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Sep 21, 2012
 
Part 47: Niall: I'll set the gps. So Mia is going with zayn then right?
Me: yeah. 
Niall: so now Emily is the one alone. 
Me: I feel bad but she says it's fine .
I pulled up to the condo and emily was waiting. 
Emily: zayn already picked up Mia and offered me a ride. He looked hot. He had a black v-neck and khaki pants with red bikes and a hat like the one he wore before. Omg he's hot. 
Me: then why Didn't you go with him? 
Emily: I don't know. I figured I would set up the two of them so they could have a good time since they both have soe one else in Thier lives. Anyway. I would get carried away. 
Niall: so let's go then 
Me: yeah( I drove and followed the gps directions)
Emily: um Niall can I ask you something?
Niall: sure
Emily: has Liam ever talked about me?
Niall: not really. Sorry but I don't recall anything. 
Emily: Really... I guess he doesn't even like me as a friend. 
Me: don't worry you'll see him today. We're almost there.
Emily: But he just treats a girl so perfect. All of you do. People from America don't. There jerks. I just think he would be a great friend. 
Niall: I'll reintroduce him to you. 
Emily: no I just wanted to ask you that. I'm lucky I even hang out with you all. This is my dream. 
Me: Emily were here. Go talk to Liam. Just don't get carried away. 
Emily: but I don't know what to say. I still get all gooshy But I'll  gonna do it. 
Me: okay we'll be saying hi to everyone. 
We walked out of the car. Liam was outside alone. Perfect. 
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#353
Sep 21, 2012
 
Live While We're Young video is awesome. I learned all the words already. I am a true Directioner. Lol. Who else????? Xx

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Sep 21, 2012
 
Maya Horan OFFICIAL wrote:
Live While We're Young video is awesome. I learned all the words already. I am a true Directioner. Lol. Who else????? Xx
Me lol!(:
I already have it on my mp3

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Sep 21, 2012
 
More

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Sep 21, 2012
 
Hunter Stylinson143 wrote:
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Me lol!(:
I already have it on my mp3
How do u already hav it!!!!?!

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Sep 21, 2012
 
purelove4niall wrote:
<quoted text>How do u already hav it!!!!?!
Top secret lol
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Sep 21, 2012
 
I recorded it on my iPod and I just listen to it but u did preorder it cos I'm from the us. U could prob find it on a website that u have to illegally download music but it could be bad for ur software. So for now just record it. Xx hope I helped.
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Sep 21, 2012
 
Part 48: Emily walked up to Liam. 
Emily: hi. 
Liam: hi your Emily right?
Emily: yeah. I just wanted to say hi and everything. You look upset. What's up?
Liam: oh nothing. Cristen is in her moods. She had nothing to wear so she sort of. Well I shouldn't say anything. 
Emily: you can tell me. I know you hardly know me but I am a good listener and I dot tell other peoples secrets. But if you don't want to that's fine. 
Liam: okay.( the two sat on the bench out in front.)
Well she had nothin to wear and then she drove by herself here and I drive too and when I opened the door for me she gave me a look like I did something wrong. I don't understand, earlier today we were fine. We even watched my favorite movie. 
Emily: oh. Well I bet you didn't do anything and she just thinks you did. You care about girls so much none of you would hurt their feelings. 
Liam: thanks. 
They got up and Liam hugged Emily. 
Cristen walked out. 
Cristen: Liam! What the! What are you doing! Who the hell are you?
Emily: I don't know it's not what you think!( she ran away almost crying. 
Liam: it's not what you think Cristen. I promise. You know I would never want to hurt you. 
Cristen: but you gave her a hug. Like ours! 
Liam: that's just how I give hugs!
Cristen: oh now our hugs are just normal. We don't do anything special do we. We didn't even drive here together. 
Liam: Cristen stop. Please. I don't know why your acting like this today. I treat you more special than anyone else here. 
Cristen: I don't know Liam. I just felt so bad today. I don't even now why.
Liam: Cristen whats wrong?
Cristen: I, I, I, I don't know. I just don think we were meant to be. I know you love me so much but. The fame is getting to me too much. I can't look at you without thinking "oh it's Liam. Everyone knows this guy!"
Liam: you think of me that way?
Cristen: no but,
Liam:(really sad) you said I was everything to you. I believed you and I gave you my all. I tried my best to make you the happiest a girl could be. But you just think of me as that guy everyone knows?
Cristen: no. Lets go inside. Can we please talk about this later?
Liam: I don't know Cristen. I would never hurt a girl physically or emotionally but you really made me rethink everything youve ever said to me. 
Cristen: Liam-
Liam: let's just go in. It's our last big party of the trip. and according to you it might feel like backstage since you see me as a celebrity when I thought you said I was a normal guy who is the sweetest to a girl. 
Cristen: ok.(really guilty)
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Sep 21, 2012
 
Yeah well keep Doin what we do yeah pretending that we're cool cos we know it's true.!!!!
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Sep 22, 2012
 
Part 49: we said hi to everyone. Zayn and Mia seemed to be having fun. Amanda offered us Homemade cookies and other food she made. Louis gave us a tour of the house. 
Louis: and last but not least the baby's room. 
Niall: WTF? Amanda is pregnant?
Louis: hahahahahahahaha! Tricked you two. No its actually an empty room that the owner left a crib in. We decided to trick everyone with it. 
Me: oh wow Louis. That's just crazy you had us worried. 
Louis: well what if she was? You wouldnt appreciate your adopted niece Niall? 
Niall: well I would but. I know your older but god man. A kid? 
Me: ha I know. I wouldn't even think about that until I'm at least 21. AT LEAST. and not even then probably. 
Niall: I never really thought about it. I never even thought of a nice name. Liam has. He likes Taylor I think. But he has been with Cristen for 3 years and was planning on asking her to move in with him permanently unlike when they moved together for like a month and were renting. 
Louis: I know. He almost bough a house yesterday as a surprise. But Liam wasn't sure if she would like it.
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Sep 22, 2012
 
Continued...

