Epitaph vs Some Random Dude

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Since: May 13

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#1
Jul 8, 2013
 
10 - 16 Barz
First to 5 votes
Post verses SOON lol

( why am I doing this to myself again lol )
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#2
Jul 8, 2013
 
I made 8 bars, you knew this. I posted it. I am laying my EIGHT bars down after you do. For mine was made 2 hours ago when I called you out, you lay first. It prevents flipping verses.
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#3
Jul 8, 2013
 
Oh, by the way, good puck on 5. All new guy MUST lay the proper vote layout.

Write the five comparison catagories choose who you think won each, then write down what stood out and why.

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#4
Jul 8, 2013
 
Didn't see it, well that's cool with me, will be up in a few

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#5
Jul 8, 2013
 
This bastard stupid, gaping wounds has it's uses, rip your tongue straight through them,
splatter your gastric juices
I will beat your scalp to music
I am the epidamy of evil
change your name to Some Random Humpty Dumpty, in homage to your cracked cerebral 

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#6
Jul 8, 2013
 
Watch his verse gonna consist of mostly words ending with -ish lmao, outlandish torturoush , lmao WTF, you scotish or some shit

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Jul 8, 2013
 
( got my Webster Dictionary ready )

“No pain No Gain!”

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#8
Jul 8, 2013
 
what the hell was that bad structure?I was rooting for you,but @SRD takes this by a landslide.am 2 lazy to elaborate,so dont count it as a vote,more of a compliment.

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Jul 8, 2013
 
-rapSwipe- wrote:
what the hell was that bad structure?I was rooting for you,but @SRD takes this by a landslide.am 2 lazy to elaborate,so dont count it as a vote,more of a compliment.
..........uhhhhhhhh aleast wait until he spitts........., he hasnt spitt shit yet lmao.......... See what I mean....... Never post in here again or get clowned, you already know you're garbage be dismissed
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Jul 8, 2013
 
"Epitaph: His death was truly a tragedy."
See, you'll always be just a memory. No possibility,
Stuck in the past, blind to our MODERN REALITY.
You're not BRAVE, but it's a NEW WORLD, how lovely.
Aldous Huxley is the one who inspired me,
You are just an Epsilon of modern society.
A sewage worker turning sh!t with a smile, see
This phantasmal fantasy is what you're, "Whole life's on,'E.'"
An, "Iron Curtain," covers your eyes. Please,
Pull back the shades, but careful the sun is blinding.
You think I'm just a dementia patient, a wannabe.
Although, I am spitting possessed, I have no apostrophe.
In other words, there's no way that you own me.
You are so far behind, you just asked the crowd to stone me.
You dug your own grave and now you,'Lay on the bed,' rock.
I'm tuckin' the dirt in, leaving you and the Earth wed-locked.

2 lines = 1 bar

Bar 1: His Epitaph on his tombstone.

Bar 2: He's blind to the present, so I set up for the older references. Hence I capitalized the book,'Brave New World.'

Bar 3: Mentioned Brave New World's Author Aldous Huxley, mentioned the Utopian Hierarchy in his book.

Bar 4: All the members of the Utopia in his book, the members are drugged up. Also, ending the line with the Ecstasy reference while explaining what a Epsilon does.

Bar 5: Yes again mentioning Epsilon's as they spend all their time in the dark underground, having never seen,'The light,' he'd surely be blinded. As the world is hidden, like Russia with its,'Iron Curtain.'

Bar 6-7: Epitaph, "everybody watch how I stomp his throat, you better stop to breath
I stay owning clowns, change my name to sergeant apostrophe"

Bar 8: Wed-locked: v. To be married together.
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#13
Jul 8, 2013
 
Sorry it took so long to post it, I realize you'd need a serious explanation. After all, I think you dropped out of school.
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#14
Jul 8, 2013
 
Oh, I should also mention that this line reads two ways.

This is the first way, This phantasmal fantasy is what you're whole life's on E.

E = Epitaph, I figured I should mention it, before that is overlooked as well. I hate having to break things down.

“RRC (previous name).”

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#15
Jul 8, 2013
 
Epitaph wrote:
<quoted text>..........uhhhhhhhh aleast wait until he spitts........., he hasnt spitt shit yet lmao.......... See what I mean....... Never post in here again or get clowned, you already know you're garbage be dismissed
Lol epitaph I like you but I am for one to say rap swipe is good... And he has as much right to post in here as you do. Not to mention he probably would beat you. And SRD is extremely talented in rap and while he is rhyming ish words he would probably still slaughter you. Just my opinion no disrespect.
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Jul 8, 2013
 
I would take that challenge. xD

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#18
Jul 8, 2013
 
I'm use to 8 bars meaning 8 bars so SRD won this shit by a landslide lol

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#19
Jul 8, 2013
 
Epitaph wrote:
I'm use to 8 bars meaning 8 bars so SRD won this shit by a landslide lol
8 bars is 16 lines..... SRD won by following the rules. You were short a lot of bars
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#20
Jul 8, 2013
 
Learn rap you dipsh!t.

2 lines = 1 bar.

A bar consists usually of a set-up and a punch.

The set-up:

You dug your own grave and now you,'Lay on the bed,' rock.

The punch:

I'm tuckin' the dirt in, leaving you and the Earth wed-locked.

This is a bar.

What you put is

This bastard's stupid,
gaping wounds has it's uses,

1 bar

rip your tongue straight through them,
splatterin' your gastric juices

2 bars

I will beat your scalp to music
I am the epitome of evil

3 bars

change your name to Some Random Humpty Dumpty,
in homage to your cracked cerebral

4 bars

You have done 4 bars in all, also, I would like to tell you as well that I DID edit the words so they made more sense.

No more b!tching whining moaning groaning, I beat you fair and square. If you want, as long as you don't flip my lines, I'll let you reply again. This way you stand a little better of a chance.

8 bars, A.k.A. 16 lines.

You can start now if you choose.
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#21
Jul 8, 2013
 
well to be fair, in actual rap structure 1 line= 1 bar so i see how Ep would get confused
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#22
Jul 8, 2013
 
In actual rap structure, it's set-up and punch. Learn your history bradah.
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#23
Jul 8, 2013
 
Some Random Dude wrote:
In actual rap structure, it's set-up and punch. Learn your history bradah.
i'm not debating that. but each line is counted as a bar, look through most rap songs with a typical verse, hook, verse structure. they are almost always 16 lines.

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