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Directioner4life

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Sep 22, 2012
 
"Like what you see?" harry winked. I laughed i didn't realize i was staring at him this whole time. "just thinking.." i said returning to my daze. "anyways, lets find the other lads!" niall said. "c'mon!" i motioned for harry to link arms with one of us. Of course, he chooses me. Well, now i know that that was a mistake. He linked arms with me and winked at me. Great...a flirt...this should be interesting.. I thought. I smiled at him, and we began to walk. All three of us looking like fools. But i don't really care. These fools make me smile. For real. I don't think i've ever been happy like this before, to have friends. that are boys. Cute boys. British boys. Yeah...i don't want this dream to end. "you okay love?" harry asked snapping me out of my thoughts. "yeah..i'm fine." i smiled. "let me guess...just thinking?" he questioned. "yep.." i said. "well you're cute when you think..." he whispered in my ear. I narrowed my eyes at him as if i were staring into his soul." don't start curly.." i said nudging him on the shoulder. "Interesting convo you guys are having.." niall said said, with his fake annoyed voice. We were still walking around, searching for the others. "wait..,guys! Over there!" harry tugged in my arm, pointing to an ice cream cart, with an arguing liam. "c'mon guys!" niall said pulling us in liam's direction. We all ran like fools, over to him. "LIAM!!" niall shouted releasing my arm, and running. I stayed linked with harry. "stayed with me huh?" harry said grinning. i looked at him. Messing up his curls." hey!" he said fixing his hair. "you'll come around..they ALLWAYS come around." he winked." oh, quit it!" i said releasing my self form hi walking over to niall." hey!! I thought you liked me!" he said with a puppy dog face. I walked to him, and took his hand, and dragged him to niall, and liam. "score for hazza!" harry said fist pumping the air. I rolled my eyes, and started to run. We got to the cart, and saw, liam arguing with nialler, and and a man, who i'm assuming sells the ice cream.

Continue? Sorry if it got to the point where you are all bored.:(
I usually copy paste the parts, and it all got deleted! And it was getting interesting!:(
No worries though, i will continue!
Please don't forget to give feedback please! <3 ;)
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#126
Sep 22, 2012
 
Ok....I'm going to say this as calmly as possible.....PLZ WRITE MORE SOON !!......that is all
claraloves1d

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#127
Sep 22, 2012
 
Its really good plz keep going
Directioner4life

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#128
Sep 22, 2012
 
Baileigh wrote:
Ok....I'm going to say this as calmly as possible.....PLZ WRITE MORE SOON !!......that is all
LOL! sure will! ;)

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#129
Sep 22, 2012
 
Mmmooooorrrreee

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#130
Sep 22, 2012
 
I am officially hooked on this story write more!!!!
Directioner4life

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#131
Sep 22, 2012
 
You guys are sooo sweet. Just for you....i'm gonna post more! <3 ;)
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Sep 22, 2012
 
"what's going on?" i asked niall. " i wanted ice cream, and the man won't give me a fork instead of a spoon!" liam whined. "what is it with spoons?" i asked him confused. "liam has a fear of spoons." niall answered. "oh..then, can we please have a fork instead of a spoon?please?" i asked the man. "we sell ice cream...that means we only have spoons....not forks." the man said calmly. Thought for a minute. " liam, why don't you just get it in a cone insted of a cup?" i asked him. " fine, but only because there is no other way..."he said with a slight frown. "Cheer up!" i said hugging liam. "p.s. we found you!!!" i smiled. "that's not fair though! I was getting ice cream!" he protested." yeah in the middle of hide and seek.." niall said. We all laughed, and started walking again. Liam linked arms with niall, and ate his ice cream. And yes, we had to make him link arms. He thought he would look like a fool, but the truth is, we all are fools, so it doesn't matter. We all searched around for zayn. We decided to split up, because there was too many of us. Liam chose niall, and so i got stuck with harry. He wasn't that bad, it was just his flirtyness. "i GUESS, you are with me!" he said taking my hand."as if i have a choice.." i mumbled."what was that?" he said with a grin. "nothing!" i said smiling." that's what i thought." he winked. He has to stop that."quit it!" i yelled. "quit what? Being adorable?" he said touching his curls. "no, Being creepy!" i joked. "you know you can't resist this!" he said motioning to himself. I rolled my eyes."actually,i can resist." i teased.

Continue? Thanks for the support!
Love ya all! <3 ;)
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#134
Sep 22, 2012
 
Haaha funny more please
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#135
Sep 22, 2012
 
This made me smile like a total idiot;) love it!
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#136
Sep 22, 2012
 
Write more I love it!
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#137
Sep 22, 2012
 
Awesome story you are a great writer and need to keep writing more ur awesome
P.S LIVE WHILE WERE YOUNG
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#138
Sep 22, 2012
 
PLEASE! I'm the one who is smiling like an idiot!!
You guys are seriously too sweet!! <3 ;)
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#139
Sep 23, 2012
 
Write more write more! Love it

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#140
Sep 23, 2012
 
More !!:)
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#141
Sep 23, 2012
 
Plz write more today I luv it its awesome
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#142
Sep 23, 2012
 
Pweez write more!!!!!!!!!!
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#143
Sep 23, 2012
 
That was awesome !! Ahh Harry the flirt..has a nice ring to it ;)
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#144
Sep 23, 2012
 
Baileigh wrote:
That was awesome !! Ahh Harry the flirt..has a nice ring to it ;)
Haha!:D IKR?!?
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#145
Sep 23, 2012
 
I'll try to post more, maybe later, i kinda have writer's block, and i have homework too.:(
I will try though! ;)

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