my first poem
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pumpkin pie

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#1 Nov 8, 2012
So many things I may not know
But your words captured my heart and soul
This I cannot deny
Saying life would b the same without you is simply a lie
Everyday you make me smile
To hear your words I'd walk a mile
If I could close my eyes and make a one wish
The only thing worth asking for would be your kiss
You, I know I could never hate
Afterall you are my soul mate
Who would of thought we'd meet the way we did
Had i known where u were I would have never hid
Friends, lovers, whatever we are
You will always be with me no matter how far...
pumkin pie

United States

#5 Nov 9, 2012
No not Bradford
guest

United States

#6 Nov 9, 2012
pumpkin pie wrote:
So many things I may not know
But your words captured my heart and soul
This I cannot deny
Saying life would b the same without you is simply a lie
Everyday you make me smile
To hear your words I'd walk a mile
If I could close my eyes and make a one wish
The only thing worth asking for would be your kiss
You, I know I could never hate
Afterall you are my soul mate
Who would of thought we'd meet the way we did
Had i known where u were I would have never hid
Friends, lovers, whatever we are
You will always be with me no matter how far...
Nice job very pretty :)
Anonymous

United States

#7 Nov 9, 2012
Ho Ho Ho

Since: Aug 12

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#8 Nov 9, 2012
I think this is the best thing I've read on here
pumkin pie

United States

#9 Nov 9, 2012
Thanks
StUpId

United States

#10 Nov 9, 2012
I hate it
StUpId

United States

#11 Nov 9, 2012
Just another weak attempt for attention b_rad_

“Wodige Digatoli ale Awanita.”

Since: Jan 08

Equa Vdali

#12 Nov 9, 2012
Very Good pumkin pie.
pumkin pie

United States

#13 Nov 9, 2012
I'm not b rad!! And thanks Cherokee

“NSA”

Since: Jul 10

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#14 Nov 9, 2012
I wouldn't write such a generic thing, my mind is far above this sub par elementary writing. I feel offended at the thought of such a worded disaster being thought to be originated by such a great mind as mine.
Laara Fischer

United States

#15 Nov 9, 2012
b_rad_ wrote:
I wouldn't write such a generic thing, my mind is far above this sub par elementary writing. I feel offended at the thought of such a worded disaster being thought to be originated by such a great mind as mine.
Im sick of hearing about this brilliant mind you keep boasting! Lets go. Say something other than how brainy u are b rad!
Laara Fischer

United States

#16 Nov 9, 2012
Just because you keep repeating yourself shows how insecure you really are!
I know!
Raven 6

United States

#17 Nov 9, 2012
I really don't think you are as awsome as you think you are ;). Haha

“NSA”

Since: Jul 10

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#18 Nov 9, 2012
Insecure about what? You think cause you said that your "fisher" price brain storm makes anything accurate? Well hell no! Save your dribble for the ones that care to know what you have to say. I for one am not one of those. I don't fool with infant minds. A waste of time!

“NSA”

Since: Jul 10

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#19 Nov 9, 2012
Raven 6 wrote:
I really don't think you are as awsome as you think you are ;). Haha
Ditto
pumkin pie

United States

#20 Nov 9, 2012
b_rad_ wrote:
I wouldn't write such a generic thing, my mind is far above this sub par elementary writing. I feel offended at the thought of such a worded disaster being thought to be originated by such a great mind as mine.
I'm a beginner lol
Raven 6

United States

#21 Nov 9, 2012
b_rad_ wrote:
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Ditto
If you where so smart, you would have known who that post was aimed at.

By the way, you are putting a lot of words in to not really say anything at all. ;)
Raven 6

United States

#22 Nov 9, 2012
Ohh, grammar mistake. Once we get on that level. I have already won.
Laara Fischer

United States

#23 Nov 9, 2012
b_rad_ wrote:
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Ditto
you a little bitch. Talk big shlt on a screen. Lil bitch.

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