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EZRIAL POPO

Surrey, Canada

#21 Mar 8, 2010
I ONCE HAD A BROTHER WHO WAS SO SAD
HE LIKED THAT HES BEST FRIEND WAS SO GLAD
HE WAS GLAD TO BE HAPPY
SO HAPPY HE FARTED
HE FARTED TILL NO ONE COULD BREATHE
I THINK HE SHOULD USE POOP SPRY TO MAKE THE YUMMY SMELL TURN AWAY INTO THE BRIGHT BRIGHT LIGHT ;)
POEM BY SSKD!
COMPASSBOY

Liverpool, UK

#23 Mar 14, 2010
This piece does have sentiment. Thou does"nt seem to have any structure and poor punctuation so It Is hard to follow any intended rhythm. Hope this helps.
CHARLES TIMBROOK

Martinsburg, WV

#24 Sep 26, 2010
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Love is just a word,,until its shown to you in way's its never been shown to you before, Anyone can say I LOVE YOU,,And some will fall for that word really easy,,, And then wonder why they just got hurt,,,, There is more then 1 word in love 4 to be right on,,, commitment,,respect,,honor,,fa ithful,,,Love will be blind until all 4 of these words come together in the right relationships,,, Just becoming romantic is not love,,, Just a way to get laid faster,,, But some fall for that too..( romantic ) Roses,,dinner,,candy,,And a ring don't mean shit,,, until,, You could trust this person with your life,,, The mean-n of
I WOULD DIE FOR YOU,,, Take my last breath my love for i would die for no other but only for the one who holds my heart in her hand,,For her and only her i would die in her arms,,,
CHARLES TIMBROOK

Martinsburg, WV

#25 Sep 26, 2010
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One to die for would be the one in your heart ,, The one that holds your heart in there hands and to watch over it with there own life,, To give there last breath to heal your pain ,, To hold your hand and understand your pains in every way,,, This would be the way of a true love ,, To wake up knowing every minite could be your last day to tell her you love her,, This day i have commeted my life to love and chairsh her for who she is and not on what she has done or has done,,, For if she was to be on a death bed i would fall to her needs and love her with every thing invested in my heart And to give my life only for her to live and see a long life ,,, My life is nothing without her in it,, For this i say,, I was blessed to be the one who loved her so much that I died for the glory of this buitiful woman that god has let me know for 25 years,,, Her and only her would make my life complete and fulfield of the love that i can only tell you about,, I cant give it to you ,, You can only find it in your heart to love her as much as i do,,, so let it be said this day I will never love any one as much as you .
paige is a moron

Omaha, NE

#26 Jul 10, 2011
Grow up! You think it is cute or creative to write poetry like that? The topic is offensive and the poetry itself is horrendous. Now I need a knife....

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