Liam Payne fanfic Don't give up in us

[Jasmin_Horan]

I was writing a letter to my friends back in Texas, since i moved to London when my dad (      ) came in "Jasmin can you go to the store and get some stuff that I wrote down on this list" my dad said "but I barley know the streets what if I get lost and i never come back" I said trying to get out of going to the store "Dont worry the store is only a couple of blocks down and this will help you learn the street names so when you walk from school...." my dad said before he was cut off by my screaming "WAIT... Did you just say walk from school, I can't walk from School I'll look all Lonley I don't know anybody here I have no friends" I said angry  "well I'm sorry but i work at the time that you  get off school" he said and I could tell he was starting to get annoyed "but thats not fair I'm going to get made fun of because Im walking alone" I said "but that will give you a chance to help you make new friends by walking alone and they won't make fun of you" he said in a soft but annoyed voice "yea they will and how would you know your like 50 it's been like decades since you went to school" I said "it has not been decades since I went to school and to let you know I'm 35 and just because your mom isnt with us you can act like that" he said  "I don't want to bring my mom into this, just give me the list I don't want to talk about this anymore" I said handing out my hand so he can give me the list "are you sure you don't want to talk about it" he said "yea I'm sure just give me the list already" I said trying to hold back my tears. I was walking on the street while I was listening to music from my phone when I finally found the store I went inside and had trouble finding everything on the list and I was looking at a brand and walking when I bumped into someone i dropped the item that was in my hand and fell to the ground "I'm terribly sorry I was playing around with my friends and I was walking backwards when I bumped into you I'm so sorry" they said "its ok it's not just your fault I was listening to music and looking at the brand and didn't look where I was going" I said not looking up because I was picking up the glass "Ohh don't worry about the glass they will pick it up later and I couldn't help notice but your not from here are you I could tell by your accent" he said in a soft voice bending over to help me pick up the glass "well no actually Im from America I just moved here and I have no idea what kind of stuff I'm supposed to be looking for" I said in a frustrated voice "Well if you want I can help you find the stuff your looking for and in return you give me your number so I can text you" he said in a sweet voice "I'm sorry but I don't know you very well and I don't give my number to strangers" I said "well my name is Liam Payne im in a band and I want to help you look for the stuff your looking for" he said "Liam Payne really, I actually know somebody that is in a band and well I don't actually know him but he is famous" I said "really he famous and is he in a band named One Direction" he said I looked up and it was Liam "OMG, it your Liam Payne from One Direction" I said supprised "yea it's me but I want you to be friends with me not the famous Liam Payne" he said in a sweet voice "fine you can help me with this list but I won't give you my number just yet I still don't know you very well" I said over joyed "ok well if you want me to help you look around and find this stuff let me go introduce you To the rest of the band" he said grabbing my hand and pulling me..
Please don't comment if it's bad first time thank you

[Liam_is_my_Life]

no this amazing that I had to comment plz keep going :) post the next part now :)

[Samantha Payne]

Really good!! Keep going :)

[Hunter Stylinson143]

Love it

[Breanna]

It's extremely good! Please continue!

[Jasmin_Horan]

"ok let's go meet them" I said, Liam looks at me and smiles "well here they are Niall, Zayn, Harry, and Louis and this is Jasmin" Liam said "hello, it's very nice to meet you Jasmin" Zayn said "thank you it's a pleasure to meet you guys" I said trying not to freak out or pass out "Harry while you through that ball I was about to catch it but then Zayn pushed me into Jasmin and she needs help finding everything, as you guys can tell she just moved here she's from America" Liam said "well of course we can help" Niall said "you mean we will help her because Niall over here is not aloud to do the food shopping because he will bye way to much food" Louis said "Ohh I know I'm a big fan of you guys" I said "really, well let's not talk about being famous or being a fan lets just talk about normal people stuff" Liam said "ok well lets get started with this list then" I said looking at the list "ok just let us get everything we know this store like the back of our hands" Niall said "ok Me, Louis, and Zayn go this way, Niall and Harry go that way and Liam and Jasmin go that way" Harry said "ok so why did you move to London?" Liam asked "well my mom died and my dad got a job here as an architect" I said trying not to think about my mom "I'm sorry if that offended you, I didn't mean to bring this up, I didn't know that; that happened..." he said trying not to make it worse "don't worry it's been years and you didn't know so it's ok" I said "ok well lets change the subject before I start crying instead of you" Liam said, I laughed a little "ok, so why do you want my number" I said "well so I can apologize for bumping into you and you seem like a very nice person and so we can keep in touch and maybe hangout" Liam said smiling, Liam started getting closer and closer to me until his chest was pressed to mine I thought he was going to to kiss me but instead he reaches his hand out into the shelf and finds the first thing on the list he hands it to me he was still looking at me  "will this one due I would help you find the other one but it seems that they are out of that brand" Liam said still pressed to my chest "that will due" I said not trying to freak out "well on with the list" he said grabbing my hand I stopped in front of a cart  "hold on I got a better and faster way to get around the store" I said and Liam smiled "what's your plan" Liam said with a look in his eyes "well get in and I'll show you" I said smiling "ok let's do this" Liam said, while I was running Liam was screaming and laughing, until one of the employees stop right in front of us and I couldn't stop until we ran into the shelf full of flour me and Liam laughed even though we were both in pain and covered with flour we both got up and Liam through flour at my face I spit it out and through some at his face, the next we knew we both were having a flour war until I figured out that Liam's hands were wrapped around me. That moment the guys came running up to us "what happened" Niall said eating a Nutty Bar "well as you can see me and Jasmin had a flour fight" Liam said smiling and letting go of me in a hurry and just looking at me "well is it to late to join" Zayn said throwing a hand full of flour at me and Liam, well me and Liam just looked at eachother and started throwing flour at Zayn and the guys until the employees started getting mad and had to call our parents "hey dad can you come down to the store me and some friends got into a little bit of a situation and bring some clothes for me please" I said hanging up the phone.....

