Shini VS SomeRandomDude (Yet another thread between your favorites)

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Some Random Dude

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#1
Oct 15, 2013
 
I wrote this a long time ago, like when I wrote against Seanny-T. However, I was waiting on Seanny-T's drop and it just never happened. I have battled Shini before and during our battling h changed his name from Shinigami to Shini; but hell, who would leave that alone? Haha so, ladies and gents, pull out your dictionaries and get google ready... it's time for another round between Shini and SomeRandomDude.

Shini, no plastic is elastic enough to stop this drastic attack.
The fact you lack classic visuals, mean the literal attention criticals

The trips to unnatural rituals. These riddles stole ya Gami hood, I decapitated
Death, finally fillin' you with lead, so you can't levitate.

I know you're upset, but you can't end a GOD. You'll break though;
I'm from Idaho, beat you with a sack of potatoes before I send you away yo.

Unnaturally lyrical, one of the last to survive, a dying breed. Conspiracies
Surrounding me and who I be; I'll end them on the brightest day. I'm brutally

Filetin' ya words an' barrin' ya mind, ya know you won't find a better rhyme.
No matter the time given, writtens get spit and the letters find

Two separate visions gettin' written. Unfortunately, it's me that you're gettin'.
Now read or listen, you can't stop a vision. Visually I'll beat you, now y'A TENSE SHIN'.

I'm loading this double barrel shotgun with slugs you keep spending
and my fiery heart will engulf ya entire flame, so stop pretending.

I never sweat punches, so there's none missing when we're slugging it out.
I just keep pluggin' away, flow flodding ya mind an' ya steel bars rot without

a corkscrew to remove the cork, so you're screwed. Overflowin' with issues,
I swear your dellusional, because ya whole play blew away with the wind, POOF.

Lyrically, you hold no weight, so no need to wait. Ya see dude,
your career is dead. If it isn't, then complete the comparison: Show me PROOF.

What, is it too soon? Well ya better call 9/11, before you and your twin start falling,
because no egos can survive a conspiracy. No hothead will tower over all. See,

ya another Elitist tryin' to screw us Veterans, claimin' no blood's on their hands
Yet our bloody hands are all over the money your touching. This air can't

be cleared with a jet plane with full afterburners goin'.
Yet my blood is grade A, so it's about to get hot as a furnace blowin'

No corporation, especially ya plastic one will survive the heat.
So they hired THE CLEANER to deal with the dirt, you can't escape from me.

Just call me Madea, nice to meet ya, I'll end your Ponzy Scheme.
Send a shock to your system, Inception. I'll shoot up Shini's dreams.

Then use his hardest bars to shatter his broken knees.
While I end up in SUGAR SHOCK, from all the sweet lies he's telling me.
Some Random Dude

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#2
Oct 15, 2013
 
Oh yeah, the obvious rule. No flipping bars.
Anonymous

Torrance, CA

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#3
Oct 15, 2013
 
lets take a ride through liquids flows,
by the end of ur surf ill bring u a back decomposed,
catch ur ohh so love oxygen u love to breath,
surviving this flow is something impossible to avhieve
beef, i coral reef, ur speech
swims to depths where u cant feel ur feet,
playing with sharks now u into deep,
just wanted u meet, this underground beast,
words submarine missle seek, when fear is at its peak,
a brown reap, now u envision.eternal sleep
water drowns, the sounds,
of commercial mc whos not underground,
blueprint better then sean carter,
u should of swam hardah,u would of went farther,
why test the waters,a russian roulette revolver,
wouldmt been able so solve da,
riddles, puzzles, i burst what u flew in on ur bubble,
then ur weak flow i muzzle,
Anonymous

Torrance, CA

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#4
Oct 15, 2013
 
this threat u never fathom,
u are raffle ticket u do win at random,
i mean ur flow like and orphan, abadoned
so my kidnapping thoughts gone,ur not worth a ransome
sorry i was home invasion robbers but i had to intrude
cause both ur mouths rimes had to be subdued,
cause if we were mic, on stage, u would be booed
cause ur no name random dude
i mean ur considered an illegal alien,
cro magnum flow, u should be homosapien,
peanut brain has no visual for ur cranium
brains the fan, no ones in ur stadium,
rl stine book ur all fiction,
only.place in.the world u belong, the kitchen
not even nostradamus could of predicted
that any problem of yours u could fix it
there is more to life then hamburger n fries
honey buns, sugarcoated donuts, and apple pies,
man u testinv my flowbu all in,
never could catch my.flow even with a rawlings
Shini

