I'll tell you what... When you pay me to write (or not write) whatever is on my mind, I'll consider your criticism.<quoted text>
Shorter paragraphs, double spacing between them, I like that but words! Too many words! Pretend they cost $10 each and say the same thing.
Sorry. Can't help it.
Until then, I'll say what I want in a manner that pleases me.
If you don't want to take the time to read what I've got to say, then by all means, move on.
Last time I looked, I pay my own Comcast bill each month. I paid for this computer that I'm using. And I certainly pay for the electricity to run my little operation.
So for now, I'll type whatever I please.
You feel free to do the same.