gonzodave

United States

#1 Oct 25, 2012
SUBSTITUTES

A picture is not
A clean house.

An internet friend
Is not a lover.

Salvation
Is not a reward.

A diploma
Nor a degree

Is financial
Security.

In the days of real sugar only,
Obesity and diabetes was not epidemic.

A politician
Is not

Speaking
For you.

Fast food
Does not nurture
Like a home meal.

Going to a gym
Is not a
Walk in the park.

Substitutes
Steal your

Best interests
And provide

Yet more
Substitutes

For a 21st century
Mediocrity.

Substitutes © 2012 ~gonzodave. All rights reserved.
Folger's in your cup!

United States

#2 Oct 25, 2012
gonzodave wrote:
SUBSTITUTES

A picture is not
A clean house.

An internet friend
Is not a lover.

Salvation
Is not a reward.

A diploma
Nor a degree

Is financial
Security.

In the days of real sugar only,
Obesity and diabetes was not epidemic.

A politician
Is not

Speaking
For you.

Fast food
Does not nurture
Like a home meal.

Going to a gym
Is not a
Walk in the park.

Substitutes
Steal your

Best interests
And provide

Yet more
Substitutes

For a 21st century
Mediocrity.

Substitutes © 2012 ~gonzodave. All rights reserved.
You should write a suicide poem next and then carry it out.
Fordoche Chick

United States

#3 Oct 26, 2012
[QUOTE who="Folger's in your cup!"]<quoted text>
You should write a suicide poem next and then carry it out.[/QUOTE]

I think the poem makes an obvious point. Of which you must not understand, so in turn you criticize. It seems to me, that you are a miserable little person. Trying to make others feel your pain because, your husband cheated on you with the Jessica girl, the one you were talking about in the forum, "Would you want to know".
I feel truly sorry for you. I am going to pray for you.
Folger's in your cup!

Haslet, TX

#4 Oct 26, 2012
Fordoche Chick wrote:
[QUOTE who="Folger's in your cup!"]<quoted text>
You should write a suicide poem next and then carry it out."

I think the poem makes an obvious point. Of which you must not understand, so in turn you criticize. It seems to me, that you are a miserable little person. Trying to make others feel your pain because, your husband cheated on you with the Jessica girl, the one you were talking about in the forum, "Would you want to know".
I feel truly sorry for you. I am going to pray for you.
Lol WTF did I just read!?
gonzodave

United States

#5 Oct 26, 2012
[QUOTE who="Folger's in your cup!"]<quoted text>
Lol WTF did I just read!?[/QUOTE]

Wake up. The sleep of dreams produces monsters.
positive

Lafayette, LA

#6 Oct 26, 2012
Good job on this poem!
gonzodave

United States

#7 Oct 26, 2012
Thank you so much.
~g
Johnny on the spot

United States

#8 Oct 28, 2012
9th grade
on school trip to mexican workers camp
school playing soccer with mexicans
im sitting out with tard
tard is yelling at team "COME ON, LETS GOOO!"
I tell tard he can be a bit quieter
tard walks out the door
gets on the floor
everybody walk to dinosaur
Laughing Quietly

United States

#9 Oct 28, 2012
Johnny on the spot wrote:
9th grade
on school trip to mexican workers camp
school playing soccer with mexicans
im sitting out with tard
tard is yelling at team "COME ON, LETS GOOO!"
I tell tard he can be a bit quieter
tard walks out the door
gets on the floor
everybody walk to dinosaur
----------
As a poet, you'll make a great septic tank cleaner.
Johnny on the spot

United States

#10 Oct 28, 2012
Laughing Quietly wrote:
<quoted text>----------
As a poet, you'll make a great septic tank cleaner.
If you think that's a poem, you're a great septic tank cleaner.

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