Korea

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#5
Oct 15, 2013
 
liquidflow wrote:
this threat u never fathom,
u are raffle ticket u do win at random,
i mean ur flow like and orphan, abadoned
so my kidnapping thoughts gone,ur not worth a ransome
sorry i was home invasion robbers but i had to intrude
cause both ur mouths rimes had to be subdued,
cause if we were mic, on stage, u would be booed
cause ur no name random dude
i mean ur considered an illegal alien,
cro magnum flow, u should be homosapien,
peanut brain has no visual for ur cranium
brains the fan, no ones in ur stadium,
rl stine book ur all fiction,
only.place in.the world u belong, the kitchen
not even nostradamus could of predicted
that any problem of yours u could fix it
there is more to life then hamburger n fries
honey buns, sugarcoated donuts, and apple pies,
man u testinv my flowbu all in,
never could catch my.flow even with a rawlings
I have my 16 written, but I need to get internet on my computer before I can post. It will probably take a few weeks before I get internet again. The employment contract I'm under now doesn't allow me to set up my service.

Btw this guy obviousky ain't me.
SomeRandomDude

United States

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#6
Oct 15, 2013
 
Who's this c(_)nt?
Shini

Korea

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#7
Nov 3, 2013
 
After long last...I got about 20 pages of rhymes to unload, too. Expect a 100 bar drop in the distant future.

Didn't expect him to go all IT, so this might be a style clash.

Fuck it if he has a Death Wish, take the wind out of his steps and leave em breathless
He ridin like a horseman, it's true that's “dude”, so make no mistake he leavin “headless”

Beat em' 3-0 peep the other battles, I waged war against this gay whore gaylord who has hate for
anything this that rhymes with 8-4, but I cut throats, so I'm not here to “play swords”

You think I parry, but I come from the shadows ready to repost
I come with that 1-2, you've come to deep throat

Thinkin I'm kind when I'm colder than Krakov, Jack the Ripper goin, off his rocker that'd mean Jack's Off
I swash buckles, turnin that swag off, if ass whuppins got Medieval, means Dude got Cast off

Ya thinkin ya rappin great here, but honestly I'm pokin holes through-it it's gettin rapiered (raped here)
Ya guise Faux (Guy Fawkes) ya cry for vengeance, but gettin slayed here-cause ya masked ya hate fear

Ya hate's brewin, you got that hate spewin, call yourself Black Plague way you hate humans
That hate's fumin, this Kefka meets Napoleon a giant ego but stuck in Waterloo cause ya stay losin

You're clashin wit a smarter King Arthur/author, actin Bonaparte/(born the part) ya laughable
Tryin ta be tactical ya can't even fight harder my martyr- ya the rappin Joan of Arc

His cancer fairy tales Canterbury Tales have him tryin ta bury man, we see Rob in Hood, acting Robin Hood,
I know he not a Merry Man cause no damsel would ever put up wit this ferry man

He beggin for battles like breadcrumbs trying to grace us wit his pleasantry
I'm growin tired of Dude's peasantry so I'm deadin dat feasentry

Trudgin off ready to enter his Crusades:A Christian vs. An Athiest
This is Doom's Day dis Paladin's gettin ate ta sh!t and the proof's latent which

We all know I'm burnin Dude, and he can call mistrial
But I just staked him with his style made this a witch trial

So he'll act ready to don those battlemails then take aim and miss cause he's just a battle fail
He should stop tryin to rattle tales/(rattletails) and call out girls cause he battles frail when he battle males

Beggin for a win, Dude's on SHIN in front of the papacy
Width thine fakery thou art not a man just thy (you/die) a fake MC

Some randumb dude you'll go 1 and 6, Ya ain't shit ta me,
Enough of the dickery just be forgotten like ya from Late Antiquity

Like the present he's done: Like a gun I'll put six in em, when I spit vemon, split hit em, tricks: end them
I divine the future won: hit-in-him, hit end em, so why six well I got 5, that extra one is to just to have 6 END HIM
Shini

Korea

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#8
Nov 3, 2013
 
IF YOU UNDERSTAND THE BAR YOU CAN SKIP READING THE EXPO. I majored in history so I wanted to write something a little fresh that had a history and literature theme.

