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“I Love You”
Since: Oct 09
#2 Jun 4, 2011
Your story sucked. I'm sorry, it just sucked. The plot was plodding, the character development was forced, the interactive narratives were weak and over-worked and the ending was much, much less than plausible. Really, I resent spending my 99 cents to read this drivel. It took me 3 days to get all the way through it. Come on. What the fuhqe?
This is NOT the path you need to be on. You really need to quit smoking dope, quit watching those idiotic vampire movies and get out to a ball-game once in awhile and maybe date a girl, you she-male wannabe.
Love ya anyway,
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