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Since: Jan 11

Highland City, FL

#1 Apr 3, 2011
Thus to you i look when i long for true love,
to you i look, your hand i take hold of,
to me you are everything, the reason i smile,
lay me down upon the earth, kiss me for a while,
you are my sunshine in the days of subdue,
you shoulder to cry on is tried and true,
ive kissed your lips time and time again,
ive made love to you every now and then,
ive looked into your eyes, gazing for sometime,
and yet i still dream to lay close to you all during the night time,
and rise in the morning from your arms, bare,
the clock ticks on, lets continue our love affair,
do the thing we have not yet done,
make a list check them off one by one,
doing things the world has undreamed of.

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