my poem please tell me what you think...

my poem please tell me what you think, it is my way of getting all feelings out

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Since: Jan 11

Highland City, FL

#1 Apr 3, 2011
You Think
Sometimes we hurt those we love the most, and sometimes the ones who love us hurt us even more,
when that person just abandons you, youíre left crying on the floor,
they say they love you but they have to do whatís best,
They think that leaving will help you but it leaves you more in a mess,
Because you think of how no longer you can kiss them again,
the pain you have without them can be seen even when you try to hide it with a grin,
how you wish you could just spend another day with this person that you love,
The one person you have so many good memories of,
The one person who you can never ever forget,
that they still love you is something you wish they would admit,
you think of how surprised you were when they said this love should end,
When that person told you not to long ago that your life together had just began,
How you talked and talked about how great this person could make you feel,
you just know that the feelings you had for each other were so real,
you wonder how someone who loved you so much could so easily withdraw,
how even when in a crowded room this person was the only one you saw,
you just know in your mind that love like this is very rare,
you donít want to move on because you feel like no one can compare,
We always hurt the ones we love, but they can hurt us even more,
the place they had in your heart will forever be left sore.

League City, TX

#2 May 21, 2011
This is amazing good job!(;

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