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shweta and nishant

Auckland, New Zealand

#419 Jun 4, 2013
just love you
adorable

Ashburn, VA

#420 Jun 11, 2013
i dnt blame u bt goodthngs come and go
anithembile

Ashburn, VA

#421 Jul 11, 2013
I realy like actaully I loved it.I'm also a poet bt yours brought every happiness,pain and love to me and your man surely will love this too,if he doesn't damn he's stupid. Any way you are such a good poet
sam

Chaguanas, Trinidad and Tobago

#422 Jul 27, 2013
I like ur first poem i feel the same way about my boyfriend,also if ur thinking of kill ur self you need serious help because ur life on this earth is worth more than you think besides their are plenty other fishes in the sea.so cheer up ok is you and this gay is really ment to be forever u will be so turn that frown up side down.
john

Chaguanas, Trinidad and Tobago

#423 Jul 27, 2013
This poem made me smile it brought joy to my heart am sure ur boyfriend will like it.ur such a great poet you go girl one day you will
write a book and become a great poet
TillyMarie

Akron, OH

#426 Nov 24, 2013
Wow....I haven't been on in so long...forgot my login n everything. Its been years. But hello everyone I'm back and I appreciate all the lovely comments. I'm Shantisa, I started this forum. I have written plent since, and have gotton sooo much better. If anyone is interested:)
Barbara

United States

#427 Feb 16, 2014
Shantisa wrote:
who knew i'd fall in love again
i never thought i'd see this day
i guess my heart has learned to forgive
and the thoughts of 'him' are fading away
you dont know how you make me feel
every word you say brings a smile to my heart
your my everything and i love you so much
i hope that we never fall apart
I wish i could be there with you
i wanna make you happy
i'll do whatever it takes
to make us better than any love story
god you drive me crazy
waiting for you to get online
but it doesnt matter
cuz im so lucky that your mine
i dont care how far away you are
that doesnt stop me from wanting to kiss you
i wanna hear you laugh again
our love is a spell that no one can undo
your amazing and i feel you should know it
your forever in my dreams
i love you so much but have no idea how to show it
getting you out of mind is harder than it seems
do you even feel the same way?
no ones ever really loved me
i hope you dont think im strange
but god you make me so happy
you make my life so much better
and becuz of you i dont wanna die
god i hope you love me too
everytime i think of you i start to cry
i just hate going through so much pain
please dont hurt me
i dont think i could go through it agian
without you i feel so unhappy
i just want you to know
that i love you with all of my heart
and i want you to trust me like i trust you
and maybe someday our love will be like art
I LOVE YOU NATHAN!!! <333333333333
nathan who
Colorfull

Calgary, Canada

#429 Mar 31, 2014
What the hell is wrong with u people u need to be so fk rude..!! U guys dOnt get it ..that's what poem or for idiot
Colorfull

Calgary, Canada

#430 Mar 31, 2014
I wish u the best be strong keep ur head up never give up ur awsome
Bitch

Stephen, Canada

#431 May 28, 2014
Shantisa
i really love ur poems and i was wondering do u think u could help me out witha poem im trying to make one for my fiance but i cant think of anything that would be perfect but ur first poem i read was my fave
Nicole

Chicago, IL

#432 Jun 26, 2014
I don't know if i should run and hide disappear from this earth,
its like waking up with this unknown curse
Where someone that i need when i'm feeling my worst.
Drop dead, diving in i'm goin head first,
people don't understand me with my life situations.
I know i ain't the only one word across the nation,
self mutilation so i can get my concentration.
Seems like imma start my new generation.
I'm livin life in distress,
my life is such a fuckin mess.
Call me a failure cause the lack os my success.
Even been neglected by my family and friends,
debating if i should be putting my life in to an end.
My emotions are for real,
they are not pretend.
You won't know how i feel until the very end.
Loneliness and stress,
depression to my arrest.
Will last forever,
will indicate a symbol for my pleasure.
Its something that i will treasure.

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