[Breanna]

Love it do much! Please keep going! It's amaZAYN!

[Mona]

FOUND IT!!!! sorry it took me a while finding your fanfic woooow this is great lol i laughed alot durig the whole flour part btw would you mind telling me wat pert i got im confused hahaha

[Jasmin_Horan]

Mona wrote:

FOUND IT!!!! sorry it took me a while finding your fanfic woooow this is great lol i laughed alot durig the whole flour part btw would you mind telling me wat pert i got im confused hahaha

Lmao thanks you will turn up later when me and Liam start hanging out a lot and ur going to be my Bestfriend u havnt showed up yet

[Hunter Stylinson143]

Lovee

[1D lover]

Plz post more!!!! Soon:)

[Jessie]

Hey babe!!!!

[Rebecca]

Keep going please

[Renee]

Love it!!!

[Lena]

Keep going!!!!!!

[Samantha Payne]

Loveee ittt!!! <33

[Jasmin_Horan]

"My dad is on his way" I said trying not to laugh and heading torwards Liam and the gang "so here's my number like you asked" I said handing it to Liam, Liam smiled "why did you decide to give it to me now" Liam said looking at me "well I know enough from what happened right now" I said smiling  "well maybe do you want to hangout and go out to eat" Liam said kinda nervous "I would love to" I said Liam was about to kiss when my dad came in "Honey are you ok" my dad said holding me "I'm fine but your embarrassing me in front of my friends" I said trying to get away "who are they, what's there names, wait arnt they that boy band that your like obbsessed about" he said looking at them "DAD, just act cool and stop talking about my obbsestion with them" I said looking at him with big eyes "guys this is my dad Mark, Dad this is Liam, Zayn, Niall, Harry and Louis" I said as I was pointing at them "it's a pleasure to meet you" the guys said as they shook hands with my dad "well we got to go I have to get back to work I was in a conference when you called me, but it was really nice to meet you guys" my dad said waving and turning around "bye guys" I said waving "dad why did you hug me and didn't let go you embarrassed me in front of ONE DIRECTION" I Said looking at him "I'm sorry I just got really worried becaue you have never done this and why did you do this I mean you never do anything bad" my dad said kinda angry  " well dad ppl change when thier mom dies and you move almost half way across the world to somewhere you have no friends" I said walking home "well I dont care now get in the car" he said yelling "no I want to walk home since it will help me find my way" I said running and putting my earbuds in and then I was looking down to find a song for a run when I bumped into someone, i looked up it was Liam....

[Mona]

oh i love this so much hahah

[Hunter Stylinson143]

Jasmin_Horan wrote:

"My dad is on his way" I said trying not to laugh and heading torwards Liam and the gang "so here's my number like you asked" I said handing it to Liam, Liam smiled "why did you decide to give it to me now" Liam said looking at me "well I know enough from what happened right now" I said smiling "well maybe do you want to hangout and go out to eat" Liam said kinda nervous "I would love to" I said Liam was about to kiss when my dad came in "Honey are you ok" my dad said holding me "I'm fine but your embarrassing me in front of my friends" I said trying to get away "who are they, what's there names, wait arnt they that boy band that your like obbsessed about" he said looking at them "DAD, just act cool and stop talking about my obbsestion with them" I said looking at him with big eyes "guys this is my dad Mark, Dad this is Liam, Zayn, Niall, Harry and Louis" I said as I was pointing at them "it's a pleasure to meet you" the guys said as they shook hands with my dad "well we got to go I have to get back to work I was in a conference when you called me, but it was really nice to meet you guys" my dad said waving and turning around "bye guys" I said waving "dad why did you hug me and didn't let go you embarrassed me in front of ONE DIRECTION" I Said looking at him "I'm sorry I just got really worried becaue you have never done this and why did you do this I mean you never do anything bad" my dad said kinda angry " well dad ppl change when thier mom dies and you move almost half way across the world to somewhere you have no friends" I said walking home "well I dont care now get in the car" he said yelling "no I want to walk home since it will help me find my way" I said running and putting my earbuds in and then I was looking down to find a song for a run when I bumped into someone, i looked up it was Liam....

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[Samantha Payne]

Moreee pleaseeeee :)