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South Korea is a third-world country, that place where they make LG appliancs and electronics, Hyundai, Kia, Samsung etc? May have been after 1953 for a few years, but not when you were posted there. They may shy away from Amer-Asian children, as we've done with blacks and others for so long and still do, but that does not make Korea third-world. Africa, parts of Central and South America, parts of Asia and South-East Asia, yes, but NOT South Korea. Way things are going , they will soon come to us to adopt OUR babies.
"appliancs" is incorrectly spelled.
Second sentence leaves the reader wondering what you're talking about.
Capitalization of "not" is incorrect.
Capitalization of "our" is incorrect.