Shini vs Killah (Mu 4)
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SomeRandomDude

United States

#41 May 27, 2014
There is Shini. Don't pull punches man, rock out with your c*** out.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#42 May 29, 2014
Punches: Shini
Rhyme Scheme: Shini
Flow: Shini
Enjoyment: Shini
Multi's: Killah
MVGT: Shini

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#43 May 29, 2014
Punches: Shini
Word Play: Shini
Rhyme Scheme: Shini
Flow: Shini (Shini's flow is always amazingly consistent)
Enjoyment: Shini
Multi's: Killah (that was about the only thing I could pull out of this killah had a slight edge in.)

MVGT: Shini
Killah you're good but not good enough to take out a vet or elite yet. Dot get me wrong you had a couple nice bars (exactly 2) but that won't fly against someone like Shini especially if he's at the top of his game. And in this battle I saw slight glimpses of that Shini. You still need to improve on your punches add in some original metas and throw in some word/name play and this might've been a little closer had you done that. You rely too much on your multis and don't reach out to other aspects.
Shini just... Idk what to tell you. I know you can out multi almost anyone on here. Only person I think can out multi you would be SRD but anyways you didnt need multis to win. So idk what to tell you to improve on. Lol I'm thinking really hard about this and I've read your drop multiple times...

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#44 May 29, 2014
Shini moves onto the next round.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#45 May 29, 2014
Word is bond

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#46 May 29, 2014
Mad Respects @Shini
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#47 May 30, 2014
Thanks all.

I can do multi heavy material. I just don't use them to the point they become corny. Not saying that SRD makes them corny, but many other people do make them that way.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#48 May 30, 2014
Shini wrote:
Thanks all.

I can do multi heavy material. I just don't use them to the point they become corny. Not saying that SRD makes them corny, but many other people do make them that way.
No doubt

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#49 May 30, 2014
Shini wrote:
Thanks all.

I can do multi heavy material. I just don't use them to the point they become corny. Not saying that SRD makes them corny, but many other people do make them that way.
Just wondering... Have I ever over done multis to where they've become corny?

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#50 May 30, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
<quoted text>Just wondering... Have I ever over done multis to where they've become corny?
In my opinion no. U can ask me btw lol. I'm not retarded.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#51 May 30, 2014
Lenox Da Kid wrote:
<quoted text>In my opinion no. U can ask me btw lol. I'm not retarded.
I just responded to him because he said it can get corny lol no offense to you intended haha

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#52 May 30, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
<quoted text>I just responded to him because he said it can get corny lol no offense to you intended haha
Haha
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#53 Jun 1, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
<quoted text>
Just wondering... Have I ever over done multis to where they've become corny?
No. Your multis are fine. It is when the artist just uses it as a crutch to carry their lines through.
If there is a scheme, fine. But doing it for the sake of doing it at the expense of a good metaphor or punchline, then it is a crime.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#55 Jun 1, 2014
Basicly, using Multies solely to use multies. If you use the multies and twist and interwind the similes, metaphors, punches, set-ups, antonyms, etc. It will be harder, but you will end up with a much better presentation.

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