Miamisburg, OH

#1 Feb 24, 2012
Anyone hear from her?

Dayton, OH

#2 Jun 1, 2012
I hope she might someday find a moment or two in what I'm sure is a very busy hectic life to keep in touch with an old friend.

Dayton, OH

#3 Sep 22, 2012
If only I'd the power to undo error in my life
If the entire universe could be spun backwards in the sky
The prayed for second chance ne'er to be bound by history's strife
To have an impossible second chance to love Moon Goddess Di

Springfield, OH

#4 Dec 17, 2013
Had I my way,
Fine writing is all you'd ever receive.
On the paper of glory,
With a pen crafted by the gods.

I would only write with passion.
Sheer love.
With scripture so alluring,
So aesthetically pleasing;
That your beauty would be engraved in the carvings;
The very grooves in which my soul would enter,
And cross over to a printed realm,
Never to be released.
A prisoner of my own aspiration.

The key to this asylum of dreams
Lies within your heart;
But I know that you're trapped here too.
A case of the blind leading the blind,
Because as of yet I still question
The colour of your eyes.
I can practically touch you,
But I've never even seen you,
Except in brief glimpses.

For now,
While I wait for an appearance
With the man who has a say,
I'm left scratching at my shackles.
Carving the words of love you may never read,
Into walls built to conceal me.
All I ask is that you hear me,
Listen up,
And someday,
You could even free me.

Ciaran Carrick

Springboro, OH

#5 Feb 23, 2015
thinking of you

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