Poem of Exasperation. Please comment.

Poem of Exasperation. Please comment.

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Since: Nov 12

Knoxville, TN

#1 Nov 1, 2012
Why am I being ridiculous,
And throwing all my dreams into a guy?

He doesnít drive a fancy car,
He doesnít own a fancy house,

He canít make me better when I feel sad,
He canít say Ďhey thereí and get down on one knee,

He doesnít notice the things I do for him,
He doesnít understand the way I care,

He gets mad when I love him too much,
And just want him by my side.

Instead he says I scare him,
Like heís the one thatís got something to lose.

Maybe this is not a match made by diving intervention,
Maybe this just another wave in the sea,

But I love him so
Why must he not love me the same,

He says I give him no space to love,
Maybe I need someone who can love me the way I am,

He says my ass is too big, my boobs are too small,
Maybe I need someone who can just love me the way I am,

Why oh why am I being ridiculous,
And throwing all my dreams into a guy?

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