Expo 1: My name means "Death" in Japanese, thus wishing for death. He asked for a rematch for the six time. Leavin headless: I will take his head off/ he will lose his head.

Expo 2: 8-4 rhymes with gaylord. Play swords is a gay euphemism.

Expo 3: Parry and Repost are fencing moves. Too knock someone out is a 1-2 punch, but to cut someone's throat you go from the first to second position with a rapier.

Expo 4: Colder than Krakov/ Jack's off It is the set-up to a scheme. So the self-hype here is okay in my eyes. Swash buckles- Pirate talk/ when your in trouble when your little you get spanked.

Expo 5 Guy Fawkes was known for the gunpowder treason. TBS I wrote this in Late September even though the anniversary of V for Vendetta is around the corner.

Expo 6 Kefka meets Napoleon, a misantrope meets a narcissist. SRD is a Debbie Downer.

Expo 7 Three figures from medieval times. Fit the medieval theme I was going for. Yes, King Arthur isn't real. Bite me.

Expo 8 Fairy Tale personals. SRD is famous for those.

Expo 10 Paladins are zealous warriors who fought for Christianity. I am actually an Athiest. Moving on.

Expo 11 I wrote in a psuedo-flowery manner because SRD is known for vocab. Witch Trials happened in Salem, Mass. They all ending with a female getting burned at the stake. I jumped around different time periods in this rap.

Expo 13 Battlemail is armor.

Expo 14 Old English punchline with double entendre. I made this rap entendre heavy and did not point them all out. Huzzah!

Expo 15 He doesn't matter set-up/because of this he will be forgotten like a history lesson

Expo 16 Sorry this is expo heavy. Thematic drops that relate to history need clarification, but not this one. I just wrote something here to see if you were actually reading this.
SomeRandomDude

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#9
Nov 3, 2013
 
What do you mean by IT?
SomeRandomDude

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#10
Nov 3, 2013
 
O.M.G., you love history... This will be much more fun from now on. I LOVE history, we should have a history theme for our battles from here on in. :)
Shini

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#11
Nov 6, 2013
 
SomeRandomDude wrote:
What do you mean by IT?
Immortal Technique: it felt like some of IT's raps.
SomeRandomDude

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#12
Nov 6, 2013
 
I am going to have to look them up. I haven't heard them in a long time.
Honestly, the fact we have to expo everyline pisses me off. What happened to informing yourself? If you don't get it and you have looked it up ask. You are on the f(_)cking net.
SomeRandomDude

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#13
Nov 6, 2013
 
Wow, I am listening to them, it sound a bit oike what I am writing. What else do I remind your of?
Shini

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Nov 6, 2013
 
SomeRandomDude wrote:
I am going to have to look them up. I haven't heard them in a long time.
Honestly, the fact we have to expo everyline pisses me off. What happened to informing yourself? If you don't get it and you have looked it up ask. You are on the f(_)cking net.
Well I have to consider that the core audience may not be well educated in history. Also some schemes might go over beginners heads, but I didn't delve into that too much.
SomeRandomDude

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#15
Nov 6, 2013
 
It breaks my heart, this material is exactly ratyer easy next to what I know you want to put. I want to put some truely amazing frap, but even an expo would need an expo.
Hannibal Barca

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#16
Nov 6, 2013
 
Damn, Shini gets my vote. He had better punch lines and had a plan and shit. Rhymes and multis were excellent. Srd, I've seen better from you but I still like the flow and word play.
If you guys are gonna do a history themed battle, count me the fuck in. You can tell I love history by my name. But this is still a good battle.
liquidflow

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#17
Nov 7, 2013
 
no doubt about this one that to me shini one this just flat out a much smoother flow
SomeRandomDude

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#18
Nov 7, 2013
 
What happened to explaining your sh!t?-.-
Shini

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#19
Nov 8, 2013
 
liquidflow wrote:
no doubt about this one that to me shini one this just flat out a much smoother flow
Ok use the breakdown.

Flow
Multies
Wordplay/Nameplay
Rhyme Scheme
Punches
Enjoyment

BTW Hannibal, I think you forgot wordplay/nameplay. All categories had to be accounted for. We'll do best of 5 for the dubya.
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#20
Nov 8, 2013
 
Puns, similes, metaphors

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