing in life is lol altho some ppl get lucky breaks in life every couple years but yea I honestly don't expect to make it big like eminem or anything but if I can get a record deal and get just a small bit of fame then I'll have reached my goal. Of course my ultimate goal is to make it big but the probability if that happe ing is quite small unfortunately. But ima keep at it I never give up on my dreams!

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24252 Jul 8, 2012
I'm that guy who grabs the mic and makes the speakers blow
my lips are like the bow, verses shoot like arrows
the guy that cuts you off swerving in and out of lanes
the one that pisses you off that you come up with fowl names
the guy that makes babies in your lady's vagina
bust that ass so bad the kid gets Alzheimer's
The guy your buddy knows when you’re looking to score
That old headbanger boogie that leaves you glazed on the floor
The guy you try to emulate but with no luck
Who passes through the VIP but in the line you are stuck
The guy the experts ask when it comes to problem solving
Always a step ahead Because I keep on evolving
the guy you idolize because your looking for fame
you really ain't Shifu but just a paper crane
you know its all the same you respond making a fuss
your style is full of rust, zit covered, oozing puss
I keep the readers glued and I hardly try
after reading half of your lyrics I'd rather watch paint dry

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24253 Jul 8, 2012
Seanny T wrote:
Oh I know fame isn't easy nothing in life is lol altho some ppl get lucky breaks in life every couple years but yea I honestly don't expect to make it big like eminem or anything but if I can get a record deal and get just a small bit of fame then I'll have reached my goal. Of course my ultimate goal is to make it big but the probability if that happe ing is quite small unfortunately. But ima keep at it I never give up on my dreams!
I'll give you some advice. Work very hard in English class.
You might think that was a diss but seriously the less extensive your vocabulary the dumber you sound.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#24255 Jul 8, 2012
i did do well in english class lol got 84% in ENGLISH PURE (not applied which is the dumbed down english lol)when i graduated grade 12 in high school.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24256 Jul 8, 2012
Seanny T wrote:
i did do well in english class lol got 84% in ENGLISH PURE (not applied which is the dumbed down english lol)when i graduated grade 12 in high school.
Rhymes are the same way to me. Put as much effort into writing a coherent lyric rather than slanging it up and you will see better results faster. Slang makes more words rhyme together that shouldn't. that doesn't train your brain to make sense, it trains it to cut corners.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24257 Jul 8, 2012
I guess it depends on if you want to be a rapper or an MC.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#24258 Jul 8, 2012
wakfonyfoo wrote:
"a nursery rhyme is better structured than anything you guys write. Seriously."
i'll filet a sukka lyrically.
grill em till he's well done but he aint even searin' me.
hearin' me? it appears to me.
that you can't write, you just like to whine and cry all queerily.
soon as you through with puberty, come back to the forum.
your lines aint killin it, just killin us outta boredom.
crap so feeble, comin out antonyto.
raps so cheesy, how come the rats don't eat you?
beat you justa teach you, that you should call me sifu.
pen machete to your sneakers, man it's easy to De-feet you...
I'm that guy who grabs the mic and makes the speakers blow
my lips are like the bow, verses shoot like arrows
the guy that cuts you off swerving in and out of lanes
the one that pisses you off that you come up with fowl names
the guy that makes babies in your lady's vagina
bust that ass so bad the kid gets Alzheimer's
The guy your buddy knows when you’re looking to score
That old headbanger boogie that leaves you glazed on the floor
The guy you try to emulate but with no luck
Who passes through the VIP but in the line you are stuck
The guy the experts ask when it comes to problem solving
Always a step ahead Because I keep on evolving
the guy you idolize because your looking for fame
you really ain't Shifu but just a paper crane
you know its all the same you respond making a fuss
your style is full of rust, zit covered, oozing puss
I keep the readers glued and I hardly try
after reading half of your lyrics I'd rather watch paint dry

Since: Jul 12

Houston, TX

#24259 Jul 8, 2012
Shinigami wrote:
Antonyto quit sucking sh!2 through glory holes
You have no glory no, but hey cool story bro
Talking about biters having sass
Must be biting religons ass
I'll break it down simple like an 8 bit game
Me follow religon, I rather be an athiest maine
If you like religon why do I even try
Cause everything "true" said about religon was a lie
But since we're on the topic of religon
Thall shall not steal was supposed to be something we living
That is why disses are like Christmas, something we giving
I am that death from above, I kick bars like bread crumbs to doves
You crackhead dumb f!@#, hope you get hit in the head by a dumptruck
Calling me out? Ya must be dumbstruck. In this bout there is no dumb luck.
Ask for your personal jesus, reach out and touch faith fu!Kface
You have to be Jewing me if you can "not see" that Truereligon is fake
Antonio don't come here with your crap again, coming in here whack again is going to make me have to take a dump in front of the Vatican, you in my league? not even happenin
I'm obviously no angel, since you like foreign films let me switch angles
Using the same old ploy will have you wasted like I'm "Old Boy"
I will turn this into a comedy and make Antotnyo "Amelie"
Your material is like if you polished some vomit
I sleep on your stuff like "Wallace and Gromit"
Your up religons's ass like "The Gods Must Be Crazy"
Or cannot see the "true" like the gods must be hazy.
Piss me off and that's when I play the hardest
I'll blaze you up like it's "Satan's Harvest"
Call me "The Grey Fox", way I hack a Snake
Or "Zatouichi" way I brandish a blade
These netcees, half their asses faking
That's why I blow their sets up like "Attack the Gas Station"
You must suffer from autism or like awed dissin
I just snuffed ya up like that trick in "the Audition."
2 words to describe this rap, Basic-And-Simple
School is the note pad, and I'm Erasin-the-principle
Macing the mental, my beat bass sound like grenades
I'm leaving grace-amazed, legends-say
that I even shine on a rainy-day, and when I die
I crave that "maniac" will be carved onto the tomb of my grave
I keep people like you guessing, why do I perfect Perfection?
Because the fact is True is the essence
the Religion is the beat because I Bless it
I'm already in Power, King kong jumped on 1 rook
but Im bringing down the twin-towers
I hope you pray for a cold shower
Cause hell is your desitny, when you decided to mess with me
I then put you on Hells Kitchen where fire is the main recipe.

Since: Jul 12

Houston, TX

#24260 Jul 8, 2012
The Black Frank White wrote:
<quoted text>
I think shini already pointed this out....
But isnt this Bitten from Non phixion "Refuse to Lose" ?
Straight tragic true religion... straight tragic..
ye ik tha was my 1st rap, i was just b.s
Shinigami

Seoul, Korea

#24261 Jul 8, 2012
antonyto wrote:
<quoted text>People should learn from this how not to write a rhyme. It's all over the place and is boring to read. There are no real disses in it. The quantity kills the quality because there is none to start with.
I'm not the best in the world but a nursery rhyme is better structured than anything you guys write. Seriously.
Your opinion means nothing since you d!ck ride biters. And honestly, your sh!t sucks. It's average at best. Writing battle rhymes vs. writing a diss track are two different things. Also it is a text format. I would actually have do dumb down a lot of material and sync it into a beat. You didn't put any effort into your diss so I really didn't put much effort into mine. And there are no real disses in it because everything I said about you was true.

If I want to tell some elaborate story over the course of 5 bars and then write a haymaker I could, but text battlers are a different audience that want to judge things by the bar. I do not need your praise and probably my actual job sh!ts on yours too.

Since: Jul 12

Richmond, TX

#24262 Jul 8, 2012
Shinigami wrote:
<quoted text>
Your opinion means nothing since you d!ck ride biters. And honestly, your sh!t sucks. It's average at best. Writing battle rhymes vs. writing a diss track are two different things. Also it is a text format. I would actually have do dumb down a lot of material and sync it into a beat. You didn't put any effort into your diss so I really didn't put much effort into mine. And there are no real disses in it because everything I said about you was true.
If I want to tell some elaborate story over the course of 5 bars and then write a haymaker I could, but text battlers are a different audience that want to judge things by the bar. I do not need your praise and probably my actual job sh!ts on yours too.
How does he dck ride me if he dissed me? and that was only 1 time fkn idiot

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