SuperFerry Haiku

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alarmclock

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Oct 19, 2007
 

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17 syllables in 3 lines of
5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables

Example:
__________
Calm haiku debate.
But I have not forgotten
Superferry looms.
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or
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Stream seems different.
SuperFerry leaving in distance.
Oh, river rocks missing.
Cat Manapua

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#2
Oct 19, 2007
 
alarmclock wrote:
17 syllables in 3 lines of
5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables
Example:
_________
Stream seems different.
SuperFerry leaving in distance.
Oh, river rocks missing.
Uh, you need to learn to count your syllables better. Your example is 5 - 9 - 6 you idiot.
Frank Lee

Waipahu, HI

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#3
Oct 19, 2007
 
congragation
invade hippie hermit home
permit required
Melancholy

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#4
Oct 19, 2007
 
I knew someone would eventually bring the number of syllables up..LOL I thought it waas 5-7-5 as well.

Oh WELL
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#5
Oct 19, 2007
 
It is 5-7-5 LOL
rubbahslippah

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#6
Oct 19, 2007
 
Brah quick park da truck
Gotta return imu rock
Auwe! Ranger wen spock us

I tried :)
rubbahslippah

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Oct 19, 2007
 
Sorry - correction:

Brah quick park da truck
Gotta return imu rock
Auwe Ranger stay
No one wins

Kaneohe, HI

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#8
Oct 19, 2007
 
built for the locals
met with car pounding protests
again we suffer
Harley

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Oct 19, 2007
 
rubbahslippah wrote:
Sorry - correction:
Brah quick park da truck
Gotta return imu rock
Auwe Ranger stay
Either one is good!
alarmclock

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Oct 19, 2007
 

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Cat Manapua wrote:
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Uh, you need to learn to count your syllables better. Your example is 5 - 9 - 6 you idiot.
Yes, haiku police,
I know. I'm an idiot.
Can't count syllables.
alarmclock

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Oct 19, 2007
 

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I was in a hurry to leave this morning and rushed it. Pasted a working version. Difficult to translate from the original Japanese in which I am working. Just kidding. But thanks for checking in.

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Brief, clear, enlightened,
like too few opinions here-
Haiku debate rules.
alarmclock

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#12
Oct 19, 2007
 
Correct version was:

Stream seems different.
Ferry leaving in distance.
Oh, river rocks gone.

sigh.
alarmclock

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#13
Oct 19, 2007
 
With nothing to lose
big Oahu ONLY gains.
Neighbors get impacts.
alarmclock

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#14
Oct 19, 2007
 
Bring on your haiku
you superferry lovers.
That is if you dare.
Frank Lee

Makawao, HI

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#15
Oct 19, 2007
 
I like go hana
stay hale a kea la
stay no mo da kine
Me Ouch

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Oct 20, 2007
 
Cat Manapua wrote:
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Uh, you need to learn to count your syllables better. Your example is 5 - 9 - 6 you idiot.
Cat Manapua,
Sharp eyed roadkill in a bun,
Didn't see car though.
Oooh Ouch

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Oct 20, 2007
 
alarmclock wrote:
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Yes, haiku police,
I know. I'm an idiot.
Can't count syllables.
Don't be alarmed clock,
Time flies when you're having fun,
Keep swinging your hands.
Owwie

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Oct 20, 2007
 
Melancholy wrote:
It is 5-7-5 LOL
So sweet and yet sad,
Why you so melancholy?
The Superfolly?
Terminal

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#21
Oct 20, 2007
 
Linda Lingus wrote:
Pain in my rear hurts
From prolonged attempt to pull
My head out of it
So naughty your tongue,
Nasty foreplay with her name.
You need a lickin'.
Heh Heh

Honolulu, HI

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#22
Oct 20, 2007
 
So coincidence!
Busted wit da imu rocks.
(Uncle wen plant dem.)

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