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Becky

Charlotte, NC

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#1
Feb 11, 2013
 
I'd like to read a poem by you.

“I've Always Been This Stupid”

Since: May 12

Greeneville TN

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#2
Feb 11, 2013
 
Corn corn
so little and yellow,
Much more fun
to eat than jello.
When I eat you gone I won't be sad
and let my face droop,
Because I know I'll see tomorrow
when I take my morning poop.
Becky

Charlotte, NC

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#3
Feb 11, 2013
 
Lol seriously? Your one chance... And u blew it...
Becky

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#4
Feb 11, 2013
 
Pretend 2 B Normal wrote:
Corn corn
so little and yellow,
Much more fun
to eat than jello.
When I eat you gone I won't be sad
and let my face droop,
Because I know I'll see tomorrow
when I take my morning poop.
;)

“I've Always Been This Stupid”

Since: May 12

Greeneville TN

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#5
Feb 11, 2013
 
As I grip the metallic coin close my eyes and make a wish
My thoughts turn to you and how I'd like to tell you this.
How my pulse races and my mind is filled with glee
Every time you turn your head hone your eyes and look at me.
With me you'd have a love all the other girls admire
Volcanic lava seems frigid when compared to the fire
That burns in our hearts, growing hotter every day that passes
Scorching failed past loves but never leaving ashes.
If I could find the words to tell you exactly what I meant
I'd say the other guys are the undercard and I'm the main event.
I toss the coin and watch it floating through the air
As it hits the water I regret it and my heart is filled with despair.
You and I will never be together and damn it hurts like hell
I guess your just a quarter wasted in the wishing well.

A short version of poem written by pretend in 1998.
Becky

Charlotte, NC

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#6
Feb 11, 2013
 
That's so pretty. I love you... I mean that.

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