Bremen (poem on the town that raised me)

Bremen (poem on the town that raised me)

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Mr Bremen

Richmond, VA

#1 Nov 30, 2009
Rain worshipped town saddened by mud, saddened by lost dreams I left and it forgot about me. Where did you go village of my youth I return and find depression and despair and lice in its hair. You rot away now like a carcass bloated and fat pretending to still be able to like where you’re at. You feel nothing now you blow away and stink under the sun. If god walked here he would never come back he would leave and never be near. It’s me that returns and I hate what I see and in that acceptance I find fear. Can it find me again well I be stuck to it once more could I ever be caught again in its snare. Complacent and crazy its inhabitants are ignorant and lazy. Its trees are the hands of skeletons its sidewalks break and snap from the roots of the wilderness who want it back. Bricks are chipped paint crackles here and beneath the dirt a desert of death causes the surface to sear. If you visit this town simply beware it’ll cut your throat and suck your life. It raised me and everything bad came from here I hope Bremen will burn and with it my fears.
Mack

Richmond, VA

#2 Nov 30, 2009
you sir are disturbed
cherokeewindwalk er

United States

#3 Dec 5, 2009
bremen is a quaint lil town i have always loved bremen maybe sir its another bremen your talking about coz bremen ohio is a nice lil town..........
kberry

Ashburn, VA

#5 Jan 7, 2010
Bremen, Ohio is NOT a quaint little town. One would have to actually live there to gain an accurate measurement, and Mr. Bremen here, is right on!
cherokeewindwalk er

Dublin, OH

#6 Jan 14, 2010
Well in my book Mr. Bremen is still DISTURBED and i still find bremen a quaint lil town and always will..........PERIOD!!!
Numb

Richmond, VA

#7 Jan 21, 2010
No periods it is dirty, racist and full of hill billies who think there 1/5th indian and talk about killing gay people.

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