Tough Love R1 Alucard vs. Annoying Artist (4 bars)

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Shini

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#1
Feb 20, 2013
 
You have 72 hours to write 4 bars. This shouldn't be too hard. If they are not punches, they get thrown out. Peace.
Shini

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#2
Feb 21, 2013
 
bumping this too.

“always”

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#3
Feb 21, 2013
 
If you want 4 bars then I got you..

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#5
Feb 21, 2013
 
If that's four then that was easy hahaha took two seconds loll

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#6
Feb 21, 2013
 
I'll be postin it today.

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#7
Feb 21, 2013
 
XxAlucardxX wrote:
I'll be postin it today.
Word

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#8
Feb 21, 2013
 
I'm annoyin this artist up to the point he's missing his aimed targets,
I'm on point so obviously I hit the hardest,
your tappin ya head constant as if this was a hard-test,
locked inside a cellar, but I'm soon to leave you bar-less/

I'm the haymaker bring you down like the undertaker,
Shockin you lyrically like thunder,
giving my oats(sperm) to woman like Quacker/

You coudn't be straighter then the typical rainbow,
your gayer than most, bending over saying "I'm ready to bang bro!"

I speak poetically like Martial, but my attitudes raging like Marshall (Mathers),
I'd give you a partial platter of my arsenal matters till your mind gets blown off
quicker then the roadrunners attacker/
Shini

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#9
Feb 24, 2013
 
annoyin artist wrote:
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Where's yout bars?

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#10
Feb 24, 2013
 
XxAlucardxX wrote:
I'm annoyin this artist up to the point he's missing his aimed targets,
I'm on point so obviously I hit the hardest,
your tappin ya head constant as if this was a hard-test,
locked inside a cellar, but I'm soon to leave you bar-less/

I'm the haymaker bring you down like the undertaker,
Shockin you lyrically like thunder,
giving my oats(sperm) to woman like Quacker/

You coudn't be straighter then the typical rainbow,
your gayer than most, bending over saying "I'm ready to bang bro!"

I speak poetically like Martial, but my attitudes raging like Marshall (Mathers),
I'd give you a partial platter of my arsenal matters till your mind gets blown off
quicker then the roadrunners attacker/
This is only 4 bars?

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#11
Feb 24, 2013
 
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>Where's yout bars?
I posted mine first before alucard but I though this was supposed to only be 4 bars ??

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#12
Feb 24, 2013
 
I don't see urs AA and it is only 4 bars that might get him disqualified idk
Some Random Dude

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#13
Feb 24, 2013
 
Alu has more then 4 bars.
Shini

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Feb 24, 2013
 
annoyin artist wrote:
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I posted mine first before alucard but I though this was supposed to only be 4 bars ??
Post yours again. And Alucard will receive a deduction in points for "stretched" bars. 2 lines or 3 short lines is acceptable as 1 bar.

Plannin to hatch schemes
Shreddin them hackenyed
I be eggin to "crack fiends"

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Plannin to hatch schemes Shreddin them hackenyed
Shellin this whack scene way I be eggin them "crack fiends"

Some Random Dude

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#16
Feb 25, 2013
 
Alu has 6 bats porrly formatted into four, "Stanzas." I actually feel terrible even calling those stanzas, that format was terrible.

You can do triplets, but that's a bar and a half. I've seen them used on bar sets divisible by 3. You could call his cypher this.

2bar/stanza

Bar and a half

Bar

Bar and a half

It still passes the limit.

Bar stretching is what I do at times.

You load out our a line, make the rhyme eternal
Throw a coma in right, here annd it hurdles

The limitations and stretches the boundaries of the rules set-up.
Seanny T

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#17
Feb 25, 2013
 
Ya AA I don't see ur drop, and I agree alu should have a couple points deducted

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#18
Feb 25, 2013
 
Damn, I should've been more careful. When will this be voted? when AA re-posts his puns?

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#19
Feb 25, 2013
 
I plan to visit the top it feels like walking distance
I be the last out, cause I outlast my competition
You wouldnt have dope wordplay if you spelt weed on scrabble
Grip the mic like axecalibur cuz Ill leave you bloody in battle.

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#20
Feb 25, 2013
 
Please tell meh yu see it now???

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#21
Feb 25, 2013
 
thats only 2 bars AA lol.
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#22
Feb 25, 2013
 
That's two bars and no punches.

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