Marion man crashes car, hurts his head

A Marion man is still in the hospital after he crashed his car Friday night. Wayne County sheriffs say 22-year old Andrew Harwood drove off Tellier Road that's in Arcadia.

[dolly d2]

hurts his head? who wrote this?

[Tom]

hah I was thinking the same thing....

One of the writers must have a hangover from Saturday night.

[Crusty]

ROCHESTER MAN READS NEWS, HURTS HIS HEAD
A Rochester man is still in the hospital after he hurt his head while reading this news story. Monroe County sheriffs say a 22-year old man fell off his chair that's in his family room while laughing uncontrollably as he read the news on line.

[Community Chest]

What a Boob.

[anonymous]

Crusty wrote:

ROCHESTER MAN READS NEWS, HURTS HIS HEAD
A Rochester man is still in the hospital after he hurt his head while reading this news story. Monroe County sheriffs say a 22-year old man fell off his chair that's in his family room while laughing uncontrollably as he read the news on line.

Haha...you crack me up.

[Poor Journalism]

The news 10 employee that wrote this story need to spend less time at the bars on East Ave. and more time doing their job! And yes you have been seen spending way too much time their recently. Get to work!

[RPDSuks]

I'm getting a headache just reading it. lol

[Christine]

Even being a young teenager I am still in shock that something so terrible written has been published.

[Big W]

Crusty wrote:

ROCHESTER MAN READS NEWS, HURTS HIS HEAD
A Rochester man is still in the hospital after he hurt his head while reading this news story. Monroe County sheriffs say a 22-year old man fell off his chair that's in his family room while laughing uncontrollably as he read the news on line.

That is so funny!! Who writes this stuff? Even an intern should be capable of composing a more professionally worded news clip.

[Whenry]

Too bad they don't get someone to read it on the nightly news cast. That would be sweet!

[Porky]

Man Reads Article, Corn-holes Neighbor, Film at Eleven!

[Its_Reality]

ouch!

[Seriously]

Way to turn this into an English class. And in all fairness:

“hurts his head? who wrote this?” Should be capitalized sentences.

“…same thing…” An ellipsis indicates the omission of one or more words (as the first ellipsis here shows).

“…on line.” Should be one word – online.

“The news 10 employee that wrote this story need to spend less time at the bars on East Ave. and more time doing their job!”“Need” should be “needs.”“Employee” is singular and “their” is plural. The correct pronoun would be “his or her.”

“…something so terrible written…” Should be “terribly.”

I hope this young man is okay. Let's get back to the topic and start another thread trashing the writing (or lack thereof).

[Seriously]

Just the kind of response that was expected.