My first impression was that Bob Newhart had possibly made a spoof of 'Beowulf'. I hoped perhaps your title sentence would clarify your intention instead it created more confusion. Did you ever tell us what the extreme opposites of animations were or what made them so different? I guess the two pictures you provided explained. Your poor subject placement or choice plus poor use of pronouns like "THIS ONE" made following you extremely difficult. You made single sentences into paragraphs. Finally, ten or twelve mini-paragraphs later you actually decided to use a format for this list of new releases which was readable. Did you get tired and just copy and paste at this point? If so keep up the good work.'Beowulf','Newhart' Hit Video
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#1 Feb 25, 2008
This article is bad in so many ways I couldn't hope to list them all. What was your goal with the title of this piece?
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