my poem
lumgurl124

Brainerd, MN

#1 Aug 12, 2011
hey yea i know this is stupid ._. but can you
guys judge my poem ?

you stand tall and lean
almost unseen
are you scared to show ?
or is that how the rules go
i dont know where your from
i dont know where you hide
or is it just the fact
your a stranger of my mind
i start to have my doubts
i start to not believe
and the thought always wonders
have you decided to leave ?
a guardian of my dreams
making my wondering mind
go to extremes
surely im going insane
so ill keep it to myself
ill keep it in my soul
how much u meen to me
my protector of my dreams.

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