Really Bad Poetry
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Stephanie

Los Angeles, CA

#56 Feb 24, 2011
Everyone on here is so good! i wish i could write like that.

Since: Dec 10

Brisbane, Australia

#57 Apr 1, 2011
"BEATIN' THE PLAN."

Smokin' a joint at 5 inthe morn
I've no idea how my red shirt got torn
Crap last night I got no sleep
And some crazy jerk just scratched my jeep
I drank the last drop of Petron, just now
It sorta helped me wash my crispies down
So glad I don't have no work today
I couldn't go in like this anyway...
I smell to all heaven of sex and booze
It was a real lot of fun, but my hips are bruised
Fridays always seem to melt into Saturdays
What the fuck time is it, anyway ?
Not that I care, I have no plans
Perhaps I do this all again......

~Adrian DeVine.

from his Book....."Poetry in Dark Places"

“Hi! I'm no longer here. ”

Since: Feb 08

Location hidden

#58 Apr 16, 2011
Adrian_Devine wrote:
"BEATIN' THE PLAN."
Smokin' a joint at 5 inthe morn
I've no idea how my red shirt got torn
Crap last night I got no sleep
And some crazy jerk just scratched my jeep
I drank the last drop of Petron, just now
It sorta helped me wash my crispies down
So glad I don't have no work today
I couldn't go in like this anyway...
I smell to all heaven of sex and booze
It was a real lot of fun, but my hips are bruised
Fridays always seem to melt into Saturdays
What the fuck time is it, anyway ?
Not that I care, I have no plans
Perhaps I do this all again......
~Adrian DeVine.
from his Book....."Poetry in Dark Places"
This is actually one of mine. He's butchered it up a little as usual. hahaahahaaa

"Poetry in Dark Places", eh??

Since: Dec 10

Brisbane, Australia

#59 Apr 18, 2011
short_b wrote:
<quoted text>
This is actually one of mine. He's butchered it up a little as usual. hahaahahaaa
"Poetry in Dark Places", eh??
Yeah, he posted this poem on another forum and said it was from "his book".
I wonder, is it legal to publish a book full of other poeple's poetry?

"Plagiarism in Dark Places"
ha-ha-ha-ha

“Hi! I'm no longer here. ”

Since: Feb 08

Location hidden

#60 Apr 18, 2011
Adrian_Devine wrote:
<quoted text>
Yeah, he posted this poem on another forum and said it was from "his book".
I wonder, is it legal to publish a book full of other poeple's poetry?
"Plagiarism in Dark Places"
ha-ha-ha-ha
Yes, his stupid book. He once tried to tell me that his whole interaction with me was part of an experiment of sorts to write a book. He's so full of shit!

Plagiarism in Dark Places..... PERFECT!!!!:)
Shirley Smothers

San Antonio, TX

#61 May 17, 2011
My really bad poem

Deep Down Inside

Deep down inside
I have no pride.

Deep down inside
I've taken the slide.

Deep down inside
my soul the demons
have fried.

Deep down inside.
Jaz

Minneapolis, MN

#62 Dec 2, 2011
Mommy of four wrote:
Who are all these people?
I haven't seen some in years.
Why am I laying in this satin bed
and those I love are standing over me crying?
There are flowers everywhere!
Why are those flowers on my bed?
What has happened here,
What is going on?
I remember the pain
The crushing pain
I remember the dark
It got so very quiet.
My kids were crying and screaming
My husband screamed at me "WHY".
Lord, are you taking me home
To the golden clouds and beautiful sky?
I wasn't done with this life,
always dreamed of grand babies and vacations.
Nothing is going to happen how
All the people can do is stand there and stare..
I see mama and daddy, and grandma, too.
Hey, there's Lamar, from my Junior year of school, he's been gone since 1972.
And the doctor that made sure I was well during my childhood, is also floating over there.
I'm not afraid, I'm not scared, just a little sad
because my family will miss me so.
My sisters and brother seem to be angry with me because I would never do as I was told.
If I had then I feel I wouldn't be here in the bed of satan and so cold.
So many people, so many dear friends, so many familiar faces that passed over many years ago.
God is taking me Home and I have to leave my old life.
If only I had listened to the ones that loved me so, they wouldn't have to let me go.
When I get to heaven, it's the most amazing sight anyone could ever imagine. There's birds and deer and little babies running everywhere.
There's beautiful songs and the music is so calming. Not a fear, no sorrow, no rain, no aches, no pain.
I made the right decision to come her today,
Though I will miss everyone so much
Life ended on earth for me,
But I have come Home where I belong..
There's a tree over there where I can sit and wait for my loved ones to come to me when their time is up on earth.
I can even see my sons and daughter, going through my stuff.
I told them they could have that, and those and all that. Why are they boxing my angels? They were all for my friends.
My husband is on the sofa, crying his heart out. Why did my baby leave me? Why did she have to go? His heart is heavy, his soul and spririt is broken. He doesn't understand, my time was up.
Time will heal the broken hearts and my family will begin to live again. Just let me rest in peace, until we meet again..
Thats awkward ??

Since: Dec 12

Wakefield, UK

#63 Dec 12, 2012
I saw that the last comment cam from October of last year,
This forums feeling lonely and forgotten I fear.
So I chose to have my say,
With my own poem and word play.
"Come back and visit me" it crys
Come people and lets be wise.
Lets all join together and write some poems

Damn! That has no rhymes!:( I was on a flow then!

Anyway, thought I would try re-light the flame that was on here and sadly has disappeared :(

Since: Dec 12

Wakefield, UK

#64 Dec 12, 2012
I wanted to share this poem I wrote last year...

When you are feeling low
I will be there to lift you up
When you feel like falling
I will be there to catch you

If you need someone to rely on,
A rock in which you can lean on,
No matter when or where,
I will be there.

When you feel like life has become to bad,
I will be there to give you a hand,
When your heart feels heavy,
I will be there to take some of your pain

Trust me with your darkest secrets,
Words you wish not to be spoke,
A promise is what I will give you,
A lifetime of those words unknown

Put some of your weight upon me,
I'll be next to you through it all,
When you feel like you are lonely,
All you need is to give me a call
I will be there
Shirley Smothers

San Antonio, TX

#65 Feb 18, 2013
Nothing, Not

I am
nothing,
I was
nothing,
I will be
nothing.

I am
not,
I was
not,
I will be
not.

Shirley Smothers

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