SuperFerry Haiku

[alarmclock]

17 syllables in 3 lines of
5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables

Example:
__________
Calm haiku debate.
But I have not forgotten
Superferry looms.
__________
or
_________
Stream seems different.
SuperFerry leaving in distance.
Oh, river rocks missing.

[Cat Manapua]

alarmclock wrote:

17 syllables in 3 lines of
5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables
Example:
_________
Stream seems different.
SuperFerry leaving in distance.
Oh, river rocks missing.

Uh, you need to learn to count your syllables better. Your example is 5 - 9 - 6 you idiot.

[Frank Lee]

congragation
invade hippie hermit home
permit required

[Melancholy]

I knew someone would eventually bring the number of syllables up..LOL I thought it waas 5-7-5 as well.

Oh WELL

[Melancholy]

It is 5-7-5 LOL

[rubbahslippah]

Brah quick park da truck
Gotta return imu rock
Auwe! Ranger wen spock us

I tried :)

[rubbahslippah]

Sorry - correction:

Brah quick park da truck
Gotta return imu rock
Auwe Ranger stay

[No one wins]

built for the locals
met with car pounding protests
again we suffer

[Harley]

rubbahslippah wrote:

Sorry - correction:
Brah quick park da truck
Gotta return imu rock
Auwe Ranger stay

Either one is good!

[alarmclock]

Cat Manapua wrote:

<quoted text>
Uh, you need to learn to count your syllables better. Your example is 5 - 9 - 6 you idiot.

Yes, haiku police,
I know. I'm an idiot.
Can't count syllables.

[alarmclock]

I was in a hurry to leave this morning and rushed it. Pasted a working version. Difficult to translate from the original Japanese in which I am working. Just kidding. But thanks for checking in.

_______

Brief, clear, enlightened,
like too few opinions here-
Haiku debate rules.

[alarmclock]

Correct version was:

Stream seems different.
Ferry leaving in distance.
Oh, river rocks gone.

sigh.

[alarmclock]

With nothing to lose
big Oahu ONLY gains.
Neighbors get impacts.

[alarmclock]

Bring on your haiku
you superferry lovers.
That is if you dare.

[Frank Lee]

I like go hana
stay hale a kea la
stay no mo da kine

[Me Ouch]

Cat Manapua wrote:

<quoted text>
Uh, you need to learn to count your syllables better. Your example is 5 - 9 - 6 you idiot.

Cat Manapua,
Sharp eyed roadkill in a bun,
Didn't see car though.

[Oooh Ouch]

alarmclock wrote:

<quoted text>
Yes, haiku police,
I know. I'm an idiot.
Can't count syllables.

Don't be alarmed clock,
Time flies when you're having fun,
Keep swinging your hands.

[Owwie]

Melancholy wrote:

It is 5-7-5 LOL

So sweet and yet sad,
Why you so melancholy?
The Superfolly?

[Terminal]

Linda Lingus wrote:

Pain in my rear hurts
From prolonged attempt to pull
My head out of it

So naughty your tongue,
Nasty foreplay with her name.
You need a lickin'.

[Heh Heh]

So coincidence!
Busted wit da imu rocks.
(Uncle wen plant dem.)