We were done with our tour and headed downstairs. Sydney and Harry were talking with Liam. Emily was talking to Amanda. Cristen Just got out of the bathroom. Mia and Zayn were laughing and then they just talked. 
Zayn: oh you Got some food right there. 
Mia: did I get it?
Zayn: no right there. 
Mia: where? I'll go to the bathroom. 
Zayn: no Ill get it. It's gone. 
Mia and Zayn got lost into each other's eyes. 
Mia: well thanks. Um what was it?(blushing)
Zayn: just a crumb. (smiling awkwardly)
Mia: thanks for letting me come with you. I would think you would be mad If Emily said no. Everyone likes her more but we are bffs.
Zayn: oh no problem. And don't think that. I think your a really great person. And your confident with no makeup! Look at you. Only lipgloss. 
Mia: yeah. Thanks. I don't really like that stuff. People say I should use it but-
Zayn: there wrong. But there wrong girls look great with our it. 
Mia: yeah. 
Zayn: I know right hehe.(akward laugh)
They leaned closer together. But Mia said. "I shouldn't be doing this but-"
Zayn: me either ( he leaned closer)
They kissed. when they were done they looked at each other akward. 
Mia: I'm sorry. I just I guess I got a bit carried away. 
Zayn: it was my fault I kept going when you said we should stop.
Everyone stared at them for a little.
Emily looked away. So did I. 
Mia grabbed her purse and walked faslty out of the house. Zayn got up and told her to stop. But she kept going. 

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Sep 22, 2012
 
:O

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Sep 22, 2012
 
Keep goin!
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Sep 22, 2012
 
amazing keep going(:
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Sep 22, 2012
 
U asked for more...

Part 50: Mia and Zayn:
Zayn: I am SO sorry. 
Mia: Someone is going to tell Isabelle and she is going to hate me. I don't know what I am going to tell my boyfriend. I can't keep this secret from him. I would be a total jerk. 
Zayn: I don't know what to do either. I feel terrible. I really like you but I love Isabelle and I can't just dump her. 
Mia: you what? Oh no you like me more than I thought. 
Zayn: I meant well I do like you. Your perfect in every way. But ehat about Isabelle. I would be a total jerk. All the headlines would say "zayn dumps isabelle for another girl!" 
Mia: zayn wait. I can't just go and dump Jacob. He's in Malibu. He already asked me to prom. We are a very happy couple. I'm sorry zayn. 
Zayn: Mia I should be the one apologizing. I am the worst boyfriend and friend ever. 
Mia: don't say that. Then you would be describing me too (smile)
Zayn: no. I started it. I got carried away. 
Mia: let's go back there and have a good time. Well act like it never happened. Since Jacob is in Malibu and I'm here I bet w did some naughty things but that's how life is we forgive an dot tell people things. He probably kissed someone there too. He always talked about the girls there. And know he's going. I kissed you and I won't tell him unless he tells me something. 
Zayn: alright. Technically it was. Just a kiss. Like a peck on the check. I bet Isabelle kissed someone too. Not now but on our tours and things. 
Mia: don't underestimate her. I could underestimate Jacob because he has even mentioned that stuff before he left. And he's a Jacob But he is a weird guy. Hell do anything. But he knows I am his girlfriend. I guess you can say that. 
Zayn: let's go in. 

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Sep 22, 2012
 
I just read the whole fanfic it's AmaZAYN!!!!!!!!!!

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Sep 22, 2012
 
Ilove it!!

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Sep 23, 2012
 
Hey maya it amazayn!!:)
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Sep 29, 2012
 
Part 51: Mia and Zayn came back inside. 
Harry: there back! Yay!
Sydney: oh leave them alone. 
Harry: sorrrrrrrry
Emily ran up to Mia: are you okay? 
Mia:stop it don't mention it! I'm fine!
Me:(to Niall) I'll be right back.
Niall: okay. 
Me:(to Mia) so-
Mia: I'm okay alright? Can I just forget it happened? 
Zayn over heard and walked slowly upstairs alone. 
Me: sorry. 
Mia: zayn-????
Amanda: he went upstairs. 
Niall: he seemed a bit sad. 
Mia: oh God.(she walked upstairs)
Zayn: I heard how you felt about our kiss. I know it's over with but I thought you sort of liked me. But you sounded like you hate me and the kiss
Mia: no zayn. I just wanted to be alone. I'm sorry today didnt go on as planned. 
Zayn: I'm a very stupid person. 
Mia: no your not. Your handsome and everything else. Isabelle loves you. But like I said lets go have fun. 
Zayn: give me a second. please?
Mia: I'll be downstairs. 
Liam: how is he?
Mia: he'll be down in a minute. 
Cristen was still on the couch alone. Louis: is he okay though?
Mia: yeah. 
Zayn walked down and was back to normal. 

I'm gonna pre order the deluxe cd right now! The order keeps faking I try all the time even when pre order was first available but I'm using a different computer tonight lets hope it works. Lol love the new song. My friends and I already have hand signals for lwwy. We do an l then 2 w then a y. With our fingers. Lol.:)

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Amazing as usual

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