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Shini

Seoul, Korea

#21 Jul 14, 2013
chi-town lover wrote:
I wouldn't say body bag. I would say shini won overall but you had some good reading material in your verse. Had some good lines. I just felt like you dropped it a bit after a while. Overall it was a good read you two. Shini gets my vote if ya want a breakdown just let me know
Yes, please just break it down. It is important to see the catas so that everyone can work on their writing. I accept the fact that I won, but I like seeing who took what cata.

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#22 Jul 15, 2013
Ok here it goes again good battle you two!!
Multies- shini had many more multies. Example of my fav. "Wet hyman" "can't pass these steps rhymin" I didn't see any from nitroh.
Flow- believe it or not it was harder to find shinis flow. It felt too much like a poem at times. Awesome lyrical but was hard to find the flow so I give this one to nitroh
Nameplay- shini had various nameplay more then nitroh. Ex. Tap out like wcw nitroh
Rhyme scheme- I liked shinis he actually stuck to gameplay which was cool. All the while battling made it even better
Punches- shini most of the battle was wordplay and punches tied to game play so that was sick in its own way.
Metas- shini had way more metas and as I said the whole flow was a big meta on gameplay

Overall mvgt- shini nice drop sick metas and wordplay I liked the nameplay as well. I just felt like it got too deep at times. Felt like a poem somewhat. Also without the breakdown not many people would have got it. Nitroh your getting better but seemed like you lacked confidence in this one. Take your time on your punches as they didn't hit hard only because of the wording and structure. Overall again good battle you two!!
Some Random Dude

United States

#23 Jul 15, 2013
Shini's flow was better, Niatroh's forced structure caused a bodybag.
Some Random Dude

United States

#24 Jul 15, 2013
Oh, Shini's drop wasn't very deep compared to many of his others. i got each punch and loved it.

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#25 Jul 15, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Oh, Shini's drop wasn't very deep compared to many of his others. i got each punch and loved it.
It's my opinion and how I felt stop dwelling on my post if ya wanna battle bring it if not stand down buddy.
Shini

Kwanghuidong, Korea

#27 Jul 18, 2013
Nah I actually agree with Chi Town on this one. I thought he flowed a little bit better. Mine was there, but it was a little choppy. Usually flow should be carried out with a limit on patterns. It is okay to switch it up a few times on a 16 if it is evenly distributed. But I was alright with it because I probably written some of my best metaphors here despite the lack of depth.

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Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#28 Jul 20, 2013
Im not sure that this battle was vet material on niatrohs part... Sorry dude, shini got you in a choke hold on this one.

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Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#29 Jul 22, 2013
Okay so go ahead and tell me what i need to work